Date: 11/28/13 03:37 am Title: An end and a begining
This is almost a happy ending. A happy moment for Bill at least.
Date: 11/09/13 01:14 pm Title: An end and a begining
Oh my god... Your stories are so complex. They make me think and feel things. I love Biorg too! Hardly anyone pairs them.
Date: 03/30/13 01:53 am Title: An end and a begining
Very interesting and unusual story. I feel so bad for Bill... and for George and for Tom. But especially for Bill, the things he has to deal with. Anyway, this is a great story! I am off to find the sequel now.
Date: 03/30/13 01:53 am Title: An end and a begining
Very interesting and unusual story. I feel so bad for Bill... and for George and for Tom. But especially for Bill, the things he has to deal with. Anyway, this is a great story! I am off to find the sequel now.
Date: 02/13/13 03:12 am Title: An end and a begining
Your stories are always hard to read because you are amazingly good at writing raw emotion, but so worthwhile. This chapter was full of hurt and heartache but also so sweet and tender. At first my heart ached in such a sad way for Bill, but also for Georg. But the tender sex and emotion at the end made it ache in a different way...but its also sad because Georg knows that Bill still won't want him for always. If onlt Bill loved Georg in return, Georg would be so good for Bill. And yes, I will definitely read a sequel, especially with that teaser last line of this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad you feel that way, that I manage to get through what I tried to tell. And yes, it's really sad, my heart aches for them all in this story, and the next. I hope to be able to start post the next story, Mummy's little boy, as soon as I completed "Days of June", if I'm lucky enough to get beta help with that too :)
Date: 02/13/13 12:36 am Title: An end and a begining
si!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 es wonderful!!! me encanta :) y si! I want a second part!!! XD
Author's Response: Aw! I'm glad you do! The other story is longer than this and written and translated, now it's "only" need to be betad first, I hope I will be able to start posting as soon as my "Days of June" is completed :)
Date: 02/12/13 07:48 pm Title: An end and a begining
looking forward to the next one
this chapter didnt make much sense though
Author's Response: Oh? In what way, was it hard to understand? I hope to be able to begin to post the other story soon, thanks for your review :)
Date: 01/31/13 03:32 am Title: Prelog
Actually I didn't know all that about how the twins parents came to split up. Did they talk about it in an interview or is it what Jorg has said?
Author's Response: They have talked about is through many interviews during the years,mostly during the eraly years, it really isn't any secret. (I have done a study of how media have written about Tokio Hotel from 2003-2010, things like this comes out much clearer then you read it like that and not with sometimes years between the articels :) )
Date: 01/30/13 06:09 pm Title: Comfort
I'm glad you wrote the break up as Simone's fault; it makes a change from everyone always having Jorg as the bad guy. After all we don't really know what happened. Poor twins, being palmed off on their grandparents while Simone indulged in her new relationship with Gordon. Probably the best place for them, actually, as she might not have been much of a mother to them being so wrapped up in her new man. The whole watersports thing - messy but I can see how it might be something two young boys would do and how to do it as adults would then make them feel safe by re-enacting. I'm happy that Tom fucked Bill, showed him what it was like to have sex with someone who really cared for him. But now I'm worried. Tom didn't use anything and we know Bill can get pregnant and has already had one ectopic pregnancy. He could actually die from another if the embryo implants in the wrong place like before (and where is the right place in Bill's poor body)and grows without him knowing, and how would he know since he doesn't have periods? Except, I suppose, he might recognise the symptoms this time around. But he is so weak anyway with his eating disorder and getting over the first pregnancy. They should have been more careful, but I guess with all the drama of the day they both needed comfort from each other and didn't think about it. This was a truly amazing chapter. I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! And we do know some about it, or well, that Grodon and Simoen meet before she left Jörg, that it was she who left him with the kids and not him who moved out, and that the boys lived with their grandparents for two years while Simone lived with Gordon, that is no secret. (And it makes me wonder there all those bad stories about Jörg comes from, until this spring, they have only and always only said good things about their dad?) Any way, yes, I think so too, that it was good for the boys here in this story. And a lot of the things they do seems to be to comfort each other, maybe life haven't been so easy on them. But sex without a condom really is a bad idea, I agree. On the other hand, concider the state Bill is in, maybe it also is a way to hurt himself, to risk himself, away to show Tom how badly he really feels? I'm glad you liked the chapter, I hope to have the next chapter up by the end of the week, there are only two chapters left now :)
Date: 01/30/13 05:04 pm Title: Comfort
let me guess
Bill is pregnant and it takes this time
Author's Response: Oh, you will see, there are two more chapters of this story :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/30/13 03:38 pm Title: Comfort
that was awesome :) no matter what happened between Bill and Tom, it was so peaceful, lovely and theirs :)
i can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! This was, back in 2009 when I wrote this story in Swedish, the first twin-sex sceen I wrote :)
Date: 01/29/13 06:47 pm Title: Prelog
this great:o
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to hear you like it! :)
Date: 01/29/13 05:33 pm Title: An it
hehe yes it did
i love this story
although the last chapter (before this one) confused me alot because I am not good with math
Author's Response: I'm glad you like this story! And oh, but then it's good they have to do all the math and not the reader, right? Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/29/13 05:29 pm Title: An it
Poor Bill. I think I say that after every single chapter. I'm a sucker for stories where Bill has an eating disorder, and I'm looking forward to reading more. I also feel like he's having such an identity crisis, and I wish he could realize that he's still a "he" (in my opinion) and there's nothing wrong with having something extra on the inside. It just makes him more beautiful.
