Reviews For Witness Protection
You must login () to review.
Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 07:52 pm Title: Epilogue: Happily Ever After

Wonderful ending ^_^

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 11:14 am Title: Epilogue: Happily Ever After

Dun dun DUN! I was advocating NY, but w/e lol. To each their own :) at least the bad times are over!

Author's Response:

I got the vague hint at the beginning of the comment and we will see. I thought Cheyenne was a better place for them. Thank you for the read and review.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 10:11 am Title: Epilogue: Happily Ever After

now i really don't know what to write hehe :)
the one thing i know is that i'm so happy that Bill decided to stay with Tom.

Author's Response:

Me too. Thanks for the read and review.

Reviewer: mcr1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 05:55 am Title: Epilogue: Happily Ever After

I really enjoyed reading your story.

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the read and review.

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 02:53 am Title: Epilogue: Happily Ever After

Aw I feel bad breaking your perfect "100" reviews, buuuut oh well. (Unless someone else beats me to it while I'm typing haha...will probably happen). I'm so bummed the story is over, but one shots would be great! I'm still hoping for one where Bill is all dolled up...and of course lots of love between the adorable couple. Great story!

*stroking review monster*

*review monster purrs*

Author's Response:

Never feel bad for leaving a review that is awesome. I'm sad it's over too but I am looking forward to the one-shots. I am glad you liked it. The review monster is very happy with the stroking.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 02:15 am Title: Epilogue: Happily Ever After

Aww, they're too cute. I'm really happy Bills friends moved there too, a bit of normalcy for him. I adore Tom's character in this story...really understanding. Sadly all good things end. Thank you for writing and sharing!

Author's Response:

I am glad you like it. I wanted everyone to be good. Tom is amazing in this story. Thank you for reiewing and reading.

Reviewer: maumau Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/13 01:39 am Title: Epilogue: Happily Ever After

I really enjoyed the story :) really good :)

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Lovetokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/13 06:08 pm Title: Lost and Found

i love it i read all 14 chapters in one night poor Bill and i love the understanding Tom well i really like mpreg i dont know if you do but maybe you can get Bill pregnant and a happy Tom that will be so cute well thats my opinion i hope youu consider it well love the story and i hope to read the next chapter ASAP love u and the story bye.

Author's Response:

I am glad you like the story. I don't Mpreg don't ask me why but it just makes me nauseous to think about let alone read or write. Thank you for the love. Enjoy the last chapter.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/13 04:00 pm Title: Lost and Found

Well, I'm a little confused about Blaine, and what he meant by 'who else did you tell', I mean what's it matter who all he told. Fact is he snitched, and he neds gotten rid of so he can't testify. I was also a bit confused by the offer to let Bill join the gang had he not went to the cops. That was a little weird.

it broke my heart to pieces that Bill was still worried about Kashmir being safe when hewas being invaded.

I hope we see a reunion of Bill and his girlfriends in the eppie, and Tom meeting them too. But I can't decide which would be more fun, Tom in NYC or the girls in Wyoming. You choose, lol. And ideally Blaine and his whole gang would have a 'mysterious accident' and all die and never be a problem again, but that might be a bit too much to hope for and just a little too unrealistic...so...Blaine should go to jail, and the people that take over should just not care about Bill at all. Yup *nods* sounds good to moi.

Author's Response:

Blaine wanted to tie up any loose ends. Bill told Tom and under the hearsay statue Tom could then testify about statements Bill made to him. Bill would have been in the same capacity as Blaine's kept woman the one that he was drugging. Harlem is slang for brothel he wouldn't have been in the gang, he would have been a fucktoy for the gang.

rn

I worry about my dog and if someone broke into my house I would be worried about her because when in a dangerous situation we latch onto mundane thing like the safety of our pets.

rn

These are all really good suggestions we shall see what happens.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/13 04:31 am Title: Lost and Found

I liked how it happened, but it felt really rushed tbh. The attack could have benefitted from expansion and just slowing down the action. Even the dialog felt unnaturally fast in getting to the point. Of course I do like this story and the chapter was definitely exciting :)

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it even if it felt rushed. I didn't want to get too violent or in detail about the rape. I am glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/13 01:35 am Title: Lost and Found

What do I want to happen in the epilogue? How about all the bad guys die and B & T live happily ever after exactly where they are...of course Bills friends would have to come visit :)

Author's Response:

Well, we shall see but great suggestion.

