Date: 10/09/14 08:56 pm Title: The end
Holy fuck I loved all of this so much
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to hear you liked it!
Date: 12/17/12 05:46 pm Title: The end
There's just something so beautiful and intimate in infantilism like this. It is so pure form of love and care taking that it really goes deep in my heart. You should see me sighing here with a smile :)
I think you took an interesting and well-fitting way to bring them to the point where your other fics continue. Like the scat play is just a start and leads to even deeper emotional connection. It's very beautiful development indeed.
And as said, scat is not - not it need to be - dirty and "sexy", but it is at it's best when showing love and underrlining the relationship and intimacy. You know intimacy is the best in this all. :)
You already know I loved this, but I say it again: I'¨m truly happy that you wrote this and I know again what to think now, when I go to bed. :)
Author's Response: I can only agree and I'm so happy that you read my storie like that. And yes, they need those steps to get there. I'm so afraid to rush things but I do hope it will feel like a natural step then the next storie comes. I'm so glad you wanted to read this and that you liked it, thank you!
Date: 12/17/12 12:26 am Title: The end
This was absolutely beautiful! I haven't read the other reviews, but I wonder how many people thought "oh, gross." It's not. This was a flawless little story. Very touching. Intimate rather than dirty, emotionally raw rather than sexy. Tom's intense desires to be extremely submissive to Georg and then completely infantile are psychologically and emotionally fascinating. Through a few well-written bdsm stories on this site (this one included), I've been introduced to a whole new world, and the better stories (like this one) show it at its best - rich with love and trust and utterly bare emotions. The roles that Bill and Gustav played here were a nice touch - observors, but completely unimportant to the situation going on between Georg/Tom. It was all about them, and the observors just showed how far Tom was willing to go to please Georg. When I started reading the story, I didn't realize the depth it would have, and with such a great subtlety. Thank you!
Author's Response: Actually none, that surprised me. On the other hand, the sory has almost 600 views and 12 comments so I guess there are quite a few who just havn't said anything, at least I count on have upset at least a few, consider how many who was grossed out by "Submit and obey". But I'm so happy to hear you liked it and found it beautiful! Reading your comment I see that you "raead it the way I hoped I wrote it" or how I shall put it and I'm very grateful for that, it's hard to know how things comes acorss as my English is far from good. And you are absolutely right, this story is all about Tom and Georg.All this, those stories about Georg and Tom (will be one more) is about their way to what they really want, all the steps on the way to fullly give in to that they wanted all the way but haven't ben able to do without all the steps on the way and the total submission from Tom. Thank you so much for reading and for your wonderful review!
Date: 12/15/12 03:39 pm Title: The Sofa
The ending just made the whole story 10x better, I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think... I'm glad you liked the end at least! And thanks for letting me know :)
Date: 12/15/12 10:55 am Title: The Sofa
OMG, I meant Billstav. Sorry. Idk what I was thinking when I wrote the review. :D. But I'll wait impatiently the rest. :)
Author's Response: Oh, but there I agree, that is the least fun paring of them. I just have a hard time seeing a diva and a bitsh (not saying who is who) getting it on together LoL.
Date: 12/09/12 04:59 pm Title: The bed
You know, Biorg is probably my least favorite of the pairings inside TH, but I see how important it is in order to show Georg's protective, guiding, controlöling role over Tom. It's so hot how Tom blindly trusts him, let him lead. It's fascinating.
I've been trying to get into sounding and I still have to work for it, but I might get there one day. And the ending.... damn hot! So, so, so... almost there! :)
Author's Response: Oh really? I like it, is my second best I think with in the fandom. (even if I prefere parings with Tom. and Georg, leaving TOrg as my number one option :) But yes, I think it's importatn for this story just like you say. I find Tom's trust facinating too, maybe even more as he in this story is trying to plases one of Georg's fnatasys and not his own. Thank you so much for reading, and I will start posting the next story as soon as I get the first part back :)
Date: 12/07/12 01:41 pm Title: The bed
This isn't something I would normally read. But, I am extremely intrigued by this story I can't even tell you. I really love the how dominant/submissive relationship between Georg and Tom. And you handle the subject matter really well. I'm very curious about the next part!
Author's Response: Thank you for telling me! I'm so glad you gave this story a change! I know most are scared away by the scat, sometimes even with out really knowing what it's all about. I'm glad you like my take on it and I hope you will enjoy this last chapter too! Thanks for reading and reviweing!
Date: 12/07/12 03:32 am Title: The bed
Now you're just teasing me on purpose. This isn't fair. But just like Tom, I like the teasing ;) keep it coming.
Author's Response: I sure do! But teasing is fun! I hope you like this last chapter and have a nice flight home!
Date: 12/06/12 10:14 am Title: Tha bathroom
Sorry, this took me so long,.
Anyway, it's realloy fascinating and extremely intimate of how you handle these very primal bodily functions. It's not dirty in a way, but like close, exciting observation of the most intimate processes of their bodies. Very fascinating. It's delightful to read how obeydyant Tom is. And you described well, how it's not so much about liking this or thaty, but because it's HIM. That is so, so important. :)
Author's Response: Oh, never be sorry for taking long, or for not reading or reviewing, I'm just so glad then you do. I'm glad it doesn't comes out as dirty, I don't think they see it like that, or at least is that not the trill for them in this. And yes, really, so much more about the person than about the action in it self.
Date: 11/30/12 06:42 am Title: Tha bathroom
This is just getting better and better! Definitely can't wait for more. Your writing is fabulous :D Tom's such a dirty little boy ;) And Georg's a wonderful master.
Author's Response: Thanks you so much, I'm so glad you like it! And yeah, it's a mach made in heaven, isn't it? LoL The next part of this sweet little thing will be up tomorrow :)
Date: 11/23/12 08:31 am Title: The Sofa
I know that this is consensual. I know that it doesn't hurt Tom permanently. But I am furious with Georg for doing this to Tom. From getting off by it, as indicated by his voice when he takes the crisps from Tom. And why Bill would enjoy it almost sadistically. I trust your intent with the story, that it's consensual for Tom, and I trying to push myself into Bill's and Georg's heads, but I see only sadism.
That said as always you draw almost amazingly clear portraits of people with such small means - you need not one unnecessary word to create your people (maybe I need one or two more to understand what Tom gets out of this - but I will wait and read the rest properly!!). Also your mastery of texture and taste are as always just that -- mastery. Glad you got this posted! I am going to make myself understand Tom!
Author's Response: Naw, I'm glad you giving this another chance! I have been thinking of how to make this clearer and easier to understand and it stiked me that you haven't read the story befor this; Submit and Obej. Now, if you found this bad, that is ten times as worse. But, the last chapter in it isn't, it's as close to fluff I ever come. Maybe if you liked to read that it would make things clearer? Bill knows, of course, that this is something Tom feels good about, something that helps him and knowing that he can give in to the sexual aspects without worring about Tom. And Georg, in SAO it's clare that he does this for Tom, not to Tom, that he does almost anything for him. Tom needs this, to in a way break down to be able to get to what he really does need, and those stories are very much a story about how he and Georg finds a way to give Tom what he needs with less and less of this. (hm, hard to explaine) I'm glad you gives it another chance :)
Date: 11/21/12 11:38 pm Title: The Sofa
I can't believe you're going to make me wait a whole week until I get to read the next chapter of nice. I'll be tingling with anticipation. Btw, I'm the same as Tom kinda. I can't shit anywhere besides my bathroom at my house. I only use one bathroom in my entire house and I can't even go at my best friend's house or anywhere else. I've slowly gotten used to my toilet in my dorm, but even when we were traveling for two weeks people were like O_O don't you have to go to the bathroom?
Author's Response: Yep, I know, I'm cruel :) My mum is also like that (hm, now that came out wrong, you don't want you mum to be inspiration for a fic like this LoL), I'm glad you liked it so far, and as a week has past now I will update later tonight :)
Date: 11/21/12 04:46 pm Title: The Sofa
I respect you very much for having the courage to post such "taboo-ish" as this is (and will be). People are easy to judge, so posting this puts one easily on a line of fire. I hope that doesn't happen here.
Yu know I love this fic. You handle everything so tenderly, understanding the concept on embarrassment withoiut actual humiliation. Making things not cruel, but with lot of tension and almost encouragement. Also loving the detauils you choose to put here.
I'm really excited of this all and what is coming after this fic. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, and yes, it absolutly does (even if nobody has said anything yet, I'm just watinting for them to.) I find it both developing and interesting to write triggering topics, and I admit to like to provoke a little :)rnI'm glad you feel that way about this sotry as it to me really is a love story and not about hurting or humiliat anyone. And yeah, and we are getting closer to that :)