Date: 06/06/13 04:32 pm Title: Yours
Ur seriously being to hard on yourself. The sex scene was fantastic. U did a really good job on it. Great chapter! Can't wait til ur next update :)
Author's Response: I think it's because I wanted to make sure that it came out good, and since I've never done it before I kept second guessing everything I was writing. I was honestly cringing while writing it because I just kept thinking what the hell are you writing? Haha. But thanks so much! Can't wait to hear what you have to say about the next update! Xx
Date: 06/06/13 09:41 am Title: Yours
Lovely chapter! And I'm not telling you this because of the nice scene at the end, but also because of the whole whole whole chapter! I really enjoyed their conversation at the beginning and I'm so glad they are back to good and .... ha, everything! Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Well thank you so much! I was a freaking hot mess, but I just think it's important that Tom and Emily communicate now that they're together. So it's nice to ind of weave through arguments and find a way for them to meet halfway (or in this case have Tom realize how stupid he is. Haha). The love scene was just a train wreck. My OCD came out and it wasn't cute. Can't wait to hear what you have to say about the next udpate! Xx
Date: 06/06/13 05:37 am Title: Yours
it was pretty good not a disaster at all ;) I enjoy this story a lot ;) Keep it going
Author's Response: Haha. I was just gawd. I was a mess writing it. Completely crazy because I couldn't get it the way I wanted. But thanks so much for the feedback, I'm glad to know I didn't completely butcher it! Hope to hear from you soon. Xx
Date: 05/06/13 01:16 am Title: Quarrel
You are back! Yeah! You should have Let us know that you were having a writers block!
Tom and Emily are so cute together but of Tom to think that Emily had to stay absent when he was perfectly fine fucking with ria - I don't understand :/
Bill needs someone too - hint hint.
Now for the girls name. If you need some independent girls I would go for a name like Shane (it's a girlsname yeah) , Robyn, Charly, janea (schaney), Pippa.
If its lovely girls, I'd go for: Lilly, Summer, Aubrey, Perrie, Maya
As long as you still update this story :)
Keep it coming!
Great that you are back :)
Author's Response: Well there was really no way for me to tell you guys. I could have added an Author's Note at the end of the last chapter after I realized but I doubt anyone would have been checking. Tom's a dude, it's one of those thing that guys definitely pull, Tom's no different. He'll get his shit together no worries! I'm working on Bill, although it'll take some time because I don't want it to be cliche or anything like that. I said in the Author's Note that I'm not looking for girl names, that I have the character names already. What I wanted or would have appreciated were possible band names, but thanks for the suggestions. Glad to know that you at least read some of the long ass author's note at the end! haha. I'll continue to update this story as long as I think there's a story to tell. Thanks for the positive feedback! Hope to hear from you next update! Xx
Date: 05/02/13 10:22 pm Title: Quarrel
i really missed this story ! im so happy you updated!!!!
Author's Response: I missed it too. Although I've come to the realization that this is such fluff that it's making me cringe a little. Oh well, Tom's a sap, I'll live with it. Haha. Another update will be coming within the week! Hope to hear from you again! Xx
Date: 04/30/13 07:27 pm Title: Quarrel
So I was half way through the chapter when i got tricked into taking my kids to Chuck E Cheese... Now I wanna know if Emily had been with someone else. And she's been back together with Tom for 2 weeks and they haven't done it?!?! This might be the sexual deviant in me but I would've been bounced on that lol...ijs. I bet they'd both be a little less tense if they had some sexual healing lol. Love Ian, he reminds me of a friend I had I'm high school!!!
Author's Response: Now I want to go to Chuck E Cheese! Haha. Oooh gurl, you'll find out next update which will be coming out soon. Haha! I think I wanted to build up this tension, so I made sure to have them abstain for a good chunk of time, it always makes things more interesting! Ian is amazing. Love him so much. Lol. Xx
Date: 04/30/13 06:27 pm Title: Quarrel
Now i really wanna know if she did sleep with anybody other than Tom!
Author's Response: You'll find out next update! Had to keep you coming back! haha(:
Date: 04/30/13 05:34 pm Title: Quarrel
Fantastic chapter :) I usually suck ass at coming up with names unless it just comes to me from out of nowhere. So I'm not going to be much help. But, I'm looking forward to reading ur new stuff and also an update of this :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I don't now why people keep thinking I'm asking for character names, when I stated that I already know who the main characters are going to be and what their names are going to be (sorry for the rant, it's just really starting to irk me). Haha. I'm looking forward to writing it, once I can figure out the girl group name, it's proving to be a complete bitch. Haha. Hope to hear from you next update!
Date: 04/30/13 04:03 pm Title: Quarrel
Katarina, Katinca, Doralisa, Anne-Mary, Isabell(a), Natasha, Anya, Antonia, Catya/Catia/Katia, Karina, Sonya, Ranya, Anette, Antonella, Ariana, Christina/Christine, Christa, Jacqueline, Claudette, Darlene, Yvonne, Lizzette, Maribel, Nadine, Nadia, Nicole/Nikkole/Nichole, Suzanna, Gwendolyn/Gwendolin, Aisha, Kalila, Khadija(lovely arabic name), Chiara/Kiara, Teodora("gift of God" also my name :D) Kassandra... my email: tewtsaaa@yahoo.com
Author's Response: I already told LiveLife and I just am going to start by apologizing because I wasn't specific enough when it came to expressing what I really wanted. I don't need help coming up with character names. What I wanted help with is figuring out a band name for the girls. Error on my part and inability to express what I really wanted clearly, I apologize for the miscommunication. Although some of the names you submitted have really sparked my interest! Thanks so much for the comment/suggestions. It's greatly appreciated! Xx
Date: 04/30/13 02:41 pm Title: Quarrel
Hey, the story's really good, even with writers block. I get that all the time and its not easy to deal with.
This new story of yours, I know your waiting for the banner, but I'd suggest that you decide on what type of group YOU want to be involved in your story. You could have the bad type girl group, popular, mysterious ect ect ect. Personally I find there aren't to many supernatural groups, like covens. You could even just form the group and call it 'the coven' but that's all up to you. It's your story and you can steer it in any direction you like. :)
P.S. can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Writers Block is the worst and I hate it with a passion, glad I still got it though. Haha. Regarding the new story, I wasn't clear in what I was saying but I do know what kind of group they're going to be. I already know characters and names and it wasn't a question of helping me figure out what kind of group they would be. I went in and clarified in my Author's Note but I was referring to a musical girl group; like the Spice Girls. I'm sorry if I confused you. I just needed help coming up with a band name. But thanks for your input, it was appreciated! The new chapter will be coming, you just have to be patient! Xx
Date: 04/30/13 02:28 pm Title: Quarrel
OMFG...I've missed you so much boo!!! I haven't even read the chapter yet, but I just had to tell you I'm so happy you're back !!!