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/13 12:37 am Title: Lost and Found

Grrrr Blaine is such a [insert really bad word here]. I'm so glad that they are so understanding of each other; they're really just the perfect couple. But I have to say, even though Bill says this is who he is now, I'm STILL hoping he gets all dolled up for Tom in his makeup and tight jeans. Because he changed how he is on the inside to be more down to earth, but he can still dress to kill. It just seems like something he would do...or maybe I'm just biased because really, who could say no to those smokey eyes? ;)

Author's Response:

Blaine is truly terrible. I wanted to show that Bill and Tom are really the best couple ever. Maybe Bill will in a one-shot very soon. *wink* Yeah I know I am the same way I am down to earth and sane but I still dress like a fashionista and I know that most of the writers on this site are the same way. I think we are all biased when it comes to Bill.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/13 12:36 am Title: Lost and Found

this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/13 11:27 pm Title: Lost and Found

i'm not happy that there would be just the epilogue but i'm happy that after those terrible things what happened to Bill, he still was so open to Tom and at the same time so close to him. they really a good couple even if everything between went so fast. and that Tom doesn't ask too many questions and is so good with listening Bill. and FINALLY they said it. omg, they are so perfect :)

Author's Response:

I'm sorry you think it was too fast but I am glad you liek the story. It did go a little fast but I wanted to show that sometimes that how's things go. I am glad you like Bill and Tom being together. I wanted to save the love yous for the last part of the story.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/13 01:30 pm Title: Information

yay, truth! not yay, Blaine's coming...at least Bill will have an ally when he shows up. Let's all hope Tom has a gun, mkay. Oh, and I would kill for Bill to put on his best makeup and sexiest outfit just to show Tom all he can be, since he knows now, and all. :3 Oh, and I hope they don't get caught with their pants down when the bad guy shows up...anyway. yah. I'm glad the fight was short. :)

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it all. The next update will be on Monday and maybe there will be a one-shot of Bill putting on a show for Tom. You never know what ideas come up in my perverted mind.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/13 04:35 am Title: Information

THIS WAS A GOOD CHAPTER!
I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!

Author's Response:

I am glad you like it. The next chapter will be up Monday.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/13 12:21 am Title: Information

The suspense is killing me and my mind working overtime with all the ways this could end! Can't wait for next update.

Author's Response:

I am very good at building suspense. I will keep you guessing until the very end. Next update will be on Monday.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/13 11:21 pm Title: Information

wow. i didn't expect that but i'm happy that Bill told Tom why he lied to him and that everything is good between them now, even if Tom will want to hear more from Bill.

Author's Response:

Honesty is a good policy for all successful relationships even when the truth is out there and can possibly be painful.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/13 06:13 pm Title: Information

*startles* well aren't you a freaky little creature *pers review monster*

Hmm...methink Blaine and Co. are going to be waiting at Bill's house when he gets home, possibly with Tom.

Very nice chapter. Good luck with the next installment I can't wait to see it!

Author's Response:

The review monster is a little freaky but very sweet and mostly harmless. We shall see what happens. I am glad you liked it. The next installment shall be up Monday, maybe even sooner *winks.* The review monster thanks you for your sweet words.

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/13 02:46 pm Title: Information

Haha "stroke the review monster." That is a new one; I like it.

I really loved this chapter and Tom finally figuring out who Bill is. Also, it's good that they were willing to listen to each other because that's how good relationships are supposed to be. Now I'm just nervous for Bill and the guy who's trying to kill him...

Author's Response:

The review monster thanks you and purrs. I am glad you like my description I have seen a few times and thought I would borrow it. I am glad you liked the chapter. I believe that all good relationships are based in honesty and I try to protray that in my stories. We shall see what happens. Thanks for the read and review.

You must login () to review.