Date: 03/15/13 01:59 pm Title: Nine: Having No Other Choice.
this was a good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks xxxxx
Date: 03/14/13 12:05 pm Title: Eight: Meeting with the Big Bad Wolf.
this was a really good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
an i have never like bushido!
Author's Response: Thank you xxxxx
Date: 03/13/13 07:14 pm Title: Eight: Meeting with the Big Bad Wolf.
Well, amazing chapter, as always! Car theft, I wouldn't have guessed that one. It's better than what I thought it was, for sure. Lol xD
Bushido doesn't seem that bad, yet. He actually seems like an alright type of guy. As for the description of the job, it seems like a fun job. Take out the police and other people wanting to beat you up, if you get caught. Psssh, a possibility to get thousands of dollars and only actually work 3 times a month, I would that! (; JK.. haha. I think that Bill will say... Yes. Dun Dun Dun!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Talk to you next time! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much :-) xxxxx
Date: 03/13/13 05:17 pm Title: Eight: Meeting with the Big Bad Wolf.
'No good deed goes unpunished'
Bill, Bill, Bill...what are you doing?!
Ready for more!
Author's Response: Very wise words :-) Thank you xxxxx
Date: 03/13/13 03:40 pm Title: Eight: Meeting with the Big Bad Wolf.
Great chapter :) Can't wait to see how Tom reacts to Bill's new job lol.
Author's Response: I'm sure he'll be nothing short of thrilled when he hears the news of Bushido's proposition ;-) thank you so much! xxxxx
Date: 03/13/13 02:54 pm Title: Eight: Meeting with the Big Bad Wolf.
yay :) more questions! First of all, I would love to say that I guessed right on quite a few things :) so yay! on the other hand, my first impression of Bushido was a little off...not by much though, i still don't trust him. but at least he's smart. Okay, questions !
One- As I said, I don't trust him. I think he's always got something more in his head then what he actually says, meaning he has bigger plans than he lets people know. i mean that makes sense, he's the boss. he has all the answers, and if other people know too much that becomes a problem. So technically, he's right on the money for the type of work he does.Other than that, I think not much else about Bushido at this time. I still don't trust him though. Two- The job description, hmm...I think that the job itself seems to have more rewards than possible consequences and he gets paid for not doing very much. Though I do have a feeling that with Bill's luck, he'll have to do a lot more than is expected of him just so that nothing happens, and I'm hoping in the end he'll be rewarded by it because he's smart. Three- I think Bill will agree to it. I mean, obviously he knows way too much to walk away unharmed by any of it. And of course, if he did say no, thats cutting off TONS of chapters you could write with interesting things happening based off of his new job, and why would you set yourself up for that opportunity and then not take it, right? Saying that though, I really do not think Tom is going to like this. I think he is not going to like this at all. I also think that Freddie may be a little PO'd at Bill for taking his spot. And I think it's going to be a VERY AWKWARD car ride home. VERY VERY VERY AWKWARD.
Author's Response: Yes, you got most of that last chapter right! *Hands you some cookies* Thank you so much for actually spending your time to leave such amazing lengthy reviews on what you think will/should happen. It means the world and gives me more inspiration when I read your thoughts. I think it will be 'VERY VERY VERY AWKWARD' indeed :'-) *hugsssss* xxxxx
Date: 03/13/13 02:34 pm Title: Seven: First Kiss and the First Complication.
hahaha great chapter :D and yay! Questions! Okay! One- His boss is Bushido. Duh. Two- I think his boss is an overreaching asshole who should leave bill out of this, but if he did then there would be nothing interesting to happen right? so oh well. three- well obviously he's in some sort of gang...i think he's like a messenger/delivery boy/mercenary if needed type thing...but thats just speculation so who really knows but you and "tommy" haha Four- Bill is either gonna get the shit beat outa him, be put on some sort of hitlist, or be forced/hired to work under Bushido...again, speculation but thats my honest thoughts on what could happen. Five- well I answered that above, but again, GREAT CHAPTER and LOVE the kiss haha!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking your time to answer my questions, you're simply amazing! And thank you for just reviewing every time you do, it makes my day :-) xxxxx
Date: 03/13/13 11:40 am Title: Eight: Meeting with the Big Bad Wolf.
wow, i wouldn't think about cars heheh maybe Bill will agree and he was a good boy there so maybe Tom will give him a reward hehe
Author's Response: It was supposed to be drug smuggling at first, but I was watching 'Fast and the Furious 5' last night and I got the idea of cars, then car thieving! :-) Thank you xxxxx
Date: 03/12/13 10:37 am Title: Four: Answers, Part 2 of 2.
