Date: 03/16/13 11:39 am Title: Stay With Me
Geez! My favorite chapter
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks so much for leaving the comment! I hope to hear from you again! Xx
Date: 03/16/13 10:59 am Title: Stay With Me
Awww finally!
So this might just be me thinking perverted bit i Wonder if she has sleept with anybody els between tom an now.... Yes i know in fucks up hahah
Author's Response: I think that's what everyone was thinking, it's been a long time coming these two! Well you'll find out soon! It's only natural to think about it! Haha. See you soon! Xx
Date: 03/16/13 08:52 am Title: Stay With Me
“I know I shouldn’t, but it’s just, I’ve been so used to being sad.”
Oh, loved it!
Such a great chapter, especially the part after that sentence!
Can't wait for your next update, hope it'll be veeeery soon:)
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked it! Regretfully I ran into some bumps in the road and the update wasn't soon, and I feel horrible about it! But thankfully I was able to pull myself together because the next update is up! Hope to hear from you! Xx
Date: 03/16/13 08:03 am Title: Stay With Me
Ohhh my, I enjoyed this chapter so much! I think it was the best way you could have chosen for their first kiss! Definitely! It was the perfect moment right now and reading this chapter, I could feel all of their emotions! I'm so happy for both of them! And of course curious as always, how it will go on :-D And don't be sad or disappointed because of the reviews. There are always people who take time to leave you a review and sadly, most of all readers are just too lazy and often do not realize, what feedback means to someone who writes such a story. So keep your head up
Author's Response: Oh wow! I'm so glad I was able to make the moment special. I really wanted to make sure that I could express the way they were feeling without going overboard or not doing enough; it was a bit of a struggle. But it seemed to work out for the best, so yay! I'm happy for the both of them too. They're my bby's! I know, it just can be such a bummer when you realize how many people are reading and not saying anything, but it's okay! I'm grateful for all my readers! Can't wait to hear from you this next update! Xx
Date: 03/16/13 06:55 am Title: Stay With Me
hey you. before i start telling you how awesome long this chapter is. i have to criticise you real quick. Tom doesnt have a snakebite piercing. Bill has a snakebite. Tom has a spiderbite. That I know coz i have the spiderbite aswell - before tom - so i didnt do it after him ;) just for you to know - ;)
i love it - they are kissing! and the chapter is so long. You write really good for nearly 19 :D - i actually have better things to do but stopped by - took a break with my mom nagging about doing the stuff i was supposed to do - but i took the time and read it - communication is the key - true to dat ;) i dont think you mean me with the whole not leaving comment stuff ;) :D -
best wishes ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know nothing about piercings so I'm glad you clarified for me! I owe you one for keeping me in the know(: Thanks so much! And I'm so grateful that you took the time out to leave a comment even though you had other things to do. Now that's dedication! I didn't mean you! Thanks for the wishes! The next update is finally up! Hope to hear from you soon! Xx
Date: 03/16/13 01:35 am Title: Stay With Me
FINALLY!!! Their stubborn asses were starting to irk me lol. Seriously though this was very beautifully written. I'm so in love with their love, it's crazy.
"Stay with me tonight."...Perfect. If she would've said no I would've thrown my laptop nbs lmao.
