Date: 11/23/12 01:18 am Title: Chapter 8
O.o naughty Andi! -swats him off tom- Run Tomi RUN!
Date: 11/22/12 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh my....what's wrong with Bill?! I'm so worried now! I hope he's gonna be okay...
And uhh...wow, holy moly I'd be confused if I were Tom too. Even if Andi weren't the one to have told Tom that, that still seems out of left field.
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Tom's totally about to bein a sticky situation. Let's hope it doesn't progress to a rape, but let's also hope Tom doesn't get lost in the moment...in fact let's let Tom just push Andi away, yea? Keep up the great work!
Date: 11/22/12 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
Im on Tom's side for sure but damn is Montana fine!
Author's Response:
I enjoy Motana too ;)
Date: 11/22/12 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oooooo since Bill doesn't want Motana can I have him???
Author's Response:
you and Caro4ever have to fight to the death for him
Date: 11/17/12 12:35 am Title: Chapter 7
I am really glad Bills brother seems to like Tom...that will make things easier, for now at least!
Date: 11/16/12 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
A manip of Motana would be nice. You know what might be evem better though? A manip of Bill forehead hugging Anwah. *nodnod*
So, is Anwah Bill's brother's name, or is Anwah 'brother and Bill called him by title in shock?
Aw. 'Tehila it,' thank you so much for adding that in.
Wow, Tom's ex had a pretty progressive family. Being okay with a homosexual son as long as he uses it to climb the social ladder. I wouldn't have expected either damily to know about their true relationship, amd certainly mot to approve in anyway.
So...I'm a bit confused (blame the pain meds) what was Anwah talking about Bonding? Is it normal in their community to Bond with more than one person? And how does Bill being a Dual come into play with that?
I thought it was a pretty cool, Anwah being all protective big brothery.
Fantastic chapter! I can't wait for more! Keep up the amazing work!
Date: 11/16/12 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
nice :) tom just started learning and i'm really hope he would win :) well, "bill's" brother seams kinda scary hahahaha
Date: 11/15/12 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
Well, that's rather rude. 'We'll let you go through tribe member initiation so you can be with Bill, but you will also have to fight for his hand against someone who has been training for this type of thing for years, and oh yea yoy'll only have 2-r weeks to prepare.' Especially seeing as Bill and Motana don't have the right connection in the first place.
So...wait...have you mentioned these vision things and their orgasm trigger before this?
I'm not remembering if you have *self
directed frowny face*
I'm glad they're having such good luck at learning eachother's languages. ^_^ but one of the phrases I would've been interested in learning in Bill's tongue would've been 'i love you.'
You made a small mistake toward the end of this chapter. You said 'offered me the opprotunity to be adapted into the tribe' but I think you meant 'adopted'
Fantastic chapter! I am so excited to see Tom's upcoming challenges. Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:
1)Yea it sucks, let's hop tom can pull it together and not get too distracted by our bill.
rn2) remember when he went into the tent with Motana?
3)I might put it in the next chapter just for you :)
Date: 11/15/12 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh this is getting sooo good! I can't wait for next chapter!
Date: 11/14/12 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
-plots a way to sabatog Motana- awsome awsome
Date: 11/14/12 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
so question, can they talk to each other now? im so lost on the last part
Author's Response:
Yea, Bill is teaching tom his language and visa versa.
Date: 11/14/12 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 6
Im surprise Bill s dad didn't get angry at them when he discovered about them.
Author's Response:
they're more open about sexuality in their culture?
Date: 11/14/12 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
that's good that Tom have opportunity to stay with Bill forever and hopefully he will after what he has to learn and the fight. :)
Date: 11/12/12 09:37 am Title: Chapter 5
damn sexy time got interupted by banging XD
Date: 11/12/12 01:05 am Title: Chapter 5
Lol, his expression looks so silly in this manip. Very nice work in this chapter, though I am a bit confused about why they ran away, tom probably knew the guys, and I can't see them doing anything to Bill with Tom there. Or am I just being naive? Keep up the good work! I look forward to more!
Author's Response:
Guns aren't an invention of the natives and i think tom was worried for bill and the fact of being caught with a man maybