Date: 03/19/13 03:00 pm Title: One: Weirded Out.
I've been peeking in on this story over the last few days and I like it:)
Author's Response: I'm really glad you do, thank you so much for your review :3 xxxxx
Date: 03/19/13 02:30 pm Title: Eleven: Introductions and Starting the Job.
Great story! :) Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you xxxxx
Date: 03/19/13 01:03 pm Title: Eleven: Introductions and Starting the Job.
I like it. I'm curious how Bill will do in his new job. Bill's mom was so funny with this wole date talk xd and of course he has Tom with him most of the time ;)
Author's Response: Thank you xxxxx
Date: 03/19/13 01:01 pm Title: Eleven: Introductions and Starting the Job.
Bill and Tom as car jackers is really hot! I'm actually glad it's cars their into other than the usual drugs or whatever. I'm hoping Bill turns out to be a natural at this. I'd hate to see I'm n trouble for messing it up. Great chapter:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^...^ xxxxx
Date: 03/19/13 02:34 am Title: Ten: Coming Undone and Anis Fenchichi.
wow-things heated up for them real quick didn't it?! That was pretty hot *.*
Hells bells, Bu already claiming his right and screwing up the weekend for the guys! Thanks for updating, look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you ^...^ xxxxx
Date: 03/19/13 02:12 am Title: Nine: Having No Other Choice.
Well well well...what a fine mess Bill got himself into!
Author's Response: :-) I know, thank you xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 10:56 pm Title: One: Weirded Out.
This story seems really interessing :D, the summary hooked me, I'm going to start reading it once I'm done with my exams ._.
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it when you do read it :3 xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 09:00 pm Title: Ten: Coming Undone and Anis Fenchichi.
oh my...so I pretty much love this story. my favorites are tom and bill, tom is getting possessive, love it and they are so cute together. update soon and i promise I'll love you forever lol? I hope there's more tom and bill to come as well xD !!
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^...^ That's why I made the age gap, so Tom could get all protective and possessive over his younger boyfriend! :3 I've finished the next Chapter actually, but I'll upload that in the morning, I promise! xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 08:34 pm Title: Ten: Coming Undone and Anis Fenchichi.
Not sure I'm digging Bill as a car jack look out. Interested to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: You're not? :-( I think he'd make an amazing criminal even just as Look Out, it's kinda hot actually! Oh well, I'll try to make it worth your while if you'll still be reading this :-) Thanks for the reviews! xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 07:22 pm Title: Ten: Coming Undone and Anis Fenchichi.
Well I'm still here ;) I love this ive always put this fic off to the side and I ended up reading every chap AND IM IN LOVE UPDATE MORE >
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you weren't disappointed. :-) xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 06:25 pm Title: Five: Birthday Party.
I actually just discovered this story and find it really cute! I'm glad you turned Bill 16 so this didn't get creepy! LoL! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much and I wanted a little age gap between them, but not one that would make Tom look like a proper paedophile. Aha! :-) xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 06:10 pm Title: Ten: Coming Undone and Anis Fenchichi.
*boner dies* -.- thats fucking Bushido
haha that's so funny.
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^.^ xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 05:39 pm Title: Four: Answers, Part 2 of 2.
Reviews and the number of them don't mean much. The important number is your READ number. If the number of reads increase with each chapter, you're golden. Most readers enjoy the read and don't have anything to say, they just like the story. Keep your eye on the number of reads as that will show you the true success of your story, NOT the number of reviews.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :') eheh, I just think when somebody reviews and leaves you a comment on their thoughts, it encourages you with the story. It's just the way I see things but you are right, thank you so much :-) xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 04:55 pm Title: Ten: Coming Undone and Anis Fenchichi.
ahhh i love this
Author's Response: Thank you ^.^ xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 04:25 pm Title: Ten: Coming Undone and Anis Fenchichi.
