I loved this one and what brought me here is your creative comments on my story. You really have nice ideas and you can write obviously, so if you still want a beta reader, I'm available. It would also help me improve my German.

Author's Response: Awww, thank you. I'm german and I wrote fanfictions about the twins for about 10 years. Sadly, I dont have time to write fanfictions at the moment because I have to catch up my work - writing books. I have puplished some books via puplishinghouses and have more or less paused my creative work for about haf a year. Now I have some work to do and figuring things out.rnBut I think there will be a day in the future, when I write a fanfiction again. And then maybe in english :)

This was a cute start. Classical twincest of secretly wanting the other one. Perhaps prolonging it a but here and there coukd give us time to get deeper into every scene, but it's okay. :)
I hope you'll find a betareader! I know from my own experience how hard it is to write in English when it's not your first language, so betas are real treasures. There are some grammatical issues here and there, but I'm sure tgat with a help if a beta they're easy to fix.

Author's Response: Hi. rnrnThank you very much for the review. rnrnYeah, I dont dare for deeper scene - though I had love to wrote more. That was my first try to write a story in english. I hope someone will help me in the future ;) rnrnI'm glad that you like it and that you give me your feedback :)