Date: 06/23/14 03:02 pm Title: 23. Realisations
I totally just read this whole story in one sitting. I love it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!! :) xx
Date: 06/01/14 07:42 am Title: 23. Realisations
wow, unexpected! I honestly thought that you dropped this fic. I'm still here, reading, waiting..:) thank you!
Author's Response: I sort of dropped it to work on something else that I might give to you guys and my studies but I'm glad at least some of you have stuck with me :) thank you so much x
Date: 05/11/14 09:21 am Title: 22. Glimpses
still waiting. i love this story.
Date: 01/22/14 08:34 am Title: 1. Propositions
oh my, please don't tell me this story is frozen. it's been 2 month and I'm just like...help?
Date: 12/14/13 12:05 pm Title: 22. Glimpses
very tokio hotel -ish soon :DD
hope to see a new chapter well...soon ^_^
Date: 11/29/13 01:34 pm Title: 22. Glimpses
oh my god this is beautiful why did you stop
you can't just leave it here and go
i'm concerning
want more
Author's Response: Haha! Sorryyy!! More soon, very soon, with even more loveliness, promise xx
Date: 11/16/13 09:11 am Title: 21. Escapists
Oh my poor ...heart can take no more of this! It's not fair to just "let this here", some people have a lot of other things to think of during weekend, decent things that is, which they already have a hard time to do as it was...woah, it's hot in here, gonna open the window! Forbidden fruit is the best, we all know that, so no wonder they're enjoying it so much ha ha. I have a good answer to the questions Raihna keeps asking herself, but I can't wait to see her find them on her own, because when she does, she will realise she has been living the most exquisite experience in the whole world. Love it, honey, they are both absolutely great and so well defined as characters, not to mention how good your Bill fits the Bill we know (well, what we think we know). Good job, hun!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think I'm doing him justice! I'm always so happy to hear from you too, you always make me smile :) speaking of having things to do on weekends, I'm Christmas shopping!! So, until next time, thanks honey xx
Date: 11/15/13 03:45 pm Title: 20. Worries
I'm too tired to exolain all of my feeelings right now, I had a killer week, but I need to say that the struggle you were talking about is hard to spot. All I did see was the excellent writing, the natural flow of the story. Iguess you gotta work some to get here, but it surely pays off, girl. Now allow me to get some sleep, because I would be disrespectful not to give the next chap all my attention. See you there!
Author's Response: Ha, tell me about it! But finally it's the weekend :) have a nice sleep and, as always, thank you so much hon, you're always so lovely! Much love xx
Date: 11/14/13 07:03 pm Title: 21. Escapists
Hey,thank you for the advice about my situation. I hope after enough time he will come back to me. It means a lot to have someone actuall understand what I'm going through rather than just saying 'forget about him, he's an asshole and doesn't deserve you'. So again, thank you so so much.
Anywaaay, this chapter was brilliant. It definitely made me blush somewhat, and I almost felt like I was sneaking around whilst reading. It wasn't too raunchy, nor too placid. Just the right amount of suspense, anticipation and drama. I loved it. Your descriptions of everything are just so good, and so realistic. My favourite story by far! And by the way, the dream sequence was to die for. It made everything that much more tense, for lack of a better word. Can't wait for your next upload.
Much love from London xxx
Author's Response: It's no problem! Sometimes those friendly words of encouragement just aren't enough...but he does sound like an arsehole...anyways! I'm glad you're enjoying it, I just love writing for you guys! Hopefully I'll have something more soon, much love from Newcastle xx
Date: 11/14/13 05:46 pm Title: 1. Propositions
Overall I am really enjoying your story. That being said, it could be better if you got a beta. There are quite a few grammatical errors, and at times you seem to repeat yourself a lot, which slows down the flow of the story. But I do like the characters, and the story line. Also, her dream with Bill and Tom is very interesting!
