this is just wonderful everything is falling into place :) but i still cant help but feel bad for Ria..her love for tom blinded her and clouded her judgment and sanity :(

HOLDDD UUP HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT Ria has some brass balls up in those pannies wow and then he finds a condom wrapper?! wow XD perfect timing i just cant believe she would cheat on Tom!! I mean we are talking about cheating on Tom fucking Kaulitz haha..anyway this chapter was just soo filled with drama..but i am deathly afraid of her mother seeing as how she values her rep and alot from the looks of it..i hope ria leaves peacefully and doesnt cause a riot....or hurt tom and ems rep even more :/

Literally my heart felt as if it was being ripped outta my chest when he said I love her :( but then i perked right up when he said but i will never be IN love with her :) but its still sad all this the sad convo they had and I am starting to feel sad for Ria i guess i can see it from her point of view as well...but what tom doesnt understand is that he just compared his relationship or said also that "he owed her" i think thats a wrong reason to remain with someone because he isnt only harming himself in the process but Rias as well :/ *le sigh* But the end just killed me i was like awwww love love love :D hehe onto the next chappie.

all my questions have been answered now i am curious to know toms side on how he took everything from their relationship to her leaving..so im guessing Tom was her first sex huh? ;) lol i knowww my mind always goes to the gutter poo :(

oh fuck no! who invited them!!?? her mom right!!? righ?? and to top it all off he bought Ria well fml then haha i feel so sorry for Emily..*le sigh*

I love your outfits keep putting them together :D ALSO dammit you just had to bring Ria in huh? :P I dont like her she was seemed like a bitch and is it mean that i read her lines out loud in a asian accent XD i caught myself after and was like hahahah wtf!

Loved it

I really liked a little bit comedy and some time with the three of them! Unfortunately, I was kind of thrown out of the action at times because you mixed up the names (Emily - Camilla).. As to the rest: I like ;)

Ok, I sat down and read this WHOLE story and I love it. Normally I don't read many het stories because they are incredibly cheesy and poorly written. But, you've given me some faith that well written het does exist!

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. As for a first time writing a love scene, you did very well! :D

Author's Response: NEW READER?! Ecstatic too hear from you! I'm so glad you took the time to read this, and that you actually really enjoyed it! I'm hoping you really enjoyed it! Yeah, I don't read slash on here, but the stories I read haven't (luckily) been super cliche. I like to keep things realistic so all my stories kind of stray from the obvious (they haven't always though. smh). Glad to have restored your faith! I find it so flattering. The next update should be up soon, I'm just waiting for it to be approved. And I hope to hear from you again! And thanks about the love scene. Haha! Xx

Don't cringe or be embarrassed, there's a first time for everything, and I thought you did it very well. The chapter itself is great. So don't be so hard on yourself your a fantastic writer. I am exited to see what happens next. I'll keep an eye out for your new story, it sounds interesting.

Author's Response: I wasn't so much embarassed as I was horrified at how horrible I was writing it (or how horrible I thought I was writing it, I should say). I'm glad to hear that I didn't completely butcher a love scene. And now that the first one is out of the way, I'm excited to see how I can make them better. I'm excited that you're excited to see what happens next! haha. My new story is up, so you should definitely check it out and leave a comment! Looking forward to hearing from you next update! Xx