Date: 04/16/13 12:36 pm Title: Twenty One: Let The Game Begin.
Omgosh! I thought the last cliffhanger was bad! They better live through this :P
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!:-) xxxxx
Date: 04/16/13 12:01 pm Title: Twenty One: Let The Game Begin.
I actually teared up...please tell me they find a way out of it...
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!:-) xxxxx
Date: 04/15/13 03:07 pm Title: Twenty: What The Fuck is Going On.
wow, I was so happy when I saw there's a new part of your story up ^^
I can't wait to read to where all this may lead... And for Bill to hopefully see Tom again soon ^^!
Hope it'll all work out, please keep on updating, I'll certainly make sure not to miss it ^^
*winks*
Author's Response: Hi, you're amazing and I'm going to try and update all the remaining Chapters by the end of the week, so I can work on something new, so watch out for them! *smirks* Thank you xxxxx
Date: 04/15/13 05:42 am Title: Twenty: What The Fuck is Going On.
Oh I hate not knowing what's going to happen! I hope he gets released! :)
Author's Response: Thank you xxxxx
Date: 04/15/13 01:32 am Title: Twenty: What The Fuck is Going On.
Good Lord, those last two chapters had a lot going on! Things are getting so interesting and anything can happen. I hope that once Tom's released they all confront Bu and hopefully he will be worried about the cops busting his business and forget his threat to Bill. Gosh I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thankyou xxxxx
Date: 04/14/13 11:16 pm Title: Twenty: What The Fuck is Going On.
wow, i didn't expect that. what Bu did to Bill and Freddie was just uggh ;/and the situation in which is Tom isn't good too ;/
Author's Response: Bu is a dick, thank you xxxxx
Date: 04/14/13 10:08 pm Title: Twenty: What The Fuck is Going On.
this was a good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you xxxxx
Date: 04/14/13 10:03 pm Title: Twenty: What The Fuck is Going On.
Omg...this chapter completely mixed up my emotions, i don't know if I'm happy, sad or pissed off lol. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you xxxxx
Date: 04/14/13 08:59 pm Title: Twenty: What The Fuck is Going On.
THIS IS SO INTENSE I AM SO DONE AND I LOVE BILL SO MUCH FOR STANDING UP TO BUSHIDO ok I need to stop shouting I'm sorry but I love this so so so much xxxxxx
Author's Response: Thank you baby xxxxxx
Date: 04/14/13 08:48 pm Title: Twenty: What The Fuck is Going On.
O man! I hope Tom is able to get out of the trouble he's in somehow. Bill and his big ass mouth may have jus made more trouble lol.
Author's Response: Thank you and omfg, hahahha; Bill and his big ass mouth! xxxxx
Date: 04/14/13 05:48 pm Title: Nineteen: Ignorance is Far From Bliss.
Hi
I loved to read your story so far; read it all this evening because I just couldn't stop. I like your writing style so much. I admind I only leave reviews rather seldome but I really wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading and that I would be very happy if you continue the story!!!!
Keep on the good work :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much and the new Chapter will be updated really soon, so I hope I don't disappoint you with the rest of the story! xxxxx
Date: 04/14/13 01:01 pm Title: Nineteen: Ignorance is Far From Bliss.
IM SCREAMING OMFG IS IT THE POLICE
I FEEL SICK AND NERVOUS FOR HIM OMG ASDFGHJKL I hope him and Tom sort it out:3 this is such a good storyline! Xxxxxx
Author's Response: OMFG, HELLO THERE?! Thank you so much Char! xxxxxx
Date: 04/14/13 02:05 am Title: Nineteen: Ignorance is Far From Bliss.
nice chapter!!
i cant wait wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you xxxxx
Date: 04/13/13 06:41 pm Title: Nineteen: Ignorance is Far From Bliss.
Oh my gosh! Is that the police at the door? I'm glad that Nat made Tom see the big picture. Now, i'm hoping he can make things good again. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Hi again! God, you are amazing, seriously! Thanks for reviewing at every chapter, it means so much to know you're still following this! I can't tell you who's at the door yet, but it'll probably not be a shock to anyone when I've updated it again! Thank you xxxxx
Date: 04/13/13 06:29 pm Title: Nineteen: Ignorance is Far From Bliss.
Sorry I haven't reviewed before, I feel like such a bad person!
I can't wait to find out who's at the door, got to love a good cliff hanger!
Author's Response: That's fine:-) and don't feel bad, not everybody reviews anyway! But thank you so much for actually writing a review for me, it means a lot to hear your thoughts about what I'm writing, plus it's great encouragement! You'll fine out soon xxxxx
Date: 04/13/13 04:42 pm Title: Nineteen: Ignorance is Far From Bliss.
i hope Tom finally realized that he loves Bill too and i think it would be thanks to Nat. and why did u finished it that moment? now i don't know if it's Tom or some one other. i wanna more hehhe
Author's Response: I like keeping people gripped, hence the cliff hanger! Thank you xxxxx
Date: 04/13/13 08:06 am Title: Eighteen: I'll Kill You, I Love You.
1. Not sure how I feel about the Bill/Freddie bond yet.
2. I think Andreas will probably find out.
3.I have no idea how Tom will respond to Bills words but i'll be right here waiting to find out!
4.I would love to see B&T rush to the car, go home and finish what they've started and of course have a talk afterward to clear some things up.
5.No part of this story has brought me to tears :)
Update soon...please?
Author's Response: Thank you :3 and I'm almost done xxxxx
Date: 04/12/13 03:17 am Title: Eighteen: I'll Kill You, I Love You.
oh yay! question time~
1) Bill and Freddie? um..i dont know...i think that they're like...like you would imagine two little five year old boys playing together, their friendship is so innocent (despite the job) and its really like a simple innocent friendship, and I like it.
2)Yes, without a doubt. You can't keep something from your best friend forever, plus Bill has obviously been pulling away, and Andreas thinks that at least even if it isnt true, because why else would he flip out at a stupid fake name, when in reality, the man could have just been hitting on bill earlier in the week or whatever and bill had given him a fake name to get lost, but Andreas doesnt see that possibility because he's already feeling detached from his best friend.
3)I think he'll say it back :3 He will break down and cry and pull him close and hugs him close and says somethign sweet back with maybe a fuck in there, cause hey it is tom lol like "i fucking love you too" lol or something like that haha
4)In the next chapter, I would like to see more behind the history between Natalie and Tom, and this jailbird boyfriend of hers...I want to know more about that..
5)...sometimes when Bill is being too much of a whiney bitch i tend to skim over the paragraphs instead of really reading them...or when theres too much explanation for something simple (i dont know if you do that one, but i do know that its common for me with any story)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, you're amazing xxxxx
Date: 04/12/13 12:47 am Title: Eighteen: I'll Kill You, I Love You.
aww...Bill finally said he loves Tom :) well, after what he did and his jealously there was no way Bill wouldn't see how he is important to Tom.
Author's Response: I know right? xxxxx
Date: 04/11/13 06:29 pm Title: Eighteen: I'll Kill You, I Love You.
Holy crap! Sure hope Tom loves him back.
Author's Response: Maybe, thank you xxxxx