Date: 11/04/12 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Omg poor Tomi I hope the conaal lets him stay
Date: 11/04/12 08:59 am Title: Chapter 3
That was nice ;) well kinda dangerous situation for Tom and he has effect after that but good that Bill was also there so he helped him ;)
Now I'm just waiting for what it would between those two ;)
Date: 11/04/12 08:29 am Title: Chapter 3
I really like the fact that they don't understand each other.
You always bring interesting aspects to your stories :)
Date: 11/04/12 03:21 am Title: Chapter 3
I absolutely love this story. Sorry for not reviewing before! I was wondering is this was a mpreg? I saw this because when Bill opened his cloth, he showed Tom an opening I believe.
Anyways! Update soon!
Date: 11/02/12 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
While I appreeciate your dedication to writing things properly, enough to do research on other languages, I'm gonna be honest and tell you when I see 'forgeign' words I just start skimming til we get back to english. *nodnod*
Hmm. I know the jist of the true Pocahontas...but I can't really remember it too well. *pout*
I find it odd how accepting everyone was of Bill bringing a whire man in, and how Tom was very...unconcerned of Bill's true gender.
Very good work. I can't wait to see more.
Author's Response:
Yea i was worried about that and i'm still tackling having the orginality to it versus reader's pleasure.
rnAlso the fact that many Native's were welcoming was their downfall. My Idea was that all tribes didn't know each other and they just believe they were from a different tribe.
rnThe true one is much more sadder than the disney and as we will find out tom has a few homosexual tendencies in his past.
Date: 10/31/12 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooooh sehr gutes Bild. Very intriguing beginning. Obviously I know the story Pocahontas, but I look forward to seeing where you take this! Keep up the lovely work!
Date: 10/31/12 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm thinking I'm going to really like this :)
Date: 10/31/12 08:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Yes!! I was waiting for a story like this for a long time xD
Author's Response:
Thanks i'm gonna try to keep doing this without mocking or offending anyone.
Date: 10/31/12 02:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it! Please continue?
Author's Response:
willl do :)