Date: 01/31/13 11:18 am Title: 9. Twenty Four and Distraught
Wow, beautiful! Bill finally realizes how important Tom is, and how wonderful the realtionship that they had, was.
It's really a very nice flashback, I love it ^^
Oh, and THANK YOU!!!!! for dedicating the last chappie to me!!! I feel so honoured!!!! :)
New chappie soon?
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Yes, Billa is finally learning. And it's no problem! You deserved a chapter just for you! c: Yes, new chappie is up now, sorry for the wait! -Huggles-
Date: 01/31/13 07:17 am Title: 9. Twenty Four and Distraught
aklsjhdlakhjds I dearly LOVE this story ^3^ You're such a good writer and I just find the way you write Bill in the flashbacks soo adorable *squee* *-* can't wait for the next chapter! u;u
Author's Response: Aweeee! Thank you so much, I try so hard and you don't even know how hard it even is to find the effort to write anymore! xc *sqee* to you too! -Huggles-
Date: 01/30/13 11:40 pm Title: 9. Twenty Four and Distraught
Bill has been in denial for far too long. Lol. But it's awesome, nevertheless. ^_^
Author's Response: Bill is a stubborn little bitch, that's what xD And thank you! -Huggles-
Date: 01/29/13 09:48 pm Title: 9. Twenty Four and Distraught
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks lovie! It's up now c: -Huggles-
Date: 01/29/13 09:07 pm Title: 9. Twenty Four and Distraught
Really great so far, can't wait to see what happens next. Great writing skills by the way. :)
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thanks a million! The next chapter is up by the way love, so you're in for a treat! c: -Huggles-
Date: 01/29/13 09:01 pm Title: 9. Twenty Four and Distraught
I love it ! It's different then most slash stories, which makes this one unique :3! Keep at it ;) I'll be waiting for the next update ! :D
Author's Response: Really? Thank you so much!! The next chapter is up, Lovie! -Huggles-
Date: 01/29/13 07:54 pm Title: 9. Twenty Four and Distraught
uuuugh, I want Bill to just get over his stubbornness and just makeup with Tom ;-; and I really wanna see what's going through Tom's mind during this all!
Author's Response: Oh you're in for a surprise then, Love. -Huggles-
Date: 01/29/13 07:47 pm Title: 9. Twenty Four and Distraught
DEDICATED TO ME! I love you too, girllll!
This was as amazing as ever. I love your style of writing, it's really unique in comparison to other writers. I love how I could visualize this too, I could see the scenes playing out in my mind as I read along. I love the slight change we see in Bill, in contrast to the previous lot of chapters when he's just cold towards Tom. The diary entry was sweet, I could see innocent-Bill in that, whereas now; I think I see a lot of resentment and hatred in Bill, so the innocence is beautiful, and gorgeously written too.
This is so good, update fastttter, I love this! ~HUGS~ xxxxx
Author's Response: You jinxed me! I'm late! xD Thank you so much for the reviews girly, they mean so much to me. I like the change in Bill too, he was a dirty little bitch before, but we are seeing *some* improvement! -Huggles-
Date: 01/20/13 04:04 pm Title: 8. Twenty Five and Appalled
I'm really enjoying your way to explore Bill's feelings to Tom. I haven't seen The NOtebook (not my kind of film, I guess), so I can't comment on how it fits to this all, but it's obvious that going through changes and accepting painful things really most of the time make us act irrationally and show the worse side of us. Jeralousy, anger, hate, frustration... So typical.
Bill will find his way to Tom just like Tom will find his way to Bill - even when their relationship is shifting slowly. I'm sure of it. :)
Author's Response: Wow! Go watch the notebook, it really is worth watching. I just added the notebook part because the scene I put was them fighting like Tom and Bill had. c: New chappie is out, Love! -Huggles-
Date: 01/18/13 08:17 pm Title: 8. Twenty Five and Appalled
I am loving this story. I'm so glad that Bill's starting to lighten up a bit. And I'm glad that Tom is patient. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Really? Thank you so much! <3 These boys are really something special c; New chappie is out, lovie!
Date: 01/17/13 12:02 pm Title: 8. Twenty Five and Appalled
Wooohoooo, Billi's changing :D
Awesome, this chappie! I really like that scene ;)
New chappie soon?
Author's Response: I told you guys Bill was a changing boy! New chappie is out, love!
Date: 01/17/13 12:06 am Title: 8. Twenty Five and Appalled
That band aid you put on my face helped I didn't cry this time :D But n'aww poor Bill got jelly.
