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Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/13 07:47 pm Title: What's My Name?

Uh oh...Bane is after him....dass ist nicht so gut, is it? I loved this chapter; Bane is after him, Tom is catching on that something isn't quite Kosher about 'Will,' and Kitten messes get explained away...what's not to love? Keep up the fantasmagoric work.

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. I love writing these chapters. While Tom gets more suspicous Bill begins to let his guard down. I think Kashmir is a wonderful addition to the roiling pot of awesome. Please keep your hands and feet inside the vechile as the ride gets more wild.

Reviewer: nessavonkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/13 10:18 pm Title: What's My Name?

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhh ;u; Tom said Bill!!!!!!!
Love it!!! I'm dying to read the consequence of this xD!!!!!!!!!!!
dear lord when tom said will something was killed in me hahah poor Bill :'D but his excuse was epic "“It turns me on like crazy,”" hahahha awesome chapter!!!!!!!!OMG and those men searching for Bill sdaskda i fear they are really close to find him akdaskda dark future ahead maybe;u;? i want a voodoo doll of Tom hahaha no ok no that was really funny xD
thank you so much for this chapter!!!*nextmondaycomequickly*!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

I thought that would make people happy. I don't think there really will be any consequences since it'll be a bedroom name. I liked that excuse too, it's perfect. Those men are definitely a problem. Why do you want a voodoo doll of Tom? I am glad you like it. Monday will come rushing now that school is back on for me but no worries the nex chapter is with my beta right now.

Reviewer: maumau Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/13 01:34 pm Title: What's My Name?

I love the little kitty! And i love how the story is slowly progressing and not rushing! I would love to see some more action :)

Author's Response:

I wanted the story to have sort of a rushed feel in the beginning and then when he came here that things would slow down a lot and show the real differences. Life is slower here, things don't happen nearly as quickly and things can be appreciated to a greater extent. I wanted Bill to slow down when he realized he could and learn how to live life here versus the life he was leading in the city. I am glad the kitty has been recieved so well.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/13 12:42 am Title: What's My Name?

next weeeeeekkk????? bahh. okay, liked this, it was cute and sexy :) I'm mainly looking forward to...sex, and Tom seeing that photo of BILL Bill he left in his room...

Author's Response:

I like to leave people hanging it is awesome to have that kind of power although I hate it when authors do it to me especially if they don't update for like a month. I think alot of people are looking forward to that and not willing to admit it. I think Tom will definitely be surprised when he sees that photo of BILL Bill.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/13 11:37 pm Title: What's My Name?

That was nice ;) those lovely moments between W(B)ill and Tom and this little kitty ;)
Maybe that's good that Tom didn't ask more about this calling Will-Bill in bed but I'm still curious what Bill would do when Tom will ask him about his weirdness when people call him Will or some more. And that those people are looking for Bill - this starts to becoming dangerous and I like it ;)

Author's Response:

I love those sweet little moments where the whole world seems perfect before the dark reality sets in again. I wanted to show that Tom can pretty much get on with anything no matter how weird the request. I think Tom enjoys figuring out Bill so he won't ask at first. I also thinks he likes Bill's little quirks so he'll accept pretty much anything.

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/13 07:45 am Title: Surprise Guest

i enjoyed...it's always nice being able to adopt a stray...it was a sad story...i love that tom decided it ws easier to take bill there...it's nice to spend time with someone who enjoys your company...



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. I always love the feeling that comes with adopting a stray especially one like Kashmir. I wanted to show that Tom loves spending time with Bill no matter what the circumstances. It is very nice to spend time with someone who enjoys your company.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/13 08:03 pm Title: Surprise Guest

Omg amazing two chapters. I'm sorry I missed the updates. I fell into the black hole of awesomness known as the 'we go together' universe.

Ich liebe die Katze. She seems adorable, and might be just what Bill needs, other than Tom obvs.

Author's Response:

Don't worry about missing updates I do that all the time. Sounds like a very awesome universe maybe I will check it out. I love animals and do whatever I can for them as often as the oppurtunity arises. I think you're right about Bill needing her and Tom of course.

Reviewer: nessavonkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/13 09:00 pm Title: Surprise Guest

aaaahh so cute chapter!!! I'm loving the little kitten!!! their baby *u* hahah
i laughed and loved when they wake up this part hahah awesome!! "He got a tantalizing peak of a pale ass " pervert cute Tom lolol
awesome chapter can't wait for the next!! thank you!!:D

Author's Response:

I love cats and I love people that can't resist taking on strays. I know when I see a stray I do whatever I can to help it and sometimes that includes taking it to the pound because I can't take care of it but luckily the shelter I live near is a no kill shelter. I wanted to show a warm waking scene but to remember that Tom is a guy and he has the perverted side like every guy. I am glad you liked it.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/13 11:32 am Title: Surprise Guest

Aaaaawww kitty!! Yay, cute chapter :D icant wait for Tom to start coming over and perhaps notice something unexpected...

