Date: 04/06/13 01:51 pm Title: chapter 6: in which tom loses everything
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Date: 02/03/13 10:15 pm Title: chapter 1: in which tom is an idiot
I agree with you! But what's Bills mental problem?
Date: 02/03/13 10:09 pm Title: chapter 1: in which tom is an idiot
Yup! I was wondering if you were gonna catch on about the song I was using :D
Date: 01/29/13 08:51 am Title: chapter 6: in which tom loses everything
see? he should've just come clean right away...i understand why geo left...i really hope that tom learned his lesson...
Author's Response: a very valuable lesson indeed: if you're gonna cheat, make sure you're not fucking a psycho.
Date: 01/28/13 06:58 pm Title: chapter 6: in which tom loses everything
The ending is very different from all the stories that I've read. I love it!It's different, that's way I like it :) A cheater, a stalker, a murder, and a break-up. All in one awesome story! xD
Author's Response: lol i love different!
Date: 01/28/13 05:44 pm Title: chapter 6: in which tom loses everything
Hmm... I'm pretty conflicted about this. This is so utterly sad, but I'm also quite angry at Georg. For me, he was unreasonable. I don't know, during the long years in relationship life has taught me one thing and it's that none of us really can afford to be black and white. So yes, I'm angry at him for not even giving Tom a decent chance.
However, I think I see why you wrote it like this and this complete tragedy is really heartbreaking.
It was a sad, disturbing, but interestinv journey. Thank you!
Author's Response: thank you so much! i enjoyed your viewpoint. i think even if i could forgive someone for cheating on me, which i wouldn't, it would be too much knowing that that person was responsible for me killing someone and watching that person die right in front of me. a person who wanted me dead. all because of the dick who cheated on me. i don't think i could do it.
Date: 01/26/13 08:44 pm Title: chapter 6: in which tom loses everything
When I saw the title of this chapter I knew I wouldn't like it :(
Author's Response: yeah i'm told the chapter title was quite the spoiler. oh well.
Author's Response: yeah i'm told the chapter title was quite the spoiler. oh well.
Date: 01/26/13 02:21 pm Title: chapter 6: in which tom loses everything
this is over? :O
Author's Response: yep
Date: 01/26/13 12:59 pm Title: chapter 6: in which tom loses everything
God! So Georg killed a man and really it was all for nothing. Tom might as well have told Georg about Bill right after he and Bill fucked because the results were the same with Georg leaving him. I feel sorry for Tom even though I know him cheating was wrong. He was drunk and it happened one time but he happened to pick a psycho. As it is now Georg has to live with Bill's death on his conscience and knowing that Tom cheated on him. And Tom also has to live with Bill's death and with losing Georg. And Bill needed psychiatric help and didn't really deserve to die. If Tom had just come clean months before he'd probably still have lost Georg but Bill might be alive because Tom could have gone to the poilce about the stalking. So many what ifs...but then life is like that. Oh, by the way...all this is leading up to me saying that I loved the story and this chapter. And I will miss you;I really enjoy reading your stories.
Author's Response: thanks so much! excellent analysis. if only tom's vague desire to come clean had been a little stronger.
Date: 01/26/13 12:15 pm Title: chapter 6: in which tom loses everything
So many things to say. 1. Georg is gonna be so screwed up. It will be so hard for him to trust in his next few relationships, plus he's going to have to carry the fact that he killed someone, someone he thought was a friend. Maybe the things Tom told him will finally make sense after he has some time to really think about it. 2. Poor Tom, though it is all his fault. He should have just told Georg from the beginning, like I kept telling him to do, he might not have been in this situation. 3. Guess Bill's mom should have checked on him instead of calling and letting him hang up on her like that. There may have been something else, but now I can't remember. haha.
Author's Response: really? like you kept telling him? call him up on your special pretend phone, did ya? ;)
Date: 01/23/13 06:38 pm Title: chapter 5: in which bill decides he's waited long enough
Oh...shit... :-o
I was afraid that smt like this would happen and I've actually thought of a scene like this at some point to some story, but these are really always so tragic and dramatic, so hopeless. You know the moment when you realize that something happened that changed everything. It's a damn scary thought.
Waiting for the next chapter impatiently...
Date: 01/21/13 12:08 pm Title: chapter 1: in which tom is an idiot
Well, if the story wasn't going to have the happy ending, but was going to end with broken people and relationships...then I was thinking maybe Bill would hold Tom at gunpoint, Georg would come home, there would be some discussion/fighting/Tom trying to talk Bill down, and Bill would start firing while they wrestled for the gun. I guess sometimes the stalkee can overcome the stalker before the bloodshed happens.
Poor Bill's mom. You know she'll blame herself for not knowing Bill was going loco.
Date: 01/21/13 12:30 am Title: chapter 5: in which bill decides he's waited long enough
Oh My, I totally expected Bill wasn't going to be the one getting shot!
I imagine Tom has a lot of explaining to do to Georg. I have reservations about whether their relationship will survive this.
Author's Response: okay now i'm curious. who did you think was going to get shot?
Author's Response: okay now i'm curious. who did you think was going to get shot?
Date: 01/20/13 09:30 pm Title: chapter 5: in which bill decides he's waited long enough
uh oh!!!! and then?
Author's Response: wait and see...
Date: 01/20/13 05:03 pm Title: chapter 5: in which bill decides he's waited long enough
O_O Oh my goodness. Things are getting serious.
Author's Response: shit just got real!
Date: 01/20/13 12:09 am Title: chapter 5: in which bill decides he's waited long enough
holy fuck. o.O
Author's Response: exactly!
Date: 01/19/13 11:51 pm Title: chapter 5: in which bill decides he's waited long enough
wow I really liked psycho Bill, it kind of sucks that he's dead now. :(
Author's Response: yeah, probably not how he saw the day going when he woke up that morning
Date: 01/19/13 06:52 pm Title: chapter 5: in which bill decides he's waited long enough
This story is everything to me O-O
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 01/19/13 04:30 pm Title: chapter 5: in which bill decides he's waited long enough
God, I didn't see that coming. What an eventful chapter. I almost feel sorry for Bill, thinking that Tom really meant he loved him, only to have his fantasy ripped away. Georg to the rescue, though. Now how are they going to get out of this mess, and what will Tom tell Georg? Great chapter.
Author's Response: yeah, you really will say anything when you've got a gun pointed at you. thanks for reading!
Date: 01/19/13 02:25 pm Title: chapter 5: in which bill decides he's waited long enough
i didn't see that coming...the shooting part anyway...dear god, now what?
Author's Response: dun dun duuunnnn! stay tuned! one exciting chapter left!
Author's Response: dun dun duuunnnn! stay tuned! one exciting chapter left!