Author's Response: It's because it was a maaaagic band aid! And yes, poor Bill and his stupid emotions!
Date: 01/16/13 10:49 pm Title: 8. Twenty Five and Appalled
love it!!!!!!!!!! ;-; their conversation was so heartbreaking!!!
Bill watching the Notebook *sobbing* is like all of this could be real TuT!!!!!!!
it really was perfect!!
and his conclusions at the end!!!!!!!! there is hope!!!!!!!!! thank you so much amazing chapter!!! dying for the next one!!!! x)!!!
ehhhh 10 reviews in the first chapter of RR *----*!!!!!!!!! i must read immediately!!!
Author's Response: Weeee. RR is... something. I hate writing mean Bill convos with Tomi! It really is heartbreaking. New chappie is up, love. Thank you for the revies and stay goldennnnn. -Huggles-
Date: 01/16/13 10:21 pm Title: 7. Twenty Six and Disgust
;--; Oh Bill!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GOsh I'm about to cry really!!!!!! this was dramatic so sad and intense!! i felt Bill's pain and gosh hurts T-----T
beautiful and painful chapter i really love it!!!
i just realized i missed this updated kamdakdmaka so glad i have that next button waiting for me xD!!!!!!
bytheway lol I'm the "Almost no one" that reviewed the previous chapter hahaha i must say i really love your fic I'm really looking forward to know what is going to happen with their relationship
thank you so much for keep sharing your story!!
pd
OMg i went to the other story but is het!!!!!!!!hahahah kmasmaks and i really can't read het with Tom or Bill as main pairing i just can't!! ;u; sorry
Date: 01/16/13 07:48 pm Title: 8. Twenty Five and Appalled
nice chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, love!
Date: 01/16/13 06:20 pm Title: 8. Twenty Five and Appalled
^...^ I like Jealous Bill, it's cute in a quirky way. Very cute actually, it shows he cares a lot about Tom. I like even more that Tom has a heart in this, actually checking in on Bill after he left. That's adorable, Bill needs to loosen up and tell him how he feels and I'm sure Tom would be VERY understanding, hehehee. This is amazing. Thank you for writing such art! Lots of Love, Peaches! xxxxx
Author's Response: PEACHESSSSS! I didn't know you read my fic! This is uh-mazing. I'm a reader of my reader! :DD Thank you for the review. It made me happy! -Does a little dance- And yes, jealous Bill is very cute! -Huggles-
Date: 01/15/13 06:22 pm Title: 7. Twenty Six and Disgust
I love this story:)
But omg Bill needs to stop being do mean. That or Tom needs to stop being so nice! Or make Bill jealous with a girl again;)
Author's Response: No. Girls are bad. Icky. They have cooties, didn't you know? And I agree, Bill is a real pain in the ass. Honestly. Tomi can never stop being nice, either! -Huggles-
Date: 01/14/13 07:03 pm Title: 7. Twenty Six and Disgust
Can Bill get his shit together soon please? Because this is getting really depressing, lolz.
Love it!
Author's Response: Don't be depressed, D: Bill doesn't even know where his shit is, let alone can he get it together. Jeez, give the asshole a break xD New chapter is up! -Huggles-
Date: 01/12/13 12:23 pm Title: 7. Twenty Six and Disgust
Wowowowowowowowowow
Pleeease, DO NOT STOP with this story! I love it (though I'm actually pretty mean, because I never comment.... I'm REALLY REALLY REALLY SORRY)and I would love to read how it continues!
And this chapter was really interesting! Especially the last part, when Bill really broke down. Wonderful!
New chappie soon??? :D (If you post another chapter, I'll always comment on this story, on every chapter, from now on!)
Author's Response: Wowowowowoowowowow. Really? I won't stop, and thank ya for the review! New chappie soon, yes. Probably in a minute or two xD -Huggles-
Date: 01/12/13 05:14 am Title: 7. Twenty Six and Disgust
Welp, hope you do update again. This is really interesting. But I'm hating Bill a lot right now. I feel so damn bad for Tom, I keep nearly crying xD. I'm not sure how Tom would have put up with it for so long. If I were him, I'd have gone fucking mental and probably done something that end me up on suicide watch. I mean damn.
Author's Response: Nuu! I fix you! -Sticks band aid on your face- Ahhhh, there we go. No crying on your part! Tom is such a kind hearted fellow, I don't think he would give up easily. Remember he said he would love him forever, even if Bill didn't? He's a man that sticks to his word. Next chappie is up, love! -Huggles-