Author's Response: I've been so out of it! Like seriously Writers Block is the absolute worst thing in the entire world! Glad to say I'm back! I can't wait to hear what you think about this chapter! Xx
Date: 04/13/13 03:39 pm Title: Stay With Me
Wow! I love this! I'm usually skeptical when it comes to reading Het because sometimes the girls tend to get on my nerves and it all seems a bit cheesy for me but i'm seriously happy that I've finally given this a chance. This is simply fantastic. Congrats on a story well done :)
Author's Response: That's how I am with slash, so no worries! I know that a lot of the time female characters are manipulated on this site to be the ideal girl for what they think Tom would fall for (a lot of the time OFC's have a lot of similar characteristics). But I just wanted to stay real and when I write female characters I'm not going to lie when I say I base them off of my personality or personalities of my friends. I find that doing that helps me keep the character grounded and realistic and not completely absurd. Haha. I'm really glad you gave this a chance, and I'm so glad you enjoy it. When slash readers actually enjoy my Het story it's just the biggest compliment! Thank you! Xx
Date: 03/27/13 08:14 pm Title: Stay With Me
I read this story within the past days and finally can leave a review saying how much I love your writing. Just like the way you describe everything, there are so many details that make the story more realistic. The plot isn't precipitated and I think that 14 chapters are a perfect span of time for Emily and Tom getting back togehter. I escpecially appreciate that each of your chapters is so long. Everytime I started reading I was so absorbed in it. Continue this story just like that, it's amazing! Happy birthday btw :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. When people say they love my writing it's a bit of a shocker. A lot of the times I criticize my writing until I think it's complete shit, so thank you so much for that. I wanted to make sure that this story was as realistic as I could make it. Things like relationships shouldn't be rushed and I wanted to make sure that characters and plot developed enough where they could stand alone either way. Technically it's 13 chapters since the coding is messed up on my story, but I still like to think that I gave it enough time! Your comment really meant a lot to me, and it helped me get through my Writers Block, so thank you! I hope to hear from you again! Xx
Date: 03/25/13 10:43 am Title: Stay With Me
Wow I just love the way you link facts to fiction, it makes the story so much more realistic. Keep writing! :D
Author's Response: Yes! I wanted to make sure that I kept it realistic. I even made a timeline from the Automatic video shoot up until their Japan trip. It was really important for me to keep this as real as I possibly could chronologically, and I'm glad it worked! Thanks so much! Can't wait to hear from you again! Xx
Author's Response: Yes! I wanted to make sure that I kept it realistic. I even made a timeline from the Automatic video shoot up until their Japan trip. It was really important for me to keep this as real as I possibly could chronologically, and I'm glad it worked! Thanks so much! Can't wait to hear from you again! Xx
Date: 03/25/13 06:39 am Title: Things Unsaid
I just love the way you write, you inspire me so much! But out of all the chapters I've read so far, the confrontation was my favourite bit. Aah, so many feelings.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying that! And I can't believe I inspire you! That really means the world. I'm extremely flattered! I think The Confrontation was an epic part of the story too! haha. The FEELS! Can't wait to hear from you again! Xx
Date: 03/20/13 04:36 pm Title: Stay With Me
its wednesday!!!! ;)
Author's Response: And I didn't update ): Writers Block completely blows. But luckily I've finally updated! Hope you enjoy it. Come and tell me your thoughts on the new one! Xx
Date: 03/18/13 09:48 am Title: Stay With Me
Yes I am an new commenter lol so don't worry about it being awkward lol. Awesome chapter by the way. So happy that they finally re-admitted that they want each other!!! Lol Tom is more stubborn here than in my stories lmao. Good job sweetie. The story is progressing well so don't worry about rushing anything :) awesome job!!!
Author's Response: Hey, I love new commenters! Welcome! Great you enjoyed the chapter! I think Tom is just as stubborn in real life, at least from what I've seen. Haha. thanks so much for the compliments! Hope to hear from you again! Xx
Date: 03/18/13 01:32 am Title: Stay With Me
ahsdjfklasd THIS WAS SUCH AN ADORABLE CHAPTER. OMG. AWH, THEY'RE SO CUTE TOGETHER.
I love the MMM video! &&Gustav looked so adorable, omg.
Can't wait till the next update~
Author's Response: AREN'T THEY SO ADORABLE IT'S DISGUSTING? Hahaha. Idk. I just find them totes adorbs. Lol. The MMM video was hilarious and the fan girl feels were coursing so strong. I was really bummed we didn't win, but oh well! It happens! Next update is FINALLY up. Can't wait to hear your thoughts on it! Xx
Date: 03/17/13 09:44 am Title: Stay With Me
YESSS FINALLY!! I really really love your writing keep up the good work AND if that's not obvious I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, babes! That really means a lot. I'm so glad that you're enjoying this! Your comments really make this whole experience worth while! Hope to hear from you on the next chapter! Xx
Date: 03/16/13 11:40 am Title: Stay With Me
Geez! My favorite chapter
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks so much for leaving the comment! I hope to hear from you again! Xx