Date: 02/08/13 03:02 am Title: Dear Santa Claus
Very cute. The idea is adorable, however your writing style is too "matter of fact" in my opinion, and makes u feel like you're always stuck outside the characters instead of actually getting into their heads. Everything else was good though, so I'm not sure how to make it better, can't put my finger on it. Anyways, this was a fun read. Great plot idea! The twins' letters are so sweet! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the great criticism. I love your reviews! And thanks for reading it
Date: 12/29/12 09:50 pm Title: Dear Santa Claus
Holiday fluff is so cute. I love the idea of the letters and how you described both twins' feelings and wishes. They indeed had already found what they were looking for all along. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought that the idea of the letters was sweet :D
Date: 12/29/12 01:12 am Title: Dear Santa Claus
thats one of the sweetest things iv ever read on this site so far
i love it
Author's Response: Thank you! I needed something sweet for the holidays
Date: 12/27/12 05:26 pm Title: Dear Santa Claus
sweet story!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 12/27/12 10:17 am Title: Dear Santa Claus
aww, how adorable :3
Author's Response: Thanks! That was the point :D
Date: 12/27/12 08:40 am Title: Dear Santa Claus
Love it! :D
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/26/12 09:05 pm Title: Dear Santa Claus
aww...that was so cute :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Happy holidays :D