Date: 02/26/13 05:35 pm Title: Confessions Part |||
OH MY GOD!!! What happens next?
Author's Response: ERMERGERD. Isn't it so nerve wrecking? Like sometimes I can't even with myself. Does that make sense? Probably not! Haha. Update should be coming up soon! Can't wait to hear your reaction to the next chapter! Xx
Date: 02/26/13 04:43 pm Title: Confessions Part |||
so finally i caught up ;) i think you write so well and ive got tears in my eyes aswell - its so sad that they arent together.. .. and seriously. liam and ethan so remind me of bill and tom ethan is like the little bill who is overly excited.. seriously emily just says that its was a preggo scare? i mean maybe she was already 4 months along and you know you can have bleedings but it doesnt mean anything.. you made out ria in this story a right bitch! but i do think tom goes around this whole thing wrong.. and i do think ria knows she is in the process of loosing tom. for her it would be perfect to quote: if you love someone, let it go. i hope she lets tom go to be with emily - that would be really big of ria ;)
dont you think ian and bill would fit really good together?? and a pic of ian or maya would be really sweet aswell ;) so i hope you update soon - im gonna put that to my favorites too ;) so ill know when you are updating ;)
greetings from germany :$
Author's Response: Wow! I can't believe you have tears in your eyes! That's just wow! Liam and Ethan definitely mirror Bill and Tom in many ways, that's something I wanted to play into. Emily definitely wasn't pregnant, it was just a scare that changed her frame of mind and forced her to make decisions that altered her. I agree, Tom goes about the situation like a chicken with his head cut off, and Ria is acting out (very bitchy indeed). It would be great of Ria to let Tom go, but I think everyone knows that isn't going to happen! haha. Umm, I'm not sure whether Ian and Bill would be good together, it's definitely a possibility, I think that could work to be something great! But Ian does have a boyfriend so there's that. I'll try to find pictures of Ian and Maya for reference though it might take a while! It's taken me a while to update, but it should be up soon! Thanks so much babes! Hope to hear from you again! Xx
Date: 02/26/13 04:09 pm Title: Confessions Part |
never got over emily tom? seriously? Why are ya marrying ria than.. she is your second choice - never go with your second choice of woman- damn. go break up with her and win your first choice woman back!!
Author's Response: Tom is just lost. Like at this point he doesn't even know what to do anymore he's just confused as fuck. haha. But be patient! He'll get his shit together! Don't worry! Hope to hear from you again darling! Xx
Date: 02/25/13 10:14 pm Title: Confessions Part |||
Wow! I really enjoyed this chapter! So much drama and a lot more insight into why Emily left Tom. I'm glad she told him the truth.
As for your reply to my last review, I do remember you and when I had seen you had started posting a new story, I immediately began tracking it. Not only that, but the banner is gorgeous! I can definitely tell your writing has improved. That doesn't mean your writing was bad before, not at all. I think you are doing an exceptional job with this story and I am looking forward to more!
Can I request Emily slapping the smug smirk off of Ria's face in any upcoming chapters? lol That would be so awesome to see/read! =D
Author's Response: It was about time Emily was completely honest with Tom. But poor Tom, never having a moment to fully process these huge things Emily dumps on him. I feel for him! Haha. The banner for this story is amazing. I absolutely love it. haha. Thanks so much for the compliments on my writing. It makes me feel all bubbly inside (although I always have a ton of typos and gramatic errors that I don't notice until it's published but oh well. haha). I'll keep your request in the back of my mind for upcoming chapters! I guess you'll just have to wait and see! Xx
Date: 02/25/13 12:07 pm Title: Confessions Part |||
OHHHHH damn I so love this story, I cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Damn! I'm glad you love this story! The next chapter should be coming soon! Can't wait to hear your thoughts on the next one! Xx
Date: 02/25/13 06:23 am Title: Confessions Part |||
I loved the chapter !!! OMG Ria.. seriously... haha even though I like her, you make me hate her ;P
It was a great chapter, I love that she told Tom everything. But I am sooo sad he didn't got to respond to her. That article though, great drama! ;)
*waiting impatiently for the next chapter* :) kisses
Author's Response: I think I'm just channeling my inner Ria hate into this story. I've come to that conclusion. haha. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! Finally Emily is 100 percent honest with Tom. I think Emily cuts him off before he can fully process things! haha. The article was cray! Can't wait to hear your thoughts on the next update! Xx
Date: 02/25/13 05:00 am Title: Confessions Part |||
cant wait for moooooore :)
update sooooooon!!!!!!
