Date: 03/12/23 07:04 pm Title: One: Weirded Out.
I have left a review on other fics of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too! What a ride it was.
Date: 01/16/17 04:19 pm Title: Twenty Three: Nine Months Later and a Happy Ever After.
this was a really good story!
u should do a sequel to this!
Date: 10/08/16 09:16 am Title: Twenty Three: Nine Months Later and a Happy Ever After.
I hate myself for avoiding this treasure so long! oh my god!!! I LOVED IT! it was so fucking amazing, each chapter was masterpiece! and this last one? Don't you dare say that you can't write smut ever again! It was perfect! lalala thanks for this story! :3
Date: 12/05/14 02:01 am Title: Twenty Three: Nine Months Later and a Happy Ever After.
Don't be down on yourself about the smut! I've tried writing it myself and I (and every other person who's at least attempted writing it) know exactly how hard it is. Hella hard! You did amazing. ;)
I read this story straight through and love love LOVED it!!!! I had to take a whole week off from THF (appalling, right?!) and being welcomed back by this was perfect! I've had it on my tracked stories for forever to be honest and I'm so glad I decided to finally read it. It's stories like these that make me willing to take the risk of reading new fictions. I always get really into it so, if a story turns out really bad, I'm devestated. It takes courage. •_• This was definitely worth it!
Author's Response: Hiii, I literally can't believe you've read this now AND left reviews. I finished this story months ago and even though it still gets readers, etc, nobody ever leaves comments on individual Chapters, etc? So I'm so grateful that you've swung by and left me amazing reviews, thank you < 3 Yeah, like I said before, it's been a while since I finished writing this so you can imagine how much my writing has improved. Back then, I wasn't comfortable writing sex scenes, tbh. I hadn't really indulged in them both so writing it and then reading it back was quite awkward and didn't feel like it was flowing right. But I'm thankful that it wasn't offputting, etc. I agree, that IS appaling, I couldn't imagine staying away for that long O: I'm glad that you managed to get around to read this and enjoyed it too, that was my aim when I first started out writing here. I know how you feel. I was following a specific story and it was perfect, but when the end came around, I didn't like the ending, which ruined my expectations of the story itself? So I know what you mean ;_; I'm glad you thought reading this was worth it! When I finish King Of Wishful Thinking, I'm gonna come back here and improve each chapter throughout this story, maybe even write some small side stories for it too? Thank you so much for reading and reviewing though, I really appreciate it < 3
Date: 12/05/14 01:21 am Title: Twenty Two: And The Game is Over.
But you did kill some special people. :( I liked them! *sniff* But, no, I'm not mad at you, darling. I just wanna kill the insane motherfucker who dared hurt my preciouses Freddie, Bill, and Tom. >:(
Author's Response: I haven't read through this since I finished posting it so I had to read through this Chapter to see who you were actually talking about, but I really liked them too, so it wasn't easy to kill them off. I'm glad you're not mad at me, but I wanted to kill that fucker too. He ruined shit! < 3
Date: 12/05/14 12:56 am Title: Eighteen: I'll Kill You, I Love You.
Hahaha!!! I cracked up at that last part. Word vomit, of course!
Author's Response: Word vomit, Bill thought it was a plausible excuse for random blurting :D < 3
Date: 12/05/14 12:48 am Title: Seventeen: I Can't Do This Anymore.
I have one word. GENIUS!!! I love the way you incorporated Don't Jump into the story! I honestly would never have thought of that. Listening to the song with that perspective had me sobbing almost as hard as Bill. Fucking genius... *shakes head in awe*
Author's Response: Thank you! ^.^ I had a reason for using DON'T JUMP in this story, but the chain of events changed from the original plan, so I didn't end up using it for the sole reason it was added, but I'm really happy that you're satisfied at seeing this in here. < 3
Date: 12/04/14 10:57 pm Title: Seven: First Kiss and the First Complication.
I love this so far! Quick correction though. At the beginning of this chapter you wrote Tom had a manly euphoria about him. The word you were looking for was aura, I think. :)
Author's Response: Wow, this story is still gathering reviews? That's unbelievable, but thank you for giving this a chance. And shit, I've always been the one to make the most stupidest of mistakes, I'll correct that now though, so thank you for pointing that out. < 3
Date: 10/02/13 10:40 pm Title: Twelve: Job Well Done.