Author's Response:

I love cats they are amazing creatures. I think Tom will be very surprised at what he finds at Bill's.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/13 09:24 am Title: Surprise Guest

that was super :) i like the relationship that Bill has with Tom - especially when on the beginning he was so cold and that kitty thing. that was so sweet and of course that at night Tom went with Bill to the shop...aww..they just meant to be together :)

Author's Response:

I like adding random animals to stories. They are awsome and sometimes animals do more then people give them credit for. I know when I am feeling particulary lonely cuddling with my puppy always cures it. I wanted to show that Tom is an animal lover too with the horses then taking so weel to Bill's midnight trip to the pet store. I firmly believe common values are the foundations of every strong relationship.

Reviewer: bink257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/13 07:16 pm Title: Kissing

Lucky to have a boss forgiving your lateness, eh? But a bit too personal for my tastes. My private life is private. ^_~

Author's Response:

Lucy is the kind to not care about stuff like that. I imagine her as brass, crude and unashamed with no filter. She just says whatever she thinks. I like people like her on occasion. Not all the time but they keep life interesting.

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/13 12:01 pm Title: Kissing

good luck on your exams...

 

i love how tom doesn't push bill...it's sad though that he's calling him will...but bill's right, it's not tom's fault...and i'm sure everything will eventually work itself out...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the luck they went amazing but I am still very glad they are over.  I wanted to show a relationship that had it's limitations but also had the dynamic of being perfectly confident within those limits. I also wanted to give Tom a different kind of rep in this story where he is nice and shy versus the womanizer he pretends to be in life. Here's to hoping you're right about everything working out.

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/13 02:31 am Title: Kissing

Oh good luck on exams! I hope Tom learns Bill's real name soon, maybe by accident on Bill's part or overhearing it or something? Idk. Also, I want Bill to wear his hair down :)

I'm so needy. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the good luck. Exams went great, next semester starts tomorrow so things are a bit hectic around my place right now. Tom saying Bill's real name would be completely sexy and I have a thing for names which is why no one has to wait long. Bill with his hair down is one of the sexiest things I have ever seen in my life. Thanks for the review. I hope you continue to wait so anxiously.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/13 10:59 pm Title: Kissing

nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks I am glad you liked it.

Reviewer: nessavonkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/13 08:55 pm Title: Kissing

kasdklasmdak waaaaa so sexysexy times here !!awesome Chapter !!!!
poor Bill every time Tom said Will my heart was dying a little too hahahaha ;u;
thank you so much for this chapter dying for the next one !!
Good Luck with your exams!!! ^u^/
hope everything goes perfect!!

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked this chapter. Saying the wrong name during intimate moments should be a crime but poor Tom doesn't even realize. :( I did do well on my exams thanks for the well wishes.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/13 07:56 pm Title: Kissing

wow, that was awesome :) it's so nice that Bill and Tom get so good with each other and that Bill is less pushy that was on the beginning. now, i'm kinda curious if Tom will say Will instead of Tom, Bill would correct him.

Author's Response:

I wanted to make them fall very naturally together because I find the best friends I have and the best relationships I have had are the ones where we fall together very naturally. I know when I started going by my middle name instead of my first name it took a while to get used to it.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/13 07:53 pm Title: Kissing

Good luck!!! and yayyy! sexiness~ ;) I think Tom's going to have to find out soon, but what do I know. I really want him to see Bill with makeup on ahah

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. It amazing how long people can remain in the dark about things. I would love for Tom to see Bill in make-up too. I think it would be epic.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/12 11:31 am Title: Dating

I'm totes anxious for the other shoe to drop! This was a fantasmagorical chapter. I can't wait to see more.

Author's Response:

I am glad I have you nervous. It's a good sign. I have never actually seen that word but I am glad you like my story enough to invent a new word. I will update soon I have been super busy lately (and more than a little lazy.)

Reviewer: Tokio4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/12 08:22 am Title: Dating

cuteness! it seems i just fall more and more in love with this fic as it goes along, so i'm definately going to keep reading ;)

guessing tom's about to tell georg all about himself and bill? that'll make for an interesting second encounter between georg and bill, i'm sure! haha :P

but yeah, can't wait for more :D and i'm all for a holiday one shot!! i'm a huge torg fan, so.. *winkwink* 



Author's Response:

I am glad you like it. I will get the next chapter up soon. Yes, it probably will. Sorry I didn't do the holiday one-shot. I'll try to get more inspired (and less lazy) next year. Maybe I'll write a hot bit of torg anyone. *wink and michevious grin*

Reviewer: Damaris Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/12 05:26 am Title: Dating

This is great, like the sense of realism and the reservedness of the characters. Please continue :)

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. I will get the next chapter up soon.

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