Author's Response: I didn't update as soon as I would have liked! But it's definitely on it's way!! I hope you like the next update! Tell me what you think of it! Xx
Date: 02/25/13 04:51 am Title: Confessions Part |||
Love and hate the cliff hanger- can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: I really don't even realize they're cliff hangers until you guys tell me! I just try to find a place to end that isn't awkward. That's all. The update should be coming soon! I hope I'll get to hear your opinions on the next one! Xx
Date: 02/25/13 12:59 am Title: Confessions Part |||
To start off i have to say this..
*stands up* Hi im Mandie, and I'm addicted to this story!
Okay so.... I'm ready to just fuckin kill that bitch!!!!!! I am so incredibly flustered at this point I don't know what to say and all I want to do is kill Ria!!!!!! Like.. WHY!?!? she's such a jealous little... Actually... humongous SLUT! I just want to hug Emily and make her feel better. And at the same time I want to kick tom in the balks because I have a feeling he's going to somehow try to defend Ria and he has in the past and oh my gosh!! I just feel so bad and now I'm just rambling so I'm gonna go take a breather and try not to kill anybody while I'm at it.
But amazing chapter none the less and I hope you update really soon!! :) and I'll try to cut it down to 15 times a day!
Author's Response: Hi Mandie! Great to meet/ hear from you! I think everyone is just so over Ria at this point. I mean even Tom is just getting tired of her childish antics at this point. SO DONE WITH HER SHIT. I think Tom maybe hasn't really seen everything clearly, and now it's time for him to finally come full circle and realize things he wasn't ready to face. I wouldn't say Ria is a slut for all the shit she's pulled with Emily, definitely a BITCH, but bitch and slut are two different things. So glad that you liked the update! I hope to hear your opinion on the next chapter! Xx
Date: 02/24/13 10:42 pm Title: Confessions Part |||
Gaaaaaaah, this chapter was amazing!
Made my day that you updated! Can't wait for the next one :D
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! And it's amazing that I was able to make your day with an update! A new update should be coming up once it gets approved (I don't even know what it's called. haha) can't wait to hear your opinion on the next one! Xx
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! And it's amazing that I was able to make your day with an update! A new update should be coming up once it gets approved (I don't even know what it's called. haha) can't wait to hear your opinion on the next one! Xx
Date: 02/24/13 08:38 pm Title: Confessions Part |||
OMG. You keep teasing me with your cliff hangers;)
What little sympathy I had for Ria is gone. I say Emily go ape shit on her cuz we all know Ria ain't about that life lol.
I will continue to update stalk!
Author's Response: I honestly don't try to make them cliffhangers. I just write until it feels like a good place to stop. Otherwise the chapters would be awkward, and just unappealing. Haha. SHE AIN'T ABOUT THAT LYFE! Haha. Most definitely not about that life. Can't wait to hear what you thought of the next update! Xx
Date: 02/24/13 06:55 pm Title: Confessions Part |||
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAT??????????
CAN SOMEBODY JUST KILL HER?! BEFORE I GET MY HANDS ON HER!!!
fron the previous chaps i'd thought of Ria as some stupid bimbo. but right now the less i can think of her is SLUT!
it's like you dropped a bomb here girl! well i'd love to comment on the confesion part but i can't really think about it! all i can think is how i'm goin' to sleep when i want to beat her so much like she was a kick-boxing sack!
please tell me Em's gonna kick her ass!
PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!
Author's Response: I don't think slut is the proper word to describe Ria prior to the next update, based solely on the fact that she hasn't done anything slutty per se. She is definitely a bitch. Most definitely a bitch, but yeah. She is in dire need of an ass beating. That I will have to agree. Sorry I got you so riled up! But I'm glad you've enjoying it! Xx
Date: 02/24/13 06:28 pm Title: Confessions Part |||
Omg! I LOVED that update! Made me so happy to see that you made a update, made my day :) and just wow! Every thing about the update WOW! She telling him about the scare and she quiting just omg wow!!!
I get the feeling you have a thing for long skirts? :p love the outfits!
