Date: 05/21/23 12:12 am Title: The Distance Between
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 07/02/15 12:45 am Title: ...The War is Won
I happen to have a bit of experience with what Tom is feeling in this fic and what you did to him is a nightmare. Literally terrifying. If I think too much about it I shudder and want to puke. I suppose this means this was really well written. Especially when I don't think too much about it, then it's enjoyable. Love the testing of boundaries. I really like this version of the fill for this prompt, it feels more complete. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review. I'm sorry this story put you on edge, though! I hope that Tom's relief at the end helped with that.
Date: 02/12/13 12:10 am Title: ...The War is Won
Aww so beautiful!!!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you for the lovely review!
Date: 02/10/13 11:29 pm Title: ...The War is Won
Nothing better than an emotionally and physically vulnerable Tom cumming at long last.
Author's Response: Of course not! There's always plenty of love going but that's always the best bit, I think. Thanks for the lovely reviews :D
Date: 02/10/13 06:04 pm Title: ...The War is Won
Beautiful!!! so intense i just started reading today and couldn't stop
Tom suffering here was so heartbreaking but dear good lord this end
"transcended bodies and they’re now sharing the same one."
"He’s here...He’s inside of Tom.
And a part of Tom resides in Bill"
all of that was worth it to finish reading this powerful lines laklfakf!! *-----* really amazing story
thank you so much!!
Author's Response: You're very welcome. It was a favourite scene of mine while writing, that last one where Tom says that Bill and he share parts of themselves. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for your kind review!
Date: 02/10/13 05:02 pm Title: ...The War is Won
So, so beautiful... *sigh*. I feel really emotional, affectionate and connected to twins here. You wrote the journey so beautifully, thank you.
There were part that made my heart ache for Tom, but in the end the reward, the ultimate connection was worth it all. Idk if I know any better word for this than beautiful.
Especially I enjoyed your way to focus on emotional joyrney and details instead of physical act, because physical things are least important anyway. Very colorful and sweet writing.
And thank you for the rec! It was very interesting to read your take on this one! :)
Author's Response: You're very welcome. I liked your take on it and you're more than welcome to the rec, but I wanted to take it... IDK. Somewhere else? Somewhere much more inside, where there wasn't even the possibility of coming at all, you know? The emotions are the best part of writing something like this - always, they are. And thank you for your lovely reviews. I hope I did this alternative version of your work well :D
Date: 02/10/13 02:06 pm Title: ...The War is Won
that was really nice :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you :D I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the review!
Date: 02/04/13 02:36 pm Title: On Cotton Sheets....
moooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeee
Author's Response: IT'S ALL DOOOOOONE NOW :D *pets you* Sorry, sweetie. Last chapters are uploaded and you're ALL DONE! :D
Date: 02/03/13 09:09 pm Title: On Cotton Sheets....
You've always had this amazing skill to write very sensual, very detailed sex. Not detailed in what happens, but how everything feels. It's really a talent. It makes reading you sex scenes very satisfying to many senses.
Bill is so gentle here, so even if he pressures sometimes, it's not going overboard.
And Tom, OMG Tom... vulnerable and beautiful.
I really hope this'll work out.
Author's Response: Bit late now, but thank you for the praise on writing the scenes. I feel like the emotions are always the thing focus on, because there are only so many ways you can write sex wihtout being cliche or overdone. Tom in this scene was so wonderful. I loved writing him - he was very different from my usual, but my favourite overall. Thank you for the review!
Date: 02/01/13 06:15 pm Title: On Cotton Sheets....
I could cry with anticipation. You've been such a tease this week :P Sexy cliffhangers everywhere.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so not sorry for the cliffhangers :P It's a peril of working with me!
Date: 02/01/13 04:33 pm Title: On Cotton Sheets....
wow...i like that Bill is taking so good care of Tom and his problem and without any disappointed doing to help him
Author's Response: Of course Bill would take care of Tom without being disappointed in him! That's what you do for someone you love. You don't judge them - you help then :D
Date: 01/28/13 05:58 pm Title: Rich Waters and Preparations
Hmm... it's cute, nice how Bill determinately tries to make Tom relax, to make it perfect, but I understand Tom probably even more. Those kind of things give pressure and in the end often lead up to failing.
