Date: 04/01/13 04:34 am Title: Innocence
I love this!! I love how Bill slowly open up to Tom
Author's Response:
thank you :) and ya i i wanted somthing good but not dramatic.. thank you for leaving a review :) it made my day <33333333333333
Date: 04/01/13 02:54 am Title: Innocence
:3 i loveeed ittttt uppdatteeee soooon :D I hope everything in the past month has worked itself out for you :) I hope next month is better!!!
Author's Response:
THank you for asking :3 and yes everything yas gotten better . thank you for leaving a review :D <3333333333333333333333333333
Date: 04/01/13 02:41 am Title: Innocence
Yet again a great and descriptive chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 04/01/13 02:40 am Title: Innocence
It's so cute how caring Tom is towards Bill!
Date: 03/27/13 03:55 pm Title: Beginnings
Just started reading and I'm already in love with the story! The characters are so well written and everything is described so well that I feel as though I'm part of the story :)
Date: 03/26/13 08:29 pm Title: Bruises
Well...I really like this! I really look forward to reading more chapters! Update soon!
Date: 03/26/13 08:20 pm Title: Reality
A www, poor Bill :( Gordon is an ass! But this story is getting very good! Keep it up!
Date: 03/26/13 08:12 pm Title: Beginnings
I really enjoyed this chapter! I especially liked the beginning!
Date: 03/16/13 01:52 pm Title: Bruises
it's a very beautiful story
i hope that you write farther
Date: 03/09/13 04:06 am Title: Bruises
this is very well written. love how the characters are being introduced as far as personality goes. cant wait to read more.
Date: 03/05/13 03:53 pm Title: Bruises
Loved it :) can't wait for more!
Date: 03/04/13 06:32 pm Title: Bruises
Oh dear...$215 isn't gonna get him very far is it? O just want to go up and squish him to bits and love him and hug him and take care of him forever. But...his snapping did fall a little flat. Maybe you didn't build enough anticipation before it happened?
Yea. The teacher had no right to touch him at all. Its her job to monitor those things and report them, to her supervisors if she suspects abuse, but she is not to touch students. Especially students she doesn't know, whose reason for being there is a behavioral issue, which speaks to abuse whith no other option because he won't talk! Yea...she was stupid.
Hmm Tom seems pretty bipolar about his opinion of Bill himself. I hope he gets his feelings sorted outt, and I can't wait to see the next update!
Date: 03/03/13 10:54 pm Title: Bruises
Now I gotta know if Tom and Bill are gonna talk again and what is going to happen to Bill! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 03/03/13 10:52 pm Title: Bruises
Woah reading about Bill beating Gordon was intense! Very good chapter once again!
Date: 03/03/13 07:59 pm Title: Bruises
Finally Tom & Bill meet..its gonna be an very interesting fic here..I cant wait to see more
Date: 03/03/13 07:58 pm Title: Bruises
another great Story good job Nena Im proud of you!!
Date: 03/03/13 05:47 pm Title: Bruises
Once again love the story! And I love the fact that Bill is fighting back. Only Gordon is not dead isn't it? I hope that he can ran away before Gordon will caught him and before it will get a lot worse. I'm curious about what happen between them before Gordon began to hit him. *Hugs*
Date: 03/03/13 04:21 pm Title: Bruises
Yay for Bill fighting back. Gordon got what was coming to him, but as much as he deserves to die, I'm hoping Bill didn't kill him because then he'll be hunted for murder. I love that Tom is drawn to Bill despite Bill's abrasive character; its like he realises there's something more behind Bill's behaviour. I hope they can be friends because Bill seems gentler with Tom and Tom could probably use someone like Bill to fight on his side. I do love the way you've written all the characters. Looking forward to more.
Date: 03/03/13 01:58 pm Title: Bruises
Cool story! I cannot wait to read more!
Date: 03/03/13 04:57 am Title: Bruises
I'm glad his getting out off that place
can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
:D thank you so MUCH for leving a review and i some how had to get him out.... he was living a nightmare. :)