Date: 01/12/13 12:48 am Title: 7. Twenty Six and Disgust
Great story. I find myself wanting more to read Bill's next entry and his reaction. I really hope you don't give up on it.
Author's Response: Thank ya's! I will definitely keep up with the story. I've been slacking. Blah. Next chapter is up, love! -Hugg;es-
Date: 01/11/13 11:41 pm Title: 7. Twenty Six and Disgust
This was honestly amazing! As was the rest of it so far!! :) I really hope you do continue writing this story :) its one of the few story's on here I'll actually read that is not het!! :) Love it :)
Author's Response: Really? That's awesome!! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, lovie. It means a lot! Next chappie is up c:
Date: 01/11/13 09:08 pm Title: 7. Twenty Six and Disgust
finally i know what's wrong with Bill but why he has to be so cold towards Tom and why he avoids that bother him?
Author's Response: Bill is a bitch. Simple. No, but really, he was hurt. You will learn, lovie. Soon. -Huggles-
Date: 01/08/13 11:09 pm Title: 6. Twenty Seven and Resentment
heartache OHG!!! evil Bill poor Tom adkakdaks *Cries* :(
Bill needs that high five in tha face hahhaha xD
Thank you so much for the chapter!! cant wait for the next one!!! oh and I'm going to take a look at your recommendation!! thanks!!
Author's Response: I hope you liked the recommendation ! New chappie is out, Love. c:
Date: 01/07/13 05:35 pm Title: 5. Twenty Eight and Hate
I love this, I'm not as into Tokio Hotel as you. But this is quite amazing. Keep up the god work Cheyenne. Ohh, and P.S I love you wifey ;D
Date: 01/07/13 03:39 pm Title: 5. Twenty Eight and Hate
aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh OMGOMG thank you so much!!! *----*so glad you liked my review!!! im really loving your fic!!
about the chapter this part really broke my heart ;--; "and then to his brother, who looked... so tired."
and at the en Bill hating hinself maybe is a good thing hahaha ;u; OH GOTT!!!
thank you so much again can't wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thankies for reading and reviewing, it means a lot. n.n And I know, I really feel for Tomi boy, but things will just have to wait out. New chappie should be out about now. -Huggles!-
Date: 01/07/13 02:51 pm Title: 5. Twenty Eight and Hate
I didnt mind this chapter, but my finger always wants to click for the next chapter but i had to remind myself to wait. Oh the wait! heehee, please post more!
Author's Response: I'm posting right now, love! It should be up soon. -Huggles-
Date: 01/06/13 08:05 pm Title: 5. Twenty Eight and Hate
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I always get a sense of deja vu when I read your reviews -Teehee- But they're always appreciated. Nxt chappie is up, love!
Date: 01/06/13 10:35 am Title: 5. Twenty Eight and Hate
Awh.. I hate the thougth of Bill hating Tom,.. Well, at least we had a good DSDS show yesterday ! Please more?
Author's Response: I hate Bill hating Tom too.. :/ And DSDS is always nice! And please more? Here! I present you with a new chapter, lovie! -Huggles-
Date: 01/03/13 03:44 pm Title: 4. Twenty Nine and Hesitation
EVERYTHING HURTS!!!!!!!OMG where is that lovely -next- button ;u; hahahahah
OMG you are killing me
i don't understand Bill dear lord can he see all the pain that attitude could cause to Tom and him too askdmaskd
dying dying all the feelings
cant wait for next Wednesday!!!
so glad you were featured congrats!!!*u*
Author's Response: -Hands you an aspirin- Nuu, I fix you! And there is now another lovely next button! Although, I'm not that satisfied with the newest chappie, it's more of a filler but it's something! I think you'll be quite happy with the notes for the next chapter...teehee. Now, don't die on me! -huggles-
Date: 01/03/13 02:01 am Title: Prologue: That day
*sobbing * so sad!!!!!!!! Everything was so perfect why Bill why ;u; really love this chapter heartbreaking but awesome!!
Date: 01/01/13 07:05 am Title: Prologue: That day
This is so beautiful in so many ways even if is sad. You get to know the boys in a different way and that was the best part in the whole story. Haha.
Author's Response: Don't worry, that beauty will soon fade away. You're gonna learn to hate the inner bitch in Bill and fast. -Huggles-
Date: 12/31/12 01:04 am Title: 4. Twenty Nine and Hesitation
need more i love it even if its so said
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Date: 12/30/12 11:00 am Title: 4. Twenty Nine and Hesitation
I wanna punch Bill for being a dumb snobby little fucking bitch.
You need to update so that I can stop hating him :)
Author's Response: All in good time, my dear! Soon, soon enough we will all learn to love. Okay, I can't be cryptic. I'll probably update sometime today x3
Date: 12/16/12 02:37 pm Title: 4. Twenty Nine and Hesitation
So bloody frustrating, this Bill of yours. I could kill him.
Author's Response: No, we'll save him for now. -pats his head- He's a good boy!
Date: 12/15/12 07:22 pm Title: 4. Twenty Nine and Hesitation
I love the memory parts. They are cute and full of twin fluffiness we all need in the middle of winter. Just to remind us of how beautiful they can be together. :)
Bill is too harsh on himself. He will understand it soon, right?
Btw, thank you for t6he lovely review for DOAB. :)
Author's Response: Meh, I'm having major writers block, I don't know what to do anymore! Dx But still, thank you for the lovely reviews! -huggles-
Date: 12/14/12 04:05 pm Title: 4. Twenty Nine and Hesitation
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I have a feeling you'll say this every time... c;
Date: 12/09/12 03:42 pm Title: 3. Thirty and Obligation
I just wish Bill would admit his feelings to himself and how much he actually missed Tom. Operations like this hating doesn't work and in the end, if he just let go, he'd be so much happier. He'd make Tom happier.
Yep, this is frustrating even to a reader, when they stubbornly refuse to accept of what they have. :D
Author's Response: I even frustrate myself sometimes, to be honest. But as you read, trust me, their attitudes won't be as shitty.rnNext chapter is up! I won't let ya down, Lovie! -Huggles-
Date: 12/08/12 06:13 am Title: 3. Thirty and Obligation
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Well wait no longer, it's up! -Huggles-
Date: 12/07/12 03:53 pm Title: 3. Thirty and Obligation
A heartbreaking chapter. It's quite difficult to feel any sympathy for Bill's hidden pain and confusion because he is behaving like such a complete jackass towards Tom. Tom has been coping remarkably well so far, though he has been giving Bill way too much slack, imo. I would shake that little piece of shit a little. Nobody deserves this kind of treatment, nobody. Simone must be hurting too. All in all, Bill needs to grow up and stop blaming Tom for his own misery. Yeah I know, easier said then done, but still...
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Well, wait no longer! Alas, it's up. And I agree, Bill kind of is a piece of shit..o:rnTom, on the other hand... he's a sweetheart. I feel for the both of them, though. Thank you for your reviews!