I don't know about Billa, but Lilly is definitely ready for more!!!!! Ohmygod!
Author's Response: Hii. OMG, I love you, do you realise that?! I have no words, thank you so much for sticking around for this story and for leaving me very persistent reviews. They literally make everything worthwhile. You're amazing!
Lilly, are you ready for a very rocky ride?! xxxxx
Date: 10/01/13 10:38 pm Title: One: Weirded Out.
Oh you're so welcome! I know how you feel, I love when i get reviews! You're off the hook for sure for the mistakes but I thought I'd bring them up and be helpful, more than just bring you cookies :) Of course it isn't going to stop me from carrying on in reading. hell no! I read every spare chance I get. Often at the expense of my English book lol! I can't wait to see where this goes!!! xo
Author's Response: Hi, I'm really glad you pointed it out, because I take that as critique and critique can only better me as a writer. Now I know for in the future that I have to spell check it thoroughly before updating, so thank you so much for that. I honestly hope I don't disappoint you with this, omg xxxxx
Date: 09/25/13 11:44 pm Title: Five: Birthday Party.
“Because birthday presents?!”
Loved it! This chapter was awesome!!!!
Author's Response: Awe, I'm really glad you did. Thank you so much and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! xxxxx
Date: 09/25/13 02:02 pm Title: Four: Answers, Part 2 of 2.
I personally love where this is going! I know that its finished now but I still like the progression! Careful with the editing, its a little off in places but it doesn't make the story unreadable! I'm not sure yet how I feel about Tom shortening like ninety percent of his words but that's probably just a personal preference! This is awesome so far. *gives you cookies* :3
Author's Response: Hi, thank you so much for spending your time to leave me reviews, even though this is finished, a lot of readers don't bother, so thank you. I know there's mistakes, I read through the first few chapters when this got featured to make sure it was alright and I noticed them too. I apologize for that deeply and I hope that doesn't discourage you for carrying on. I will go back through this when I can find some spare time to correct mistakes, etc. I honestly didn't expect this to get featured and I thought nobody would read it after I finished it, so I thought I was off the hook with those. Thank you again! *Takes cookies* xxxxx
Date: 05/15/13 10:18 pm Title: One: Weirded Out.
This is really cute =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much xxxxx
Date: 04/23/13 02:06 am Title: One: Weirded Out.
Hi :)
Yeah, and I never write comments in that length xD But I liked the story so much, so that I had much to say ;D
Could you understand me good, or not so good? I read much in english, but I write in english not so much, so I think everytime, that I'm a miserable englishwriter that nobody understand xD
Thank you for answering some of the questions. That with Tom and the Bill 'Love you' say thing, was explained when Tom talked with Nathali about that. I mean, if Tom say to Bill what the real reason was, why he run away. But its okay :)
Sad, that you didnt like to write this story at the end. But I'm and author ( in germany ) too, so i know, thats sometime not easy. And i think: Better write an end thats not sooo god, as broke up.
So again: Thank you!
Author's Response: Hi, yeah I could understand you really well actually! I always get bored of writing the same story for a long length of time, so I end up rushing things and missing out loads of important details. Danke ^...^ xxxxx
Date: 04/22/13 12:45 pm Title: Twenty Three: Nine Months Later and a Happy Ever After.
Hmm … Don't know where i should beginning ( with my fucking bad english xD )
So I begin … yeah …
Hm, let me say: I like the idea ( of the story ) really much! Particularly the Car-Thief thing. Not like everytime the drugs ore killer or prostitute thing. No, this time its a carthief thing. I like that! It was kind of special to read, how they steal the cars. Okay, it's a bit unrealistic that there was 4-5 people for stealing one car, because a professional car-thief need a few seconds to steal a car alone, but yeah … but I like it xD And I don't know why, lol.
Hm … Tom … i like him. He is a bad boy in privatlife and his 'worklife'. But I like him, and again I don't know why. Maybe because he is not only a bad guy but also a nice, gently guy that protect what he love.
Freddy was on the beginning a little asshole, but after that, I like that sweet little guy ^^
Bill … It's like he had grown up in the story. At the beginning – no drinking, no drugs, no sex, neither a kiss. But that … I like that really really much. It seems so real, how the innocent a+ guy grown up to a boy that have sex, a friend, drinks alcohol and do illegal things. It really seems so real, when I look back on the time when I was in his age. But thats, what I loved so much. The story seemed so near, so touchable, so realistic.