I really liked this chapter :) "Chat" fanfics are hard to pull off in my opinion, but you do it really well! Bill's conversations with Tom and Freddie are interesting, they're funny and flirty!
I also like the idea of a fic centered around Facebook! I wish I met my special someone randomly online like that too haha :)
Keep up the good work, I like your story! *goes off to read the next chapter*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wish I met mine too, but I've only got a bunch of twats on my Facebook :-( xxxxx
Date: 03/11/13 04:10 pm Title: Seven: First Kiss and the First Complication.
I'm going to go out on a limb and guess that Bushido is Tom's boss. I'm not really sure what to think of him yet though. He seems like he's a type of "Gangster Man." Although, Bill's "Mafia" guess would be good as well! xD As for Tom's job, that is still up in the air for me. He could be a hitman, who knows. Hahaha. I think that Tom's boss will find Bill attractive and try to either do something with him or get him to join whatever the hell they're apart of. Idk, mindblowing stuff is headed our way, I do believe! XD Psssh, the overall chapter? How about the overall story? IT'S AH-FUCKIN-MAZING! I was sad when the chapter was over. I cannot wait for the next update!!
I'll admit, I was a little apprehensive to start reading this story. Only because I generally don't read unfinished stories. Cliffhangers and me don't get along. xD But I'm glad I started reading yours, this story is GREAT! I hope the next update comes soon!! :D
Author's Response: WOW! *...* Thank you so much for writing me such a lengthy review, it literally means the world to me. You're amazing and I hope the new chapter is up to your standards! xxxxx
Date: 03/11/13 01:58 pm Title: Five: Birthday Party.
Awwieee!! Soooo cute! How often do you update? I hope that very often cause i can't wait to read more! :D
Author's Response: It depends really, usually a few days between new chapters. Thank you xxxxx
Date: 03/11/13 09:49 am Title: Seven: First Kiss and the First Complication.
Oooo. I am pretty sure it's bushido, toms boss i mean. But i have no idea what toms job is. I just hope everything will be alright! Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Thank you ^...^ xxxxx
Date: 03/10/13 11:46 pm Title: Seven: First Kiss and the First Complication.
No no no....just NO! I knew things were going to smooth darn it! O.O
Author's Response: There's always a twist when things seem perfect, thank you xxxxx
Date: 03/10/13 11:08 am Title: Seven: First Kiss and the First Complication.
great story....btw...i wanna read more
Author's Response: Thank you ^...^ xxxxx
Date: 03/10/13 12:13 am Title: Seven: First Kiss and the First Complication.
Great story so far!
My answers:
1.) Bushido
2.) Scary and bossy (as he should be)
3.) Not sure yet
4.) Bushido will probably think he's pretty (hard not to...)
5.) Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^...^ Thank you so much for taking your time to give me your answers and thoughts! xxxxx
Date: 03/09/13 11:53 pm Title: Seven: First Kiss and the First Complication.
this was a nice chapter!
i cant wait wait for the next chapter!
an i hope that bill will be ok!
Author's Response: Thank you ^...^ xxxxx
Date: 03/09/13 04:56 pm Title: Seven: First Kiss and the First Complication.
cant wait for moooooooore thats for sure :)
update sooooooooooooooooon !!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you ^...^ xxxxx
Date: 03/09/13 04:39 pm Title: Seven: First Kiss and the First Complication.
I wanna read more!!! Very good story so far
Author's Response: Thank you ^...^ xxxxx
Date: 03/09/13 03:04 pm Title: Seven: First Kiss and the First Complication.
i like what and how everything is happening between Bill and Tom and that beach at night seams cool. but now i'm curious with who Tom was talking and why that guy wants to see Bill.
Author's Response: Thank you so much and I hope the new chapter is up to your standards xxxxx
Date: 03/09/13 03:01 pm Title: Seven: First Kiss and the First Complication.
Great chapter :) I have no clue what's going on but I can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Thank you so much xxxxx