Date: 07/11/13 08:21 pm Title: Joe
yikes! can't wait to see what happens next!! D:
Date: 07/11/13 11:45 am Title: Joe
That douche stole Tom. He's going to pay for bruising his face. Poor Bill, at least he found someone who wants to help him and not hurt him.
Author's Response:
i needed to put somone in there to help him, cuase if i didnt i wouldnt have know how bill would have even gotten out. :) thank you for reading and reviewing like always <3<3<3 it makes my day
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Date: 07/11/13 02:07 am Title: Joe
MoreMoreMore...PLEASE!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reavieing and reading :) im glade you like it and yes there will be more :) <3 <3 <3
Date: 07/11/13 01:26 am Title: Joe
I really hope Bill escapes so he can be reunited with Tom! Once again and amazing chapter :) can't wait to read more.
Date: 07/11/13 01:24 am Title: Joe
Ooooo having Tom get kidnapped by Gordon was a good touch. Added more suspense to the chapter. Loved it :)
Date: 07/10/13 09:48 pm Title: Beginnings
yeah grandfather, sorry
Do you have facebook?
Author's Response:
It's Nena kaulaus
Date: 07/10/13 09:04 pm Title: Beginnings
hugs
i hope your dad will be ok
love you
Author's Response:
he's my grandfather not my dad. and thank you :) for carring
Date: 07/10/13 08:55 pm Title: Joe
cant wait for more
what happened to your grandfather? sorry for prying, just curious
Author's Response:
My grandfather broke his hip and he's 78 and it's a risky surgary. :( im sared for him :( and not it's ok that you asked i dont mind :) thank you so much for leaving a review like always <3
Date: 07/10/13 06:48 pm Title: Joe
I do not want Tom to be violated. I hope that both boys will be saved soon.
Author's Response:
oh no i promised my self no more violatuions :) thank you so much for reviewing :)
Date: 07/10/13 05:55 pm Title: Joe
I hate Gordon so much ):
Poor Bill and Tom!
Please please update soon! Every time I see there is a new chapter I'm so happy and want more!
Author's Response:
im so happy you liked it. im so scared people are going to just stop reviewing one day :( but as always YOU REVIEW THANK YOU SO MUCH :D <3 <3 and i hate Gordon to
Date: 07/10/13 04:57 pm Title: Beginnings
Its like totaly speachless. Joe is wanting to help bill and tom is stuck thre too. Its awsome!
Date: 07/10/13 04:27 pm Title: Joe
O.o
Author's Response:
I'm not sure what your trying to say with that. but :/
Date: 07/10/13 03:49 pm Title: Joe
Awesome chapter! Seriously cannot wait until the next one!
Date: 06/29/13 01:49 pm Title: Stolen
Wow...This chapter made me speachless. You really took your writings to another level and for that you can be proud of yourself :) I loved it all even the rape part was very good, my compliments to your BETA for that. I have a question. Did I missed something in the last chapter? Cause since when do they have a relationship? :) Keep up the good work!!! ^^
Date: 06/22/13 05:01 am Title: Stolen
I just started reading this today and I can't wait to see where this goes! :o It's really good, definitely looking forward to updates! :D
Date: 06/20/13 10:36 pm Title: Stolen
uh oh
cant wait for more
Pleass update soon
OMG WE WON BEST FAN ARMY AND BEST SUPERFAN
Date: 06/20/13 09:47 pm Title: Stolen
*facepalm* Tom, Tom,Tom... You distrust him, and are still going somewhere with him? That's stupid, and doesn't even make any sense.
Gordon is a sick bastard. And how the here do these people even find each other?!?! I wouldn't even know where to start to find a human trafficker...
Poor Billa *huggles* I hope he gets saved soon, and that Tom doesn't get trapped too...
Ok, I'm still interested, but this chapter is just...it just doesn't feel quite right with the story...I dunno. I think it just doesn't feel 'realistic' anymore...if that makes sense? But I still look forward to seeing the next update
Date: 06/20/13 07:33 pm Title: Stolen
No Tomi!!!!!! Go back home XD
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review means so.much to me !!! . <3 <3
Date: 06/20/13 07:08 pm Title: Stolen
I think this was a good chapter but things are getting a bit out of hand really. It really isn't anyway realistic anymore and yeah.. i think it starting to get too unrealistic and with the start that was more realistic this doesen't fit. And I'm starting to slowly getting bored and uninterested about this fic. And I think that's a shame because I really liked the previous chapters! I hope you will write more soon though and hopefully I will get interested about this again :)
Author's Response:
I actually feel enbsressed about this chappter. :/ and yes its getting unrealistic ..... i hope you will enjoy the next chappter. Becuase when my readers arent happy neather am i :( i apoligize that u didnt like it ..... anyways thank u for leaveing a review better chappter next time .
Date: 06/20/13 09:56 am Title: Stolen
Just don't have them grape tom and ill be okay ;v; nd poor bill!!!! But I'm wondering its its bushido....nd the nice one is kay-one.....am I right? Do I get a cookie AND YAY FOR UPDATES!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for revewing !! :) glade you liked it