Date: 03/06/13 02:08 pm Title: Reunited
I REALLY want to read the story, looks so good - and the reviews makes me want to read it even more!
But there is something wrong with the first chapter :( Tried both from my phone & pc - please check it out? Pretty please and cookies? :D
Author's Response: I'm so sorry about that! The first chapter is somehow reading as Chapter 0. This problem wasn't present before. But I reuploaded the first chapter and it should be right underneath. The first chapter reads twice on the chapter list, but you want to click on the second one! Sorry about that babes! Xx
Date: 03/06/13 10:00 am Title: Riot
WAY TO GO EMILY!!! I was hoping she'd hit Ria and she did!! YAY! Thanks for that! lol
I really am enjoying this story...so much! It's been so hard finding a good HET fic to read for a while and it's so nice to have a great story to read that is HET! Not saying I'm against SLASH, but it's nice to read HET every once and a while =D
Great chapter, hun! I'm a bit scared for the confrontation with Emily's mother. EEKE!
Author's Response: Ooh girl you know I put that in just for you! Haha. Thanks so much! I'm kind of blown away by all the success this is getting (granted it may not be super successful but this is the first story I've really ever put up here and updated regularly). I'm glad people are enjoying this story, and I'm glad that my writing is actually being considered quality so totes excited! The Confrontation with her mother is up and it's a lot different than anyone will expect, I think. Haha. Xx
Date: 03/06/13 09:57 am Title: Riot
SHIT JUST GOT REAL IN DEUTSCHLAND!!!!! Ah I love it. We finally get a glimpse of that fiery temper we've heard so much about. I can't wait to see what happens next...I have this sinking suspicion that while Ria may be out the picture the bitch is lurking behind the frame. I wonder how Mommy Dearest is going to affect the situation. Can't wait for the next update!!!!
Author's Response: SHIT GOT REAL. Haha. I'm glad you love it! Yes, although this wasn't exactly her fiery temper in full throttle. Emily made sure to keep herself as calm as she could. Lol. Ria, I don't know, I guess only time will tell whether anything else will hit the fan. Ooh yes, Momma Bear is scary! I guess we'll see! Thanks for the comment darling! Xx
Date: 03/06/13 09:01 am Title: Riot
oh my goodness i love the ed sheeran jumper *-* -
i love the chap - about time someone put ria in her place - and that she hit her - tom must feel really pleased that emily stoood up for him ;) cant wait for saturdayyy ;) best wishes ;)
Author's Response: Ed Sheeran is my homie! Haha. Yes, this chapter was a long time coming, super intense. I think Tom and Emily's relationship is really going to blossom from this point on and yeah! I didn't update Saturday! But thanks for the comment babes! Xx
Date: 03/06/13 08:33 am Title: Riot
So ;) before I read this chapter imma going review on your authors note ;) aha :D
- well for me i do think it would make it all more realistic that youŽd make bill in the story gay.. i mean - he literally screams gay at me - have you looked at him with his new hairdo? :D - it takes one to know one :D no but - this could be something bill doesnt know himself - going to be tough coming out of the closet - he never had a girlfriend obviously and probably havent thought about being gay - coz its so different and everyone is just this heteroself growing up and living and growing up in this small village called Loitsche everyone knows everbody and its hard to be anonymus.. you could for example write him that he realizes that.. or that emily talks to him about having a girl and than asking if he is queer or what.. i do think that could become interessting and i do think it would make fit the story better. bill heterosexuell with a girl? that i must see! :D - no seriously or you decide you leave him single - you know its your story and you decide what you gonna do - but yeah ;) so imma gonna read your chapter now ;) :D think about it - and leave me a review - k.
Author's Response: So I've thought about it, and I've made the decision that I'm not going to have Bill be gay. And that may not be agreeable for some people, but I feel like that's the way I want to take this story. I think making Bill gay would be the easy way out, if I'm being honest, so as the author to this story I do want a challenge, whether that be make Bill's character extremely different from what everyone is used to, or break free from the classification that most people have put him in. Although I appreciate the input and suggestions (because they were good). I think I just want to challenge myself, and explore Bill's character this way. It's not to say that your thoughts aren't appreciated because they are! You're amazing babes! Xx
Date: 03/05/13 03:03 pm Title: Revelation
Yup, Ria got what she what she asked for, I really hope she does'nt turn on Tom now seeing what she is capable off. Fingers crossed Tom Emily and Bill pull through this mess. And I hope you feel better. :)
Author's Response: Yes, Ria's plan backfired, just like it always does in these types of situations! But yes, I don't think Ria is someone who will go down with dignity. I think the three of them are strong enough to get through this most definitely! Thanks so much! Can't wait to hear from you again! Xx
Date: 03/04/13 12:18 am Title: Revelation
So, so good. I swear the plot gets thicker, richer and more addicting with each chapter. Your writing is blossoming greatly, as is your story. Keeping my eyes peeled for your next update.
