Date: 08/22/11 11:11 pm Title: Not what I expected.
Great start but now I really want more. Is there an update coming soon?
Date: 01/19/09 11:12 pm Title: Not what I expected.
Poor Bill. LOL.
UPdate soon.
Date: 01/19/09 11:11 pm Title: Not what I expected.
Poor Bill. LOL.
UPdate soon.
Date: 10/13/08 11:49 pm Title: Not what I expected.
IT WAS AWESOME!!! update now? no? then very very soon. why are you still reading? WRITE!!!
Date: 08/12/08 05:23 pm Title: Not what I expected.
I like it! It's really good so far, so update soon :)
Date: 08/09/08 06:29 pm Title: Not what I expected.
good start to the story lloking forward 2 reading the rest
Date: 05/18/08 01:22 pm Title: Not what I expected.
This seems really interesting and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 04/18/08 07:10 pm Title: Not what I expected.
i think it's good so far!! more! :)
Date: 04/03/08 10:58 pm Title: Not what I expected.
I like! so far so good please
continue! ^_^
Date: 03/18/08 12:58 pm Title: Not what I expected.
i love it please make another one soon (pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaase)
Author's Response: Thank you..it will be up soon! =D
Date: 03/15/08 07:33 pm Title: Not what I expected.
I liked this alot and I prefer it to the violent stuff.I'm a little better at writing violent events in stories but its nice to read a story with just a regular thing happening.Please do update :)
Author's Response: Thank you, Actually the next chapter is my first attempt at violent stuff so I hope I don't suck.rn=D
Date: 03/15/08 04:27 pm Title: Not what I expected.
ah I'm really curious, more soon I really like it :]
Author's Response: Thank you I'll do it as soon as possible! =D