You have a good style ( i think – i'm from germany, i'm not a native englishspeaker, so i cant say much about write – style. )
Sadly on the end … Dont know. You've skipped so much, what I donn't liked. Because the skipped scenes, it seemd like you dont want to still write this story and so there where some lack things. ( when bill said to tom, that he love him and tom ran away – stand bill there still on the spot, went he home, was he crying, called he andy? Did Nat know what will be, when they'd go to bu, or didn't she know, or thought she, that she is special for bu and will be held out of the killingthing? How could the guys run away, when there was more of bu's mans? Had tom passed out, because he lost so much blood( and he was almost passed out, when he get bill free ) and what they'd said to the police? Etc ) And there is so much lost in the 9 month skip. Had tom talked about the love-thing and why tom ran away? How they'd come over the things, that happened, in the time after that ( not 9 months after that ) What bills mother know about the things that happened(Bu, the car stealing, the thing in bus summerhouse where nat was killed, etc ) Why bill wanted to wait with the first sex, althought he wanted to sleep with tom, 9 months ago? Are they now studying ( uni ) or working or what they do? There were really much scenes that i'd love to read and many things that I'd love to know. It's pity not to know some things. :(
But … also when I've missed these things – I love that story really much. It's kind of special. So, thank you for sharing it with us. It was really good and i've enjoy to read it.
And yeah, sorry for my bad english. Hope you understand it :'D :(
When there is something new from you, I will read it too! But I only read finished storys, so no worry, I would read it, when it's finished ( Because my english is not perfect, I wouldn't understand the storys as good as i do when i read it complete in one.) So … please write another story thats so special like 'One new Message'!
Thank you again and yeah … see ya!
Author's Response: Hi, for not being a native English speaker, you sure do have a lot to say, so thank you for taking your time to write this review <3 It's true, I didn't really want to write this anymore, once it got further into the story, so I tried to tie things up quicker, which is bad and lazy of me. I'll answer some of the unanswered things I neglected. Tom ran away after Bill said 'I love you' because he thought he couldn't deal with commitment and when Bill said that, it made the relationship move into deeper boundaries and he didn't like that. As for Natalie, Bu demanded that she went and picked up Freddie and Bill from the police station, brought them back to him at his summerhouse and he said she had to do the same with Tom too. Natalie didn't know that Bu was going to double cross her and backstab her, like he did but that's the type of person Bu is. Bill didn't want to wait for sex, because he loved Tom, whereas Tom wasn't so sure he felt the same way, so he held sex off until he was sure and Valentines Day (Nine Months Later) he was sure he loved Bill back, so he gave in. I missed some of your questions out because I never really thought about it in the depth you did, so you can interpret in any way you like. I do apologize though and thank you again. In future stories, I promise I will try harder xxxxx
Date: 04/21/13 01:36 pm Title: Twenty Three: Nine Months Later and a Happy Ever After.
Well, that ended differently than I was expecting it to. Nevertheless, it was still a great story! The game Bu made them play, kind of reminded me of Saw. You have to choose or all die. It was intense, haha. You're a good writer. I am now going to stalk your profile to read more! (;
Author's Response: Thank you so much for everything! You're amazing xxxxx
Date: 04/21/13 12:44 am Title: Twenty Three: Nine Months Later and a Happy Ever After.
this was a really good story!!!
i am sad that it is over now!
but what hapend to fridde??
Author's Response: Thank you so much for everything! You're amazing and nothing important happened to Freddie! xxxxx
Date: 04/20/13 11:14 pm Title: Twenty Three: Nine Months Later and a Happy Ever After.
Cool story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for everything! You're amazing xxxxx
Date: 04/20/13 06:21 pm Title: One: Weirded Out.
Don't tell anyone but I love smutty happy endings. I'm glad everything worked or for them. So sorry it's over though. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for everything! You're amazing xxxxx
Date: 04/20/13 05:31 pm Title: Twenty Three: Nine Months Later and a Happy Ever After.
I've really enjoyed this story, thank you for all the time and effort you put into it! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for everything! You're amazing xxxxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for everything! You're amazing xxxxx