Author's Response: Fangirling as always. Your username always sticks out like a sore thumb! So glad you're enjoying this. And thank you so much for the compliments! Glad you're reading this! Xx
Date: 03/03/13 11:40 pm Title: Revelation
Woah. I definitely wasn't expecting this! (I mean it in a good way btw) Well written, I love it! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad I was able to surprise you! I always love to throw in something unexpected (though I don't know if I succeed). Thanks for the comment babes! See you next chapter (or not? hopefully yes!) Xx
Date: 03/03/13 06:20 pm Title: Revelation
first of all, i hope you're feeling better!
Tom threw Ria out of the house?! i almost started jumping up and down!
and he should have done that way before all the shit went down!
poor Emily! she should really confront her mother, she can't run her life the way she sees fit for her!
and i really hope for an update when you fully recover!
Author's Response: First of all, thanks so much babes! Yes he did. haha! I love your enthusiasm! I think he was trying to ease Ria down lightly. She did move to LA for him, revolved her world around him (not healthy at all). I think Emily's outlook on everything will shift soon, and she'll pull through! Thanks so much. A new update is coming! Can't wait to hear from you then! Xx
Date: 03/03/13 01:33 pm Title: Revelation
Loved it ria is.a.dirty biotch!!!!!! Feel better!!
Author's Response: Hahaha! Let's all just hate Ria in this story. She deserves it. Lol. Thanks so much babes! I'm feeling better! Hope to hear from you next update! Xx
Date: 03/03/13 11:50 am Title: Revelation
i love it that there was a tom pov and that he finally broke up with ria.. i do hope he can find a way to get emily back - they sound like the right couple.
and bill needs to find someone too - maybe a pretty guy or so ;)
Author's Response: I liked being able to reveal Tom's head. I think it was a refreshing break from Emily and it really helped gain insight on everything. And yes, I think the break up was due. I think it'll be a process for the both of them to be ready to get into a relationship, but something they can definitely surpass. I agree, Bill needs to find a love interest. However, I'm not completely sure I'm willing to make him gay(excuse my choice of vocabulary) in this story. However it is something I'm considering! What do you think I should do? Thanks so much for the comment! Can't wait to hear your thoughts on the next one! Xx
Date: 03/03/13 09:24 am Title: Revelation
How bittersweet...But my spidey senses tell me this isn't the last we're going to see of Ria...that dirty slutface hoebag isn't going to give Tom up without a fight. Reading her and Toms argument was so frustrating, I just wanted to reach in there and slap her around the room. I can just see her threatening to go to the tabloids with the truth about Tom and Emilys past using the box in his closet. The idea makes me want to strangle her with that ridiculous red hair of hers. Some shits about to go down. Tom better fix it.
I hope you're feeling better hun! Take it easy!
Author's Response: Your spidey senses are tingling and I would say they're spot on. haha! She most definitely won't. I think Ria is just delusional. She needs to just take it as it is and walk away. But you know that's not going to happen because it's Ria. Lol. I wouldn't say that's not a possibility, there's precedence, and it's definitely something she's not above. Shit hit the fan, and I think everyone will be a bit surprised about who takes charge of the situation. Poor Tom. He can never catch a break. Lol. Thanks so much! It's greatly appreciated! Can't wait to hear your opinion on the next update! Xx
Date: 03/03/13 05:46 am Title: Revelation
Omg she fucking lied about the engagement!!! Tom should have told her when they were alone at the birthday!
