Date: 03/30/13 11:12 pm Title: Two of two.
Very sweet story I love Tom and Georg here together.
Date: 02/03/13 09:59 am Title: Two of two.
I AM SO USELESS I FORGET EVERYTHING. Seriously. *hangs head in shame* For what it's worth, I love this. Despite me envisioning as crack when I asked for it, you've managed to make it more serious, and all the better for it. It has it's moments of funny but I enjoyed the more serious and more... heartbreaking, I suppose - moments. Basically, you were awesome in writing this. And thank you. Thank you very very much.
Date: 01/04/13 06:14 pm Title: Two of two.
Beautiful, lovely, real. Thank you for sharing. And haha, the voice at the end... not Bill, but grandma! :D
Author's Response: And thank you for re-reading it. Real is one very good thing I think, maybe the most important then it comes to writing? I'm glad you found it here. And yep, no Bill, I think grandma fitted way better, it just can't get much worse! ;)
Date: 01/04/13 05:49 pm Title: Two of two.
Awww, thanks for writing such a cute, happy ending to this. I might have broke my heart if you didn't. Now I'm left with a grin and it's a good thing.I admire Georg for how right words he found, from hiw deep he lifted Tom from. That's real love, almost overly romantic for you, but I think that very necessary here.You have no idea how hard my heart was aching for Tom, when he was in a bathroom, when he felt ugly like that. He could never be ugly, no matter what. He is so, so beautiful (and you know hiw sincerely I mean it) and it breaks my heart to see him ever doubting it. I was so moved by it.
So very beautiful fic. :)
Author's Response: Overly romantic?*shuldder* Well, yes, I guess it was needed here, Tom really had to be taken care of and feeling loved, and I do think Georg is the right person to make him feel that. I know you view Tom the way I do, and I wonder how often he acctually has felt that way about his apperance? I hope and I believe he grown so much he isn't botherd by remarks anymor, but still. He is so beautiful and should know it *sigh* I'm so glad you liked it and that you found my story beautiful :)
Date: 01/04/13 04:03 pm Title: Two of two.
For a second, I thought this was going to be tragic. But I'm glad Tom and Georg used my absolute favorite piece of relationship advice: "Use your words." And they did. And they succeeded. And then they got a happy ending. :)
Author's Response: Nop, I CAN wriet non tragic things too. Even if I don't do that so often ;-) And yes, it's a good advice, it often works really well. I guess this is about how close I ever come to wirte fluf LoL. Thanks for reading, and for reviewing, it means a lot!
Date: 01/04/13 02:04 pm Title: Two of two.
So lovely. Georg was so sweet and understanding of Tom's insecurities; its just a pity he didn't make his feelings for Tom clear a lot earlier to save Tom months of worry. The sex was sweet and hot...and the ending hilarious. I really enjoyed this story. Hugs, Helen x
Author's Response: Thank you so much for you lovely review! Yes, he sure could. But maybe Georg wasn't that confident about it as he akted now? I guess it's hard to be young and not really be as everyone supose you to be. I'm really gald to hear you enjoyed reading this story.rnHugs Kaa
Date: 01/02/13 03:50 pm Title: Part one of two
Absolutely beautiful and lovely and so real. Thank you for sharing with the rest of us!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, both for your kind words, for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01/02/13 12:49 pm Title: Part one of two
So heart breaking!! Poor Tom:(
I was afraid of reading torg hahah but the way you are writing here really got to my heart!!! So sad but beautiful
thank you I will be waiting for the next!!
Date: 01/02/13 12:29 pm Title: Part one of two
This was so cute and innocent, and then had an underlying note of complete dirtiness beneath it. The perfect balance. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked this, even if it is more.... well, not so "bad" as many other of my stories (belive me or not, but this is about how close I get to fluff. And that is still miles away from what most would call fluff LoL. )
Date: 01/02/13 11:49 am Title: Part one of two
I always love the way you write Tom and his relationship with Georg. This is no exception. So tender and touched with sadness. Georg was a douche, though, to leave Tom alone like that, while he was still wearing the negligee, to take Bill's ridicule. I guess he couldn't face being teased himself. The last paragraph is heartbreaking, Tom wanting to change himself - even his sex - in order for Georg to love him. I could cry for him. I'm hoping things will go better for him in the next chapter...but I know you often write really harrowing stories so I'm not holding my breath. Wonderfully emotional writing, as usual.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad to see you reading this story, haven't seen you around for some time so I though you given up on my never ending o so tragic stories LoL (nah, not all of them ends in tragedies, just some :)) But yeah, I find it really sad too, how Tom feels so uncirten and longs so bad for being loved by Georg. And Georg acts like teen age boys do, I'm afraid. I hope you will like the last part, will post it soon now, and thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01/02/13 10:27 am Title: Part one of two
So heart breaking!! Poor Tom:(
I was afraid of reading torg hahah but the way you are writing here really got to my heart!!! So sad but beautiful
thank you I will be waiting for the next!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know, this is so hard on poor Tom. Afraid of TOrg?! No need to, it's a very nice paring! One of my favorites I must say :) I'm glad you read it anyway, and I hope you fill like the last part too!
Date: 01/02/13 07:03 am Title: Part one of two
poor tomi :( and bill really is being mean. if i were tom, i'd be yelling at him right about now, if not for anything else than being a cockblock..
looking forward to reading the rest!
Author's Response: Yeah, I feel sorry for him too :( And Bill really is an annoying and mean baby brother here. Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/02/13 01:29 am Title: Part one of two
awh, I cant wait for more :) this is good!
Author's Response: Thank you! The last part will be poted later tonight :)
Date: 01/02/13 12:16 am Title: Part one of two
I guess I have to be the first to startr with reviews, but... OMG, woman! Get out of my mind!
I absolutely lovelovelove Tom like this - insecure wioth his feminine side, drifting somewhere in between, not sure what he want and what others want. I don't think this is not so much about what Tom wants or feels, but how he expects others to think and wondering if others are wrong and he is right. In a way it makes this very special and need lot of sensitive, observant touch.
nd you're doing it so well. It's so gentle, so beautifully and respectfully written without any hint of anything wrong or dirty, but almost like making us all realize that these kind of struiggles exist. His longing for something - even if he can't describe it now - is so vivid and present, his fears, doubts, hurt and confusion too. I thnk confusion is the best defining word here.
This was very, very hot, but at the same time so tender and beautiful. The ending of the chapter broke my heart. Things like that should never happen, it hurt also me.
Lovely work from you once again. :)
Author's Response: Im glad you liked it! As you know, I love him too like this. And I think you are right in your analyzis, that this is more about what he thinks other expect from him, what he needs to be to be loved. Teen is the most confused age I think, and also one then you hurt both others and your self the most while serching for somethine you isn't even sure what it is. I hope you will like the ending of this, I'll post it later tonight!