Date: 02/11/13 05:19 am Title: ...that changed their lives
Awwww, so adorable!! The moments when the twins are together are the best. The rest feels like filler until they are together again... I'm sure that's how Tom felt, lol. Really though, the in-between parts are kind of "tell not show" instead of "show, dont tell" if you understand what I mean, so that could be better. It was the parts when the twins interact where this story really came alive, and I really liked how they fell into kissing like that. Usually it's too sudden, but in this fic it works really well IMO. So natural. :)
Ok, so now I have to appologise because you've asked me to be your beta reader in a few comment responses and I only JUST read what you wrote to me! I'm really really sorry I haven't replied sooner, I don't want to be rude. :( I would love to be your beta if u like, but how are you sure I'm not a super crappy writer? Lol, you wouldn't want to take advice from me then, huh? Haha, just kidding. So if you're sure, just email me.
ema.dan@live.com
My name is Ema, by the way. :)
Author's Response: sorry to only respond to your review now! I'm currently writing a one shot and a new chapter for my multi chapter fic. would you mind be my beta and read them? I'll send you an e-mail!
Date: 12/28/12 10:38 pm Title: ...that changed their lives
It's okay, we all need cheesy ends like that from time to time. :)
I really liked this story. You managed to capture the anxiety and fears Tom must have had during those awful days. I wasn't a fan back then, but damn, it would have been hard for anyone.
Really nicely fitted story of Bill!s surgery and their first real kisses.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I was a fan and this happened in Portugal, which is my country, so everyone was freaking out. It wasn't pretty. I just thought that Tom would be the one in worst state, and decided to write something about it :)
Date: 12/27/12 06:47 pm Title: ...that changed their lives
this was a good story!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :D
Date: 12/27/12 06:47 pm Title: ...that changed their lives
this was a good story!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :D
Date: 12/26/12 09:55 pm Title: ...that changed their lives
Tom sure was a good brother to Bill. I'm glad everything turned out okay. :)
Author's Response: He is always a good brother, thats the beauty of their relationship :) I'm glad you liked it