YES YES YES they broke up!!!! I'm only fearing what Ria will do now :o
Author's Response: She's just a liar. haha. I don't think Tom really thought about it after she said it honestly. Not so much until after when he was really alone. Ria is ratchet. Don't believe for one second that she'll back down so easily! haha. See you next update! Xx
Date: 03/02/13 10:49 pm Title: Revelation
I hope you feel better honey!!! believe me when i say that i understand how you feel: ive been in the hospital for the past week with pneumonia: but your update made me smile :-) so much drama in this chapter but im glad that the red-headed devil is now out of the picture!!! Please update as soon as you get better; much love!!!! (p.s- i dont know if u got my last review or not... i asked if you planned to have Tom and Emily sleep together in this story? it would be beyond wonderfu to see how you write a love scene in between these 2)
Author's Response: Aww! Thanks so much babes! That means a lot! I'm so sorry to hear that! I hope you're doing better! I'm glad the update was able to make you smile! TONS of drama in this chapter. Haha Red- headed devil? You are hilarious. I love that so much! Haha. Honestly, my comments are being so weird right now. There are like 93 but there are like, four that have somehow dissapeared and I can't see them. If you haven't noticed I go through comments and reply to all of them after I submit each update to be approved. So, if you've left a comment and I haven't replied, you're most likely one of the missing comments I can't see, and I'm so sorry! This is kind of hard for me honestly, I'm planning on having them sleep together, but I don't know how good I would be at writing it, seeing as how I'm completely inexperience in that department! haha. I even changed the rating on this story because I really have to focus on it when the time comes. But yes, most definitely I will be writing multiple love scenes between the two. I'm just doing my research and preparing for it. haha! Thanks so much for the comment! I hope you'll stop by next update! Xx
Date: 03/02/13 08:53 pm Title: Revelation
I honestly have no words to describe my feelings about this chapter..... It was beyond amazing! I'm so in love with this it's insane!!! Are they gong to have babies and get married yet? I know I've asked before but now there's no Ria!!! :D
Author's Response: Oh! I'm so glad you enjoyed yourself reading this! I always get so giddy when people tell me they're in love with it! I'm so glad you are! Haha. Not yet! Definitely not yet, especially since I'm thinking of making a sequel. But don't get too excited, I don't think this is the last we'll see of Ria. haha! Can't wait to hear from you next update! Xx
Date: 03/02/13 07:16 pm Title: Revelation
Awww, i actually feel so bad for tom right now. :-(
Author's Response: I know. I don't think anyone really realizes that Tom is put in a hard position. The poor guy can never catch a break. Haha. Thanks so much for the comment! Hope to hear from you next update! Xx
Date: 03/02/13 04:11 pm Title: Revelation
Wow, it took me forever to read the chapter, just to be sure I got every single sentence right. Great chapter! I've been excited through the whole chapter and I'm really curious, how it's going on now! I'm sure it was not the last argument or dialogue, Tom and Ria had and I'm sure that there will come so much more. But now I'm pretty excited to read how the situation goes on between the three ones!
Author's Response: You probably notice the like, billion typos/ gramatical errors. I swear I need a beta, I'm way too lazy to go through my own writing to check it. Haha. I'm really glad that you liked the chapter. Yes, I think everyone knows full well that Ria won't take a hint, and she definitely doesn't back down when she needs to. The update is on it's way. So I hope you enjoy the interaction between the three! Xx
Date: 03/02/13 03:29 pm Title: Revelation
cant wait for mooooore :)
update sooooooon :)
Author's Response: The update should be coming soon! I've had a busy week but it should finally be up! Hope to hear your thoughts on the next update!
Date: 03/02/13 02:18 pm Title: Revelation
Wow, the break-up.. hoped for it, but didn't think it would actually happen right away!
But we're not really rid of Ria, right? I think that would be too good to be true, haha!
Great chapter! I'm SO curious what's going to happen in that room with the three of them in it ;D
Author's Response: The break up. Yup. A part of me feels like I rushed it, but at the same time time wise not so much. It's been about a month a little bit more since Emily came back into their lives. I don't think Ria will go away that easily. This girl ran to the press, she won't go down that easily. Thanks so much babes! Can't wait to see what you thought of the update! Xx
Date: 03/02/13 11:48 am Title: Revelation
Yey, first one to comment on this chapter.. I really like that argument dialogue between Ria and Tom and then Tom shifting to Emily, thinking about the things she did for him. I like that. I like it when writers do that. This is really good. Just keep up with the pace of the story.. 'till the next chapter.. ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad the flow between the two was good, it was something I was a bit worried about when writing this chapter. I think it was about time that Tom got his shit together, got his affairs in order and just opened his eyes. I'm glad you're enjoying this! See you next chapter! Xx