Date: 01/05/13 07:06 pm Title: chapter 3: in which tom is surely screwed
Oh, when I read that Georg's office had new staff, I thought it might be Bill - and it was! Bill is such a great stalker, always there and with an innocent excuse. Tom is so out of his depth. I have a feeling Bill's mother's concerns won't be addressed until it is too late...
Author's Response: yeah, poor tom is drowning. someone throw him a life preserver!
Date: 01/05/13 03:19 pm Title: chapter 3: in which tom is surely screwed
Such a sad story:-/ Beautifully written though.
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 01/05/13 01:05 pm Title: chapter 3: in which tom is surely screwed
OMG, this is amazing. You write obsessed, psycho Bill so well. And I could just feel Tom's anxiety rising over the phone calls. And then when Bill arrived at the coffee shop and he knew Georg...God, that was inspired. Loved Bill's conversation with his mother, too, great insight into his warped little mind. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: thanks so much! you picked up on everything i hoped people would pick up on!
Date: 01/03/13 02:11 pm Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
Hm, I love your writing, I really do, but this "kind of Bill" makes me really uneasy. I never watch "creeper stalker" movies as I feel repulsed and terrified by such stories and now I am reading one. Shit. MCD doesn't help exactly.
Author's Response: well thanks for giving it a chance. new chapter is up now.
Date: 01/02/13 12:50 am Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
Yes! A story with a stalker Bill! xD So great! Kick-ass story! Needs more dude!
Author's Response: i appreciate your excitement!
Date: 01/01/13 11:24 pm Title: chapter 1: in which tom is an idiot
Ohh. I suppose Bill could target both of the couple equally. For some reason, I was picturing Bill turning violent towards one of the couple, then rubbing the other's face in it..then maybe turning violent to the other person or himself. I guess I will have to wait to see how Bill's crazy plays out.
Author's Response: "wait to see how bill's crazy plays out." i love that! thanks for reading!
Date: 12/31/12 10:36 pm Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
stalker bill, huh? i think i like it...this should be very interesting...
Author's Response: i liked it too! thanks for reading!
Author's Response: i liked it too! thanks for reading!
Date: 12/31/12 08:56 pm Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
Bill is so creepy stalker. Which Tom doesn't deserve, but he made himself a target through his own actions. I think it's only a question of which of the happy couple Bill will take his anger out on.
Author's Response: which one? why not both?
Date: 12/31/12 01:08 am Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
I stand by my first assessment of this story, Bill is crazycakes. All hail the power of the D. lol. Poor Tom, trying to move on with life and put his mistakes behind him and he can't seem to get rid of Bill. Make sure you warn me before there is any Torg *shudders* and not the good kind.
Author's Response: you know you secretly love the torg
Date: 12/31/12 12:56 am Title: chapter 1: in which tom is an idiot
1. You lie, there were no presents under your tree. You opened them all as soon as you got them.
2. I sat here shaking my head and slapping myself in the forehead, that's cause I know what's gonna happen. Stupid fucking Tom. See what I did there? Fucking?
Author's Response: 1. the presents under my tree were for other peoplern2. you're a dork
Date: 12/30/12 05:23 pm Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
Oh, creepy Bill, this is going to be fun.
Author's Response: lol thanks for reading!
Author's Response: lol thanks for reading!
Date: 12/30/12 05:17 pm Title: chapter 1: in which tom is an idiot
Very, very weird pairings. I didnt read all the info and I was a little shocked.
Nice chapter, though...
Date: 12/30/12 12:09 pm Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
How creepy is Bill? hahaha
Author's Response: oh...just a little...<.<
Author's Response: oh...just a little...<.<
Date: 12/30/12 11:30 am Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
Eeew, Bill is such a creeper. It feels confusing to read Bill's character is such... creepy way. Usually it's Tom with issues and overly possessive nature in fics. Nowit's almost hard to decide how to react. Very disturbing - and nothing has even happened yet!
Great way to built up the rension and on making Tom and Georg a cute couple even for a HC twincester like me.
Author's Response: awesome review! i, too, am all about the twin love. but i love me some torg almost as much! and i hope the story isn't tooooo disturbing for you. thanks for reading!
Date: 12/30/12 01:13 am Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
I am so loving this story, such new ground. I don't think I've read anything on this site where Bill is a "stalker" so to speak. He's giving off all types of "Fatal Attraction" vibes. I'm so looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: but don't worry, no boiling bunnies in this story. thanks for reading!
Date: 12/29/12 11:43 pm Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
Hahahaha is it bad that I really really like Bill?
Author's Response: not at all. i'd expect nothing less from you.
Author's Response: not at all. i'd expect nothing less from you.
Date: 12/29/12 07:54 pm Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
I'm so excited to see what happens next!
Author's Response: are you sure? are you reeeeally sure?
Author's Response: are you sure? are you reeeeally sure?
Date: 12/29/12 04:16 pm Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
hmm....Bill still can't get over about Tom and maybe that's good....Georg seams kinda like lazy ass hahahha
Author's Response: he wasn't lazy, just tired. just like tom was.
Author's Response: he wasn't lazy, just tired. just like tom was.
Date: 12/29/12 01:53 pm Title: chapter 2: in which someone is lurking
Tom and Georg are so cute together; just like an old married couple. Bill is seriously creepy. I'm already dreading what he's going to do next.
Author's Response: dun dun duuunnnn!!!
Date: 12/26/12 12:05 am Title: chapter 1: in which tom is an idiot
Bad Tom, bad, bad, bad boy!!! :-DDDD
Cheating is never cool but it is so very human. I wonder how such an encounter must feel like (have never been in that situation myself) - you spot a gorgeous stranger, you down a couple of shots together, you fuck next moment ( in a cleaning/ changing cubicle of all places - ah, so romantic, lol) and then poooof, the gorgeous mysterious seducer is gone. I would be like " Wtf has just happened?" :-)
I can't wait to see what's coming next... so, so impatient here right now. Thank you for a new story! And belated Merry Christmas to you!
Author's Response: merry christmas to you too!