I kind of wish Bill didn't even think if sex right now. Just be nice and then... let it be.
Sweet, sweet, vulnerable Tom.
Author's Response: Bill just needs Tom to stop /thinking/ and to start /feeling/ because that's the crux of the matter. Tom's overthinking it and making it so big that he can't see around it. Bill sees the bigger picture - for him, that just includes sex on top of everything else. And dear, sweet, tender Tom.
Date: 01/27/13 07:26 am Title: Rich Waters and Preparations
I'm happy that Bill is investing time into this instead of just giving up. And it's good that Tom seems to be responding to his pampering, I didn't think he'd be able to relax.
Author's Response: It's more about taking the pressure off and getting Tom start to just winding down in this chapter that you're talking about. Bill's just got under Tom's skin and started to take away that tension :D
Author's Response: It's more about taking the pressure off and getting Tom to start to just wind down in this chapter that you're talking about. Bill's just got under Tom's skin and started to take away that tension :D
Date: 01/27/13 12:51 am Title: Rich Waters and Preparations
Bill was so sweet fro doing his for Tom. hopefully some of his plans will help his brother cos i bet he really cares for him and other way too
Author's Response: Aww, Bill is being really sweet in this chapter, isn't he? And I think Bill does manage to help his brother. It's just getting there that's the hard part.
Date: 01/21/13 06:40 pm Title: A Promise Made
I don't exactly like Bill's pressuring attitude in thus. I know he means well, but it's horrible, horrible situation to be forced to endlessly try and most likely fail. It'll be difficult to decide how I'll react to it in the next chapter, but I guess we'll see...
Somehow Tom's guilt is eating me alive.
Author's Response: In some ways, Bill is pressuring him - but what would happen if Bill didn't? Do you think that Tom would end up addressing it on his own when the plan he /does/ already have involves either keeping it as it is, or moving away and letting Bill go? We shall if the next chapter changes your mind but please, don't let Tom's guilt get to you. He's going to get through this, one way or another. Even if he fails, Bill will still be there.
Date: 01/21/13 12:24 pm Title: A Promise Made
for the first time even i read some like this and i like :) that's good Bill wants to help his brother with his problem and maybe they will find a way to solve it
Author's Response: Welcome to my little corner of the world :P It's nice to meet you! And I'm glad you like it. Bill wants to help him - Tom just has to /trust/ in their bond. Next chapter goes up tonight - hope you enjoy it!
Date: 01/19/13 12:17 am Title: A Promise Made
I can't wait to see what Bill has planned.
Author's Response: Next chapter goes up tonight, and it's going to be... interesting. That's all I'll say on the matter.
Date: 01/17/13 06:28 pm Title: The Distance Between
It's interesting to see your take on this prompt. :)
It's so sad and it breaks my heart to read this. Helplessness and simple fear and humiliation are so strong here. And those little things Tom does - marks crosses in his calender is truly devastating. It's in those little, desperate things that makes it a vicious never ending loop. And what is help anyway? How much pressure that will be?
I really like your point of view to this. It's emotionally very raw and heartbreaking and I see you driving themn to the farthest corner before (hopefully) letting them find heir way back. Very good details and the complex problems reaching not only to sex, but to whole life very real.
I am very touched by this. Really need to read more soon.
Author's Response: I was planning to link to yours in the last chapter - is that okay? And it hurt to write this one, actually. Felt very raw in some places, and I see you picked that up. It's a horrible thing but I /hope/ that I shall resolve it suitably for them and that it won't carry on. Twenty Seven Months is more than enough, don't you think? Chapter Three up tonight!
Date: 01/15/13 08:02 pm Title: The Distance Between
I don't want to imagine what life would be like with no orgasms :( Poor Tomi. I'm rooting for him.
Author's Response: Horrific. Absolutely frustrating, having to deal with the fact you just can't be the way you want to be. Self loathing. Emotionally crippled. I should imagine Tom really doesn't want to /live/ life with no orgasms, never mind imagine it. :P *claps hand* Thank you for revewing and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Date: 01/14/13 01:09 pm Title: The Distance Between
Nooooo! O.o don't you date, Bill, to leave Tom because of such a thing!
Author's Response: Read the next chapter and find out what happens! Thank you for your lovely review though!