Date: 04/08/24 10:06 pm Title: Act 3, Scene 1
WOW! The way you write is just breathtakingly beautiful and pure poetry and you really write the twins so well, their characteristics and their bond how it truly seam to be.. Standing ovations. I would like to read 100 storys from you.
Date: 04/08/24 07:45 pm Title: Act 3, Scene 1
WOW! The way you write is just breathtakingly beautiful and pure poetry and you really write the twins so well, their characteristics and their bond how it truly seam to be.. Standing ovations. I would like to read 100 storys from you.
Date: 05/01/23 02:04 am Title: Act 3, Scene 1
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 11/23/19 02:25 am Title: Chapter 8
this was a really good story
Date: 08/06/16 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
I read a whole story at once an I must say it was beautiful! Than you for thhis amazing experience!
Date: 08/06/16 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
This is the kind of story that makes me so happy I want to cry. It's everything and it makes me feel everything!! I started reading, knowing that I had to be writing a paper and telling myself that it'd only be one chapter. Noooo!!!! I could not walk away 💜💜💜💜💜
Date: 06/04/13 04:22 pm Title: Act 3, Scene 7
Nice to see you updating this again :)
The best part in this ending was how smoothly you turned their first time into brotherly teasing just the way I imagine them being. This is how the twins should always be - keep that playfulness and yet go so intimate like with noone before.
You made me feel good with this fic. :)
Date: 06/01/13 01:54 pm Title: Act 3, Scene 7
The sex was smoking hot, and I loved that when it was over they were still acting like brothers and not all lovey dovey.
Date: 03/19/13 04:44 pm Title: Act 3, Scene 6
I can't even comment no more:-) This won't be surpased ... can't be... ever.
Date: 03/19/13 04:30 pm Title: Act 3, Scene 5
Hot, Hot, Hot!!! Sweet mother of Jesus.... I have told you once before already but I have to repete myself again - If only real life sex was as good as the thing you created here, with Bill and Tom. It almost hurts to read how beautiful and perfect those two are with and for each other.
Btw, I love you used centimeters, not inches. That one little touch made this story even more "homy" and "cosy". At least to me, being an European, lol.
Date: 03/19/13 04:25 pm Title: Act 3, Scene 4
The first part of this chapter a scorching hotness, the second one an ultimate delicasy for me as a reader. I like the fear they both feel because it is real, it's realistic and it makes sense. I like all their doubts, hesitation, inevatable point of no return they are so painfully aware of. The second part is a pearl I love and treasure immensely because it resonates with everythig in me, it just makes sense. Human interraction is never easy and this one between Bill and Tom is something I really gulp down like an adict, word after word, not a single empty boring moment to skim over, no walk-arounds... you keep me entranced ...you are the best:-)
Date: 03/17/13 04:48 pm Title: Act 3, Scene 1
Every time I read this I end up being breathless and with with pounding heart.
Twins interactions in your stories is the best there is - the deepest connection, love like no other, sensible dialogues and TENSION - that tentative tension is like a drug to me. A tension that always leads to the inevitable... and I am loving it.
Author's Response: Well, I used to have a twin of my own, so I kind of get it. Right?
Date: 03/07/13 05:51 pm Title: Act 3, Scene 6
I really love how slowly and detailed you take this. You go to little details, which are not alweaus perfect, but they are realistic. Focusing on a way it is so hot. The fingering was almost killing me ;). Their roles were also so clear here. Tom is such a good big brother.
Author's Response: And the perfect lover, from what I've been told. There's probably no way in hell the real Tom could live up to what I've made of him. if he could? Damn...
Date: 03/05/13 04:17 pm Title: Act 3, Scene 6
Wow. Just... wow
Author's Response: Yes?rn
Date: 03/04/13 04:37 pm Title: Act 3, Scene 5
Fingering is so hot andI love their little dirty talk here :).
It's truly enjoyable to read such emotinally loaded smut. Their love is so strong and they care so much about each other. It makes me positive that nothing can go wrong.
Yet I understand Tom and I think it was important little part of the story when he wonderred his own burden of not letting Bill down. Love is not simple excitement and the older I get, the more I personally notice how many other scary feelings and doubts it gives. It's not perfect.
Thank you for your compliments to my last review. I love to read these and try to understand. Hopefully sometimes even get close. :)
Author's Response: Your English is magical. I know that's random and you may hear sarcasm at first, but let me explain. We've known each other for a while now and I know you work for it. I know you worry about it. I just want to give you the meagre compliment of telling you that I think you're better at it than most native speakers, but just amateur enough to give it a childlike tone. Combined with your ability to breach dark and twisted...I've always found it magical. "Innocence" is one of only six fics on this site that I've personally bookmarked.
Maybe the greatest compliment I've ever received here is this:
"Love is not simple excitement and the older I get, the more I personally notice how many other scary feelings and doubts it gives. It's not perfect." That's heavy. When I wrote this, it was heavy. You got it, and I appreciate that.
So...when I say I look forward to your reviews? It's because I respect you as a fellow writer and am a fan. I have modest standards regarding flattery, so a favourable review from someone who writes like you is kind of like Bill answering you on BTK and telling you he's always loved your posts. (shrugs). It's kind of silly how important other people's opinions can be, isn't it? :p
Date: 03/02/13 07:24 am Title: Act 3, Scene 5
The way you leave us hanging, Engel: I swear...
Author's Response: Well, darling...I don't kid myself that you keep coming back for my stunning good looks. This is how I hook em and reel em in. :)
Date: 03/01/13 07:58 pm Title: Act 3, Scene 4
Let's start by saying that I really love seeing Tom sucking Bill AND I love fingering in any form very much. The sex is hot, but the actual soul of these stories and what sex is base on is their attempts to make this happen right. The struggling is so natural, very disarming and real. How they are not immune to misunderstandings and fears like none of us is. I'm not the most romantic person out there, but the ending of this chapter wa really nice, warmed my little heart very much. Just how it should in this perfect pairing. :)
Author's Response: You know, I'd be lying if I said that at least part of the reason I wrote these things wasn't because I look forward to your well thought-out reviews. I look forward to them every single time I post a chapter.
Date: 02/28/13 06:39 am Title: Act 3, Scene 4
And you dont call that a cliffhanger? ;-) thanks so much for the double feature, Engel! It made all that time waiting worthwhile; please update again soon!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, but it's not NEARLY the cliffhanger it would have been if I had left off at the end of the last chapter, lol. Let's call it...foreplay.