Author's Response: Thanks, I guess it's because I just write without thinking, it just flows, I am slowly making my way through old chapters and altering them and will upload them in time, that being said, thanks for taking your time to read! X
Date: 11/12/13 06:48 pm Title: 20. Worries
I've been following this story for so long and this chapter just brought tearsto my eyes. The story you've written has really struck a cord with me... I had this kind of relationship with my best friend, and although we never had sex (I'm a virgin), he did kiss me and touch me and treated me like his girlfriend. It was our secret... and I fell in love with him. I told him last week how I felt and he said he didn't mean any of it and that it mant nothing and he doesn't feel the same...but the way Bill is acting in the story is exactly how he acted...and I feel so heartbroken and so empty because I've lost the love of my live and my best friend all in one go and not speaking to him is killing me. He was very harsh and cold to me so I've opted for no contact. He said some pretty horrible things...and I'm wondering will this happen to Bill and Rae in the story? Telling you all this is making me feel better, and your story just reminds me of my own situation. Telling your best friend you're in love with them is the scariest thing in the entire world. You've encompassed everthing in your plot so perfectly. All the looks, touches, feelings, every skip of a heart beat is on point. And although it breaks my heart to read your story, I'm hooked. It's beautifully written and I can't say anything other than well done and keep up the excellent work. I hope everything works out for our two protagonists just as much as I hope my best friend comes back to me and tells me he does in fact love me too and that everything that happened wasn't meaningless. Can't wait for your next chapter! x
Author's Response: Guys suck! I've found myself in this situation before too, it's almost identical to yours, the best thing to do is cut all contact because, when he's ready, he'll make the choice to come back. Time is a great healer but writing down your feelings is good for you! I'm so happy that you chose to share that with me, I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story, as for the future...I have something planned 😜 thank you xx
Date: 11/12/13 10:08 am Title: 20. Worries
Thank you for the fast update!
omg, when will they stop worrying about everything? c'mon guys have a happy sexy times with each other, take Tom with you and let there be a happines all over the place! :D
Author's Response: No problem :) Haha, carefully what you wish for ;) so glad you're still enjoying it!! Xx
Date: 11/09/13 01:25 pm Title: 19. Distractions
Hmmm...you can have like one week before I start screaming for more, but hey, no more tricks! Fast and just as good! I absolutely love the way they're acting, speaking, your words and all the feelings, it makes you live your first love once again. Good job, girl, keep it up!
Author's Response: :) I'll TRYYYY for a week haha...no more tricks...maybe I need reigning in, keep me on track...anyhoooo, thank you so very much! Xx
Date: 11/09/13 12:29 pm Title: 18. Anticipations
Sorry, girl, for not being here for you when you updated, I swear that whoever designs our lives had nothing else to do these last two months but fill my days and nights with work. Anyway, now I'm here and I have to say that I really really missed you and these two funny guys playing the oldest game in the world. Yes, tension is so good, makes the story and Bill crazy ha ha! Now if you'll excuse me, I NEED to go push the button, see you at the end of the chap!
Author's Response: Preaching to the crowd sister!! Hence the long time between updates! I missed you guys toooo! But I'm glad that you're enjoying it still, even if I am HORRENDOUS at updating on time x
Date: 11/09/13 02:59 am Title: 1. Propositions
I'm normally quite lazy in remembering to review , but this is such a wonderfully written story , it deserves so much more reviews then it currently has, anyway i'm hooked i just love the way the story line is evolving keeps me coming back for more :)
Date: 11/08/13 09:32 am Title: 19. Distractions
wow wow wow it was hoooot! thank you!
I see there's Bill/Tom/OFC in side pairings, so I'm intrigued now... :)
Author's Response: Danke!! :D you should be intrigued... Xx
Date: 11/07/13 10:59 am Title: 18. Anticipations
sooo....I definitely want more xD for like... two months already? we miss you :'(
Author's Response: I missed you guys tooooooo! But hopefully this new chapter I've just uploaded will be enough food for thought for...now... :) THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH xx
Date: 09/19/13 04:00 pm Title: 18. Anticipations
Oooooooh!
Author's Response: I know, right?! :D more to come!!! Xx
Date: 09/18/13 12:00 am Title: 18. Anticipations
I am completely in love with this story. I can actually relate very much!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad it's relatable, I mean, it's not an ordinary situation as such so.... :D THANKS, again! Xx
Date: 08/25/13 08:04 pm Title: 17. Readjustments
I am literally dying for chapter 18 :D