Author's Response: But Bill really does have a hard time in this, I think "poor Bill" fits pretty well :) Oh, there will be more of that, good to hear you like it. And yeah, he really do. I guess it will take some time for him to sort things out, but of coures he is always him! Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me :)
Date: 01/29/13 02:37 pm Title: An it
I just want to cry for Bill. So sad. That cousin was so out of order, speaking out about Bill like that. And how did she know about Bill being a hermaphrodite when Simone didn't know the truth? And I know Tom didn't mean to make matters worse by filling in the gaps, but he spoke for Bill and Bill likely didn't want it all out there in front of everyone. And all his grandmother and Simone accomplished by sticking up for him was to make everything an even bigger deal. I'm really angry at Simone for getting so hysterical and yelling at Tom and talking about Bill like that, even though she didn't know Bill was listening. I guess it was the shock and she was in denial, refusing to believe what Tom had told her. Bill's grandad was the only sensible, truly caring one of the lot of them. He was the only one who put Bill's feelings first above his own surprise at the news. I'm glad he's going to help Bill because Bill sure needs someone on his side and to take charge for a bit because he's overwhelmed by everything himself. He needs someone to take care of him and do all the things he can't bring himself to do but which are necessary. And poor great grandad...what a birthday! Trust your family to ruin your big day with arguements. Really wanting to know whether Bill will get the help he needs. And what will he say to Tom - and Simone - about what happened at the party?
Author's Response: She absolutly was! And she didn't know? Until Tom brough it up, they talked about Bill's weight issue/eating disorder, nothing else? Simone is a...very special person in those stories (this story is the first part of two, it shows much clearer in the next even if you can see it here to, I think.)Of course Tom was wrong about saying something like that, speaking on Bill's behalf. But I think Tom truly are desperat here; he sees how bad Bill is doing and can't help him. I guess this in some way was a cry for help even for Tom? And yeah, Bill really do need help and help getting that help, this is far from easy for him, poor thing. I will post the next part soon, tomorrow or the day after, thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01/27/13 05:19 pm Title: Catcher in the rye
This story is so well written and so emotional; I love it. It's so sweet that Georg is just comforting him in a way that makes Bill feel more comfortable rather than asking him a million questions. Bill is still a boy really, but just with some extra parts that you can't see. But it's understandable that he feels torn apart, and it's so difficult to feel like you're hiding such a secret from the world. The poor thing.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you like it, and thank you,it means a lot that you find it well written. Georg really is a very sweet guy here, and yes, Bill is Bill, just the same he was before, even if he has a hard time to see that himself. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01/27/13 04:54 pm Title: Catcher in the rye
CUDDLES!! i like Georg so far. i felt bad for him in the end.
Author's Response: Good to hear, I like Georg too, a lot, and I love him in those stories!Thank you again so, so much for helping me out!
Date: 01/27/13 04:53 pm Title: A brother's fear
i'm glad bill was at least able to talk to tom :)
Author's Response: Yeah, he needs to talk about this, and who is better than Tom ? :)
Date: 01/27/13 12:37 pm Title: Catcher in the rye
Truly amazing. You are incredible at getting across the intense emotion. So much deep-seated sadness for both Bill and Georg. And it was Georg asking questions that made Bill consider aspects of what happened in a way that he hadn't before...that he'd really been pregnant with Andrej's baby. Poor, poor Georg just ruined his chances of getting comfort sex with Bill by asking those questions. And what will happen now with Bill's eating disorder? Will his feelings of not being in control of his body make him try to gain even more control of it? Guess I'll have to keep reading. Lovely, sad chapter.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so, it's hard to know how things comes across writing in English, but your words makes me think it turned out the way I hoped :) And yes, this is really hard for both of them, Bill so ill, and Georg loving him so deeply. I think Georg is pretty used to not getting any futher, as Andrej was the only guy Bill had penetrating sex with so far, I guess it haven't been that much more than touching before either, but yeah, he did. And I think he did becaeus he loves Bill, even if he know it would ruin the chance to get more (now that is love, isn't it?) Bill and his body... yeah, I guess this wasn't a good thing for him, even if knowing often is good, sometimes it might make things even harder. I'm glad you liked it and thank you so much for your review!
Date: 01/27/13 12:14 pm Title: Catcher in the rye
poor Bill....that's good Georg understands him with what is and isn't between them.
Author's Response: I think so too, Bill really do need a friend who doesn't use him when he is in the state he is in now, but who truly loves him just the way he is, too. Thanks for your review!