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*lets out long breath and calms down* okay....im good...now, first of all, i predict his mother getting more and more pushy about whats going on. it seems unavoidable. Second, lots of hot hot hotness XD thank you. it was very enjoyable lol allllll of it~ I'm sure Bill thought so too hahaha, and god damnit bushido you're such a buzz kill. -.- also, you didn't fuck anything up :D don't think that! *hearts* :)
Author's Response: ^...^ Each and every time Bill pushes her away and gives her the cold shoulder, it is making her more and more suspicious about what's going on with him. Bushido ruins every moment they had together :-( Thank you so much xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 03:46 pm Title: Ten: Coming Undone and Anis Fenchichi.
i like it :) in every day Bill and Tom suits together, no mentions their hot moments when they are alone. i wonder if it would be the same if they would be with friends.
eh, instead Tom and Bill "date" they will have to meet Bushido but still they will have little time together
Author's Response: Thank you so much :-) xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 02:41 pm Title: Ten: Coming Undone and Anis Fenchichi.
Damn xD I can't wait to read about the first job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that will be in with the next chapter. xxxxx
Date: 03/18/13 01:47 am Title: Nine: Having No Other Choice.
Whoaaa I never would have guessed cars I thought it was drugs o.o and I the only one that just lovesss Freddie I think it would b cute if he started 'crushing' on bill lol that probe wont happen nd he'd get his Ase kicked by tom but hey it would b soooooooo cute ;D
Author's Response: Aw :3 thank you so much and I guess that would be cute, could happen ;D Thank you xxxxx
Date: 03/15/13 10:26 pm Title: Nine: Having No Other Choice.
First, very excited to hear their relationship going to be progressing soon. I have really been looking forward to that, second of all, yay the questions continue. I love the questions, never stop that :3 Okay, first, One- Hmmm, well i think really it should progress slowly, but this depends on how far Bill has gone in the past and how nervous his is about progressing) but I would think of it as happening something like, they just trying to get used to being around each other like that more, so yeah, kissing, making out, and maybe one time it could go just sllllliiightly farther, maybe like, Third Base or something like that, and then Bill could get all nervous (or if he isn't nervous, then maybe Tom could be all like, not wanting to rush through anything or whatever) Buuuut of course, thats just my professional opinion....LOL not. i dont have a professional opinion, just a crazed-obsessed fan opinion. LOL. Okay, Two- Tom's story honestly didn't really interest me too much. I was just kind of like, Okay whatever. Maybe it's cause I figured most of it already. I don't know. Three- OH! hmmm....OKAY. Well, I would definitely have a scene where Bill has to convince his mom about the "night shifts" cause honestly, what mom is okay with their kid working night shifts during high school..i mean bill has a good arguement with his grades and everythign and how he wouldn't work that often or whatever, so he'll obviously WIN the arguement...but i think i would definitely have that scene, but i think, personally, it should open with a heavy and hot scene with Bill and Tom, something really sexy. that the readers would really like, but you gotta tease them somehow, not give it all up right away. and then yeah the scene with Bill's mom....MAYBE a scene where Tom could be talking with Bushido to try and get Bill out of it....hmm...also i think Andreas is due for another appearance...maybe saying like, oh im worried about you, OR he could want all the dirty little details of Bill's newfound relationship with the hot guy XDD...maybe Bill could cut his hair? after all, now that he's working for Bushido,k and he had to hide his hair before, if he's working for him, chances are he cant hide it all the time, so maybe he should go like, recent little mohawk-y thing he had before his refound lion's main, except maybe not platinum blonde since people would see that easier when he's playing lookout...but maybe like the dirty blonde that it was during DSDS...? i think anyways that would be a good idea...maybe something about piercings too? like, maybe during that sexy scene you could mention his nipple piercing...fans go crazy over that too XD yet i rarely see it mentioned in stories...even smut stories XDD anyways, i think thats all i can think of for today...hmmm...oh, i guess maybe something at the school? its been a while since they were at school XD maybe thats where the Andreas scene could take place? IDK ITS YOUR STORY NOT MINE! haha
Author's Response: WOW! Thank you so much for writing all of this for me. I'm actually serious, you're giving so much encouragement and inspiration to carry this on. As for your answer to question three // Jesus Christ, you've written loads of amazing ideas! I was planning on cutting Bill's hair off so he could fit into the role better and the talk with his mother has already been written for the start of the next chapter :-) Thank you again for spending your time to write this! xxxxx
Date: 03/15/13 02:45 pm Title: Nine: Having No Other Choice.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks xxxxx