Date: 03/28/13 12:52 am Title: Public Forum
Also, I just have to say something XD I hope you read this lol cause I was reading the other reviews after I had posted my own, and I noticed Callypyge's review a few below me (after the last chapter)commenting on how "twincest is sick".....OKAY, IM SORRY but you're reading a story about Bill and Tom being [i]together[/i]...regardless of whether or not they were actually related in the story, they are in real life, so to a certain degree, this is twincest no matter what... THEREFORE YOU ARGUEMENT IS INVALID. That is all.
Author's Response: OMG YES THANK YOU! I just haven't gotten to answering the reviews yet. You are awesome, thank you!
Date: 03/28/13 12:45 am Title: I Hear Stories of Your Frown
Yes, yes, it was. but thats okay because it was...an okay kind of short...with this sort of chapter, it was probably better that it ended there...it was a good ending, and it was a good chapter...i think it sort of reflects that just like Bill needs time to digest this new information, this story needs the time to let this situation have its moment, even if that means that the length and depth of this chapter may not reach far. I am very impressed with this chapter.
Date: 03/27/13 11:50 pm Title: I Hear Stories of Your Frown
You need to write longer chapters!! This story is sooo good!
Date: 03/27/13 11:37 pm Title: I Hear Stories of Your Frown
Ariel went so hard on Tom but the way he fight for Bill...maybe he should think about some things just like Tom did cos i can imagine how Tom would live the school just to give Bill more space but...wouldn't it be too late to pick up everything after?
Date: 03/25/13 02:25 pm Title: Truth and Lies
GO TOM! His mother didn't even regret not telling him >:( Really good chapter!! Just wondering how Bill is doing, the little poor thing :(
Date: 03/24/13 10:16 pm Title: Truth and Lies
Deborah had no right to be so disgusted at them after what she did. This is her fault for lying to Tom his whole life, and for breaking up a set of twins.
Fantastic chapter, I'm so looking forward to the next bit. *huggles*
Date: 03/24/13 01:57 pm Title: Truth and Lies
I think twincest is sick and I hope u won't get in that direction. Sorry but a writer has en influence on others and u try to make it normal as it's not
Date: 03/24/13 10:37 am Title: Truth and Lies
So much angst...I need a happy ending!
Date: 03/24/13 08:18 am Title: Truth and Lies
Tom's mom is stupid.
Date: 03/24/13 06:07 am Title: Truth and Lies
Omg I love it!! xx
Date: 03/24/13 04:23 am Title: Truth and Lies
SHE STILL goes off for him loving bill - what kind of mother is she?
Date: 03/24/13 03:08 am Title: Truth and Lies
wow uh...kay mother, YOU split them up, YOU lied...this is pretty much ALL your fault, and all you can think of to do is be DISGUSTED that they were lovers?!?!?! ITS YOUR FAULT!! WHAT THE FUCK!?!?! GET OVER YOURSELF YOU STUPID COW.-.- that is all.
Date: 03/24/13 02:32 am Title: Truth and Lies
wow...he was really mad at her and what about Bill?
Date: 03/24/13 02:13 am Title: Truth and Lies
Karmas a bitch...and sometimes it has puppies!
I think Tom acted as anyone would, or maybe even calmer after that confrontation. The idea of Deborah suggesting no contact at all was insane! I simply cannot wait for the next chapter-hope it will be about Bill and his thoughts on how to deal. Great chapter!
Date: 03/24/13 01:54 am Title: Truth and Lies
o_o HOLY CRAP! I had a feeling he was gonna flip out but didn't think it would be THAT bad!
Date: 03/23/13 11:38 pm Title: Truth and Lies
I kind of wish your chapters were longer, but i really wish that bill and tom will be ok, even if they aren't together
Date: 03/23/13 10:41 pm Title: Truth and Lies
I luv this story.... Please keep writing....
Date: 03/23/13 10:35 pm Title: Truth and Lies
little teary right now, not gonna lie
Date: 03/23/13 10:19 pm Title: Truth and Lies
Ahhhh I really hope Tom and bill can figure things out :(
Date: 03/22/13 05:34 pm Title: The Truth Should Set You Free
Wow. somehow I expected that.. but still I feel sorry for Bill :( Great chapter sweetie *kisses*