Author's Response: I'm glad I made your day with the update! There was a lot huh? I feel like Emily could be such a drama queen sometimes! Lol. Finally everything is out in the open and nothing is left under the rug! Feels good to be completely honest. haha. Long skirts are cute! I just like stuff that looks cute,that's all. haha! Thanks babes! Xx
Date: 02/24/13 05:56 pm Title: Confessions Part |||
What an ending!
Need you to update real soon, haha!
AND I don't even want to comment on the Ria-thing! It's SO time to get rid of her :D
Btw, loooove the outfits you pick out for Emily every time!
Author's Response: Such a dramatic ending! Haha. I'm so sorry that it's taken me so long to update! But hopefully the wait was worth it! You'll have to let me know what you thought of the update when it gets approved! Ria really is just ughhh. I can't even with that female. Lol. So glad to hear that you're actually checking them out! I have a fun time making them! Haha. See you next time! Xx
Date: 02/23/13 01:47 pm Title: Confessions Part ||
As much as I want them to spend time together he needs to get back in there with Ria.
Author's Response: Right? If you're a boyfriend who loves your girlfriend, there's no way in hell you should be leaving her to go hang out with the other her. But maybe that's the point I'm trying to get out? Maybe I'm alluding to the fact that Emily is always going to matter more to him than anyone else (other than Bill) even if it's irrational. I mean, I don't know, just maybe. But love that you are thinking about it! Good eyes babes! Awards for you! Hope to hear from you again! Xx
Date: 02/23/13 09:55 am Title: Confessions Part ||
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much babes! Hope to hear from you again! Xx
Date: 02/22/13 10:37 am Title: Confessions Part ||
Another great update! I hope that Emily gets around to telling Tom WHY she left in the first place. I guess that I kinda, sorta, maybe, possibly, feel a little bad for Ria, but whatever she's still a bitch. lol Gawd I just hope that Emily and Tom can work their problems out and finally be together. update soon! :)
Author's Response: I don't know, I guess you'll have to keep reading to see if she does. haha (; Don't feel bad for Ria. Ria is evil. Ria is bad. haha. It's always ugly before it get's pretty, so just remember that! Update has been submitted so look out for it! Can't wait to hear from you again! Xx
Date: 02/22/13 05:55 am Title: Confessions Part ||
I LOVE IT!!!!!
OMG... the feels. I get Tom and why he is so obligated to Ria.. but damn boy.. the sooner you dump her the better for her! But well, he didn't realize it yet.
I sooo can't wait for the next chapter!
Had an amazing mornig reading this xD
*kisses*
Author's Response: I LOVE THAT YOU LOVE IT! The Tom feels are always the worst. they're like, a punch in the gut and just JESUS. Ria just needs to get out. She just needs to go. I can't even with her anymore. Haha. The next chapter should be up by now! If not it will be soon! Glad you enjoyed yourself, can't wait to hear from you again babes! *kisses back at ya!* Xx
Date: 02/22/13 05:21 am Title: The Confrontation
*_________________________* OMG. I am really... REALLY into this story!!! I can;t wait what happens in the next chapter thank god i can hit the "next" button :D
Author's Response: I'm so stoked that you're really into this story! Haha. Its got me smiling because I love it when people talk about how into my writing they are. Xx
Date: 02/22/13 04:46 am Title: Things Unsaid
I started reading your story this morning.. and so far I am LOVING it! Seriously It's not often I read het but I have to admit this one I like a lot ;)
The tension between Emily and Tom in this chapter was amazing. I love the way Bill is around her, at first I thought Bill might be in love with her as well, but I just guess they are more on a deeper psychical level. And when I saw you brought Ria into the story I almost screamed.. I am a Tom girl and I actually like her. I mean, I am happy he is happy but sometimes I could kick her ass for being with him. That stupid jealous fangirl feels. ha!.
xD keep up the great work I am happy I still have few more chapters to read now *sipping coffee and enjoying it*
xoxo A.
Author's Response: I always find it really flattering when Slash readers start reading Het, especially because I"m a Het reader and am not into Slash at all. So I'm extremely flattered that you enjoy this story that much! Emily and Tom have a chaotic past, and it's really fun exploring that. Bill definitely isn't in love with Emily, but he does love her, as much as he would love the woman Tom will marry (that's supposed to mean a lot). Ugh. Can't stand Ria. It's totally on the superficial she has my man kind of way, but I'm mature enough not to send hate or bash or whatever, she can do her thang. Haha. But I know those stupid jealous fangirl feels all too well. I feel like I'm in Pretty Little Liars! Haha. Xx