Date: 01/27/13 03:23 pm Title: Beginnings
I love it, I can't wait to see what else you come out with
Date: 01/27/13 01:52 pm Title: Beginnings
Hhahaha Bills character is funny.! This is very well written! I'm already in love with it!
Date: 01/27/13 08:20 am Title: Beginnings
love it
Author's Response:
thank you fir review means alot to me
Author's Response:
thank you fir review means alot to me
Date: 01/27/13 07:28 am Title: Beginnings
Whoa.. Is Tom blind now?
Author's Response:
thank you so much for leaving a review :)...... and you'll find out thank you for reading
rnDate: 01/27/13 05:17 am Title: Beginnings
What I think or actually hope what happen next is, now Bill is walking away from school he will meet Tom in the streets. Because he is blind and don't know where the hell he is, Bill help him to find his way back. They started to talk and because Tom can't see Bill's face, he is very interresting in Bill's life because he loves the sound of his voice. Maybe a little stalking of Tom's side??
Date: 01/27/13 05:15 am Title: Beginnings
Omg I love this. Bill's character is awesome, and I love his attitude and apparent lack of respect for, well, the rest of the world. It will be interesting to see how Tom shows him how life should be, and I'm eager to learn more about their personal lives. Fabulous first chapter! Update soon :)
Author's Response:
OH thank you so much for leaving a review :) and more will come dont worry.
Date: 01/27/13 05:05 am Title: Beginnings
Great first chapter! It made me already curious to the next chapter. How's Tom's life now? How will Bill and Tom meet eachother and under what situation. I just love it!!!
Date: 01/27/13 04:58 am Title: Beginnings
The description of Bill in the halls at the school was great. I really pictured it and visualized it. Can't wait for more!
Date: 01/27/13 04:57 am Title: Beginnings
I liked how the beginning was full of suspense as Simone was looking for Tom. Very well written.