Date: 05/24/13 06:41 pm Title: Nothing is Perfect
cant wait for more
Date: 05/22/13 11:37 am Title: Reality
No wonder Bill acts out like he does. Gordon is a real piece of work and I certainly hope that karma bites him in the ass...hard! It's hard to imagine Tom and Bill getting together in this but hopefully they'll be good for each other. On to the next chapter. :)
Date: 05/22/13 07:30 am Title: Beginnings
I ran out of chapters, that's what happened ! I need more!!!!! You don't understand. It's like happy crack!
Date: 05/21/13 07:23 pm Title: Beginnings
Cliff hanger alert! I love this story! Its filled with suspense. Gordon is an asshole -_- but you are an awesome writer! Keep it coming please ^.^
Date: 05/21/13 04:29 am Title: Nothing is Perfect
Great chapter, ready for more! I hope Gordon gets what he deserves and rots in a cell, or worse. Love how you describe the way Toms been feeling; headaches, dizziness, nauseated...very realistic.
Date: 05/21/13 02:46 am Title: Nothing is Perfect
Nooooo!!!! I need more chapters! The little 'next' sign makes me so happy and it's gone. Why?!?!?! Update soon! Fanfiction is life and I'm dying here! I need sleep. But there is no time for that, there's only time for TH-fiction.
Author's Response:
Wait what happend?
Date: 05/21/13 12:19 am Title: Nothing is Perfect
Such a cliff hanger! I gotta know what happens next.
Date: 05/21/13 12:18 am Title: Nothing is Perfect
Very good chapter :) I'm anxious to know if Tom is getting his vision back or not.
Date: 05/20/13 11:26 pm Title: Nothing is Perfect
AHHHHH Tom's getting his vision back! :D (I hope). Yayyy! PLEASE UPDATE SOONER THAN SOON!!
Author's Response:
Yes it will be sooner then soon :) LOLZ <3 <3 thanks for leaving a review
Date: 05/20/13 10:43 pm Title: Nothing is Perfect
Did he take the stuff out f Bills hotel room to burn? Or did he just take the things Bill left at home? I assume he didn't burn the hotel trash can...right? That doesn't seem like it'd be very smart...
Is it odd of me to be worried about whether they will be able to redo their presentation?
Well, I'm glad we know that Tom is already out of the coma, and is just sleeping now, and I really hope that his vision stays.
I'm really curious how Simone is going to handle the situation with Bill, especially on top of her situation with Tom.
Keep up the awesome work! I can't wait to see the next chappie!
Author's Response:
He burned Bill's things that were in the house. and maybe you like school thats why your worrired about if they can redo the presention. :) thank you so much for reading and more to come <3 <3
Date: 05/20/13 08:37 pm Title: Nothing is Perfect
Tom is getting is vision back! Yeah!
Date: 05/20/13 08:09 am Title: Nothing is Perfect
Oh oh oh you have to continue soon!
Author's Response:
Don't worry there will be more soon :D <3 <3
Date: 05/20/13 07:36 am Title: Nothing is Perfect
Oh mi god! I need more soon! This is so good! I hope Gordon will not hurt Bill ever again >:( Great chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks im glade you think so :D happy to know peoeple still look fowared to me Updateing :) <3 <3
Date: 05/20/13 06:05 am Title: Nothing is Perfect
Please update soon because I loved it! however, I do feel pity for Bill... He goes trough so much. And please let Tom get his sight back!
Author's Response:
glade you loved it :D <3... makes me happy you reviewd
Date: 05/20/13 02:17 am Title: Beginnings
Bill seems quite warped and broken here. I wonder how Tom will affect his life? Hmmm putting a blind boy with a troubled teen with no self-esteem. Guess I'll have to head for the next chapter to find out if they even meet. :)
Date: 04/27/13 12:56 pm Title: Blurred vision
I really love your story and I think I've said this already for a 1000 times. :) I can't even imagine that someone cannot like it... Please post a new one soon!!
Date: 04/20/13 04:14 pm Title: Blurred vision
Why do I have the horrible feeling that Bill is going to have the nasty surprise of Gordon waiting for him back in his hotel room?
Date: 04/20/13 12:18 am Title: Blurred vision
Great chapter!
I hope that Gordon will not find Bill.
Date: 04/19/13 08:33 pm Title: Blurred vision
Omg! Can't wait to read more!!! :D
Date: 04/19/13 05:07 pm Title: Blurred vision
Really happy you updated. Tom's intentions are good in not wanting to worry his mother, but he should really tell her because she'll be worried anyway if his dizzy spells and flashes of light become worse and she discovers what's been going on. And now Tom's got Bill all worried too. I loved Bill's sexy dream, and it might just come true that Tom will be able to see him one day if those flashes of colour and light are anything to go by. Fingers crossed. But, oh hell, Gordon found that card with the motel details on it. He's going to track Bill down, isn't he? And what will he do when he finds him...nothing good, I'm sure. This was a great chapter. Please update again soon.