Can't wait for the next update:)
Author's Response: their stubborn asses were beginning to get on my nerves too! haha. A part of me feels like I rushed it a tad bit, but I felt like it was finally time to have them be together. Thank you so much! I'm glad the writing worked so well. I wish I had their love. Hell, I wish I had Tom's love. Lol. Well, maybe not, I don't know what Tom is like personally, but I'd like to hope he'd be this sweet. (I seriously doubt it though. Haha) The update is finally up! So happy to say that. Xx
Date: 03/13/13 03:49 am Title: Inception
Yay for a little bit of Torg c: I love it, this chapter made me laugh! Made my day! n_n Can't wait till the next chapter~
Author's Response: YEAH! I miss Torg. I can't wait for the band to start doing interviews and stuff. I miss the G's. Haha. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks so much for commenting babes! Hope to hear from you soon! Xx
Date: 03/12/13 05:02 am Title: Inception
Ha! It was a pleasure as always! I totally loved Tom in this chapter, from being silly to totally honest.xD Hope to read you soon
Ps. send you an ask on Tumblr xD
Author's Response: I just adore you so much! You go out of your way to make me feel appreciated. Your tumblr message was so wonderful! I thought it was a good transition into this part of the story. Things are definitely going to change now! Thanks so much for the comment babes! Can't wait to hear from you again! Xx
Date: 03/11/13 06:17 pm Title: Inception
oh my goodness - ian is such a diva - he would totally match bill :D - haha :D just messin with ya ;) this is a really great chapter - tom coming out about loving emily infront of her mum and all ;) cant wait for more ;) hey - you posted on a monday ;) :D keep it coming, sweet cheecks x
Author's Response: Ian is a drama queen and I just want to cuddle with him because he's so precious. Love that guy. Haha. Tom has been stepping up these last chapters and I'm just loving that. Haha. That was really brave considering you don't want to get on the wrong side of Em's Mom. Haha. I know it's not like me to update on Monday's. Another update should be up by Wednesday! And I hope to hear from you then! Xx
Date: 03/11/13 01:00 pm Title: Inception
looooooooooved it :)
update sooooooon!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you did! Thanks so much for the comment babes! I will try to get an update up by Wednesday! Xx
Date: 03/11/13 11:27 am Title: Inception
Oh shit! Mom is a deviant MASTERMIND!!! I LOVE IT! As usual your updates make my day! I'm so happy that she is ok with their relationship and that Tom told her his true feelings.
Will continue to stalk for updates!!!
Author's Response: Mom is scary and you just don't want to fuck with her. That's all I have to say because DAMN. She's like Capone or whatever that mobsters name is. Lol. Tom has really manned up these last couple chapters. So proud of him! haha. Thanks so much! Can't wait to hear from you next update!
Date: 03/11/13 10:26 am Title: Inception
I thought, Emily's mom was going to cause some heavy drama, but she didn't. Nice transition there on Emily's mom. Overall, this is a really light chapter... :)
Author's Response: You see how I turned the tables there? Huh? I thought it's about time Emily caught a break, the poor girl is carrying the weight of the world on her shoulders. Thanks babes! So glad you commented, I'm getting hardly any love on this update. Makes me sad. Oh well. haha! Catch you next time! Xx
Date: 03/10/13 12:16 pm Title: Riot
Yeah, I agree with Bill, she will have a bruise days. And it is so funny! Ria really needs to learn the term 'get out'.
This story is getting better and better with every chapter. It really is an amazing story.
I am looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Well that's what she gets for being a hag. Emily regrets nothing. I REGRET NOTHING. Haha. But seriously, Ria really needed to get her head back to reality. She was embarrassing herself past redemption. Lol. I'm so glad that you think that! I'm looking forward to hearing from you in the next chapter! Xx
Date: 03/08/13 04:03 pm Title: Riot
i love it! amazing chapter! can't wait for the next chapter! n_n
Author's Response: Thanks so much darling! I'm glad you're liking what you're reading/what I'm writing! Whenever you guys comment it makes my day! Talk to you soon babes! Xx
Date: 03/07/13 01:13 pm Title: Riot
Okay... so I've been reading this story since the beginning and I love it but this chapter has to be my favorite so far :). The end was fucking great and I can't wait until her mother shows up lol. Awesome story!!! :)
Author's Response: ERMERGERD! Are you a new commenter? I think you are! I'm always so excited to hear from silent readers! Please come back and leave a comment I love discussing with the readers and getting view points! (And if you're not a new commenter this will be awkward and I apologize in advance for not recognizing your username). But I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter! Thanks so much for the comment babes! YOU'RE AWESOME. Hope to hear from you soon! Xx
Date: 03/06/13 05:58 pm Title: Riot
that's what a sick girl needs!
i really wanted all of it to end with a punch! but i do have a feeling things are just starting...
nice work girl!
Author's Response: I'm bummed you're not feeling better! I hope you have a quick recovery soon, and I'm writing the next update for you! Although it's already late and whatever, but I'm going to try and write another update tonight to entertain you! Haha. The punch was long overdue. Ria needs to stop messing with Emily. SHE'S A BULLY. Haha Thanks babes! Can't wait to hear from you again! Feel better! Xx
Date: 03/06/13 05:36 pm Title: Riot
WOW! that was a great chapter... can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much boo! So glad you enjoyed this! Can't wait to hear your thoughts on the next one! Xx
Date: 03/06/13 03:05 pm Title: Riot
Ria is so going to report that slap or she is going to fake a pragnanse....
Do happy they kind of worked it out :)
Author's Response: Ria just needs to back off. I can't even, I'm so done with her at this point (even though I'm writing her character. lol). I'm glad you're happy! Can't wait to hear your reaction to the next one! Xx
Date: 03/06/13 02:49 pm Title: Riot
Aaahh, new update :)
First: Congratulations to over 100 reviews!!
Their discussion was great and then ... Ria! She really had it coming. We all waited for that slap to happen haha :D
And the situation at the end is so great, I love the last sentence!
I've read your thoughts whether to have a gay Bill in this story or not.. I think it's really up to you as the author.
But I wanted to say, I was so happy to finally come across another good HET fanfiction because Slash's everywhere and at some point it's just nice to read some HET again :D
So maybe I have a preferation after all..hm, either way I'm excited to see what's going to happen! :)
Anyways, looking forward to the mum-talk!
Author's Response: ERMERGERD I'M SCREAMING! I never thought in a million years that I would ever get to 100 comments before hitting 20 chapters, so I'm in like complete awe right now. I think it was about time that Tom kind of put his fist down and made Emily take a step back. Bill is so funny. I just find that I'm gravitated to make him humorous. Yes! I've come to the conclusion that Bill is going to be straight in this story, and some might not like, some might be dissapointed, but that's what I'm going to do and I'm going to roll with it! Thanks so much for the comment, always appreciated! Xx
Date: 03/06/13 02:21 pm Title: Riot
First of all, how could you think I would stumble over all those grammatical mistakes in the chapter? You know, I'm kind of a pretty mess when it comes to english and I always try to make my comments as understandable as possible :D
So next: I loved this chapter! After the last one, I was wondering why Bill was kind of such an asshole towards Tom.. But this chapter makes those thoughts kind of fly away! And I really really LOVED the situation when Bill stood up and spoke his "wisdom" - as you called it so perfectly - and his thoughts about the situation, after watching their conversation in silence. Great dialogue and it was absolutely necessary to speak out!
And then - I really really love the situation at the end. Wasn't this obviously I would totally enjoy this situation? :D Again I would tell you how strong emily seems to me, and you would tell me the opposite. But what I mean when I say something like this is just my view on how Emily is able to react when it comes to difficult situations. Maybe she's not the strongest person, but whenever it's necessary - or mostly - she's able to go out of it as a winner, and not as the loser. Do you know what I mean?
So Ria can go now, I'm telling her a biiiiig goooodbyeeee! :-D But I'm SURE there is a "see you soon?" :D Well whatever, great great chapter, great dialogues, great emotions! Looking forward to the next one and I hope you won't let us wait too long :-)
Author's Response: I'm just really OCD about it, and I'll go back and read it once it's published and I want to punch myself in the throat for the stuff I do/don't do with spelling and verb tense and stuff. Lol. Yes! I wanted to show that both Tom and Emily are extremely comfortable with Bill knowing their business, there's nothing they really hide from/keep from Bill and I wanted to show that the bond Emily had with Tom and Bill is deep. I know what you mean! I misinterpreted what you meant, or rather you didn't clarify and I assumed you meant one thing. But yes I agree, I think Emily doesn't give herself enough credit. And I think she's capable of things she doesn't think she is. Well, I don't know, maybe Ria will come back later on down the line, but for the most part, it's definitely time for Emily to catch a break!