Date: 11/24/12 09:55 am Title: Chapter Six.
I was so mad at him there when he calling her a whore, but aww at the ending :)
Author's Response: Haha I hated writing that part, but it had to be done for it to get where I wanted it too!
Date: 11/24/12 09:43 am Title: Chapter Five.
Wow, poor Tom. I thought he might have a problem with sex but I didn't guess why.
Author's Response: I'm afraid it's not going to get better just yet!
Date: 11/24/12 09:37 am Title: Chapter Six.
Omg that was awesome. This is the first ficha I've read where tom and Bill r not related and it makes sense. Moreeeee
Author's Response: Haha I'm SO glad you gave it a chance and are enjoying it - it means a lot!
Date: 11/24/12 07:21 am Title: Chapter Six.
Aww this is so cute!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!
Date: 11/24/12 04:01 am Title: Chapter Six.
nice chapter :)
cant wait for mooooooooore :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it.
Date: 11/23/12 06:03 pm Title: Chapter One.
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE :) this is soo goodd :) cant wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Chapter six is up tomorrow! (: I'm so glad you like it.
Date: 11/23/12 10:13 am Title: Chapter Five.
Ohhhh shit!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha best review i've had so far. :P
Date: 11/23/12 06:19 am Title: Chapter Five.
So i was right! Omg i fucking love this story! And i LOVE that u update every day!!!!
Author's Response: Haha I'm so happy you like it! I actually don't update every day - I update every two days, but I do it just past midnight sometimes so it might seem like that. I'm glad you are enjoying it though!
Date: 11/23/12 04:31 am Title: Chapter Five.
please update soooooooon :)
cant wait for mooooore :)
Author's Response: Haha thanks - I'm glad you like it! The next chapter will be up tomorrow or Sunday.
Date: 11/21/12 07:46 pm Title: Chapter One.
I am really enjoying it! You are definitely keeping me intrigued. =D
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you are enjoying it! Next update will be Friday!
Date: 11/21/12 07:39 pm Title: Chapter Four.
Hmm, I wonder what is wrong with Tom. Obviously, he doesn't like being touched where she's touching him. I'm looking forward to more.
On a side note, I was wondering if you have a beta reader? If not, I would recommend one. Your a good writer, but the grammar and puncuation mistakes need some work. There are tonnes of run-on sentences and there should be periods in a lot of them, where you have commas. Just something to think about =]
I am really enjoying this and I'm looking forward to more =D
Author's Response: You'll find out eventually! :P
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rnNo, I don't have a beta reader at the minute, as I have been writing this for personal reasons and it wasn't originally going to be posted anywhere as I was writing it for NaNoWriMo this year. I will look into Beta readers though.
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rnI am glad you are enjoying it though and thank you for your feedback!
Date: 11/21/12 07:00 pm Title: Chapter Four.
For gods sake tom get.it together!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hahaha! I don't think that's going to happen quite yet :P
Date: 11/21/12 06:30 pm Title: Chapter Four.
Ah god poor Corey, Tom you slime what's wrong?! Lol.
Author's Response: Haha! you'll have to wait and see! :P
Date: 11/21/12 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Four.
Maybe he is a virgin, has a problem with coming to fast or was used as a child (don't know the word)....
Author's Response: Haha you'll have to wait and see! I'm glad you are enjoying it though!
Date: 11/21/12 04:29 pm Title: Chapter One.
I actually really like it. Usually I read Slash but this is very well-written and descriptive, just how I like it! So great job, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. =D
Author's Response: Thank you for giving this a chance! It really means a lot! I'm so happy you are enjoying it!
Date: 11/20/12 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Three.
Ohhhhhhhhh my god I love it
Author's Response: Haha! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 11/20/12 01:25 pm Title: Chapter Three.
Oh my gosh, what an ending. I can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: Haha thank you! Next chapter will probably be up at some point tomorrow.
Date: 11/20/12 04:16 am Title: Chapter Three.
Oh Lord! It's getting hot, can't wait to find out why Tom left and to see how awkward the first meeting after that is going to be!!!
Author's Response: Haha and this is only the beginning! ;) I'm glad you like it!
Date: 11/20/12 03:53 am Title: Chapter Three.
oh my God! where is he going!?
i really like it!
keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Haha you'll have to wait and find out! :P I'm so happy you are enjoying this fic though!
Date: 11/20/12 02:25 am Title: Chapter Three.
wow!! i didnt see this coming :D
please update soooooooon :)
Author's Response: Haha that was the plan! I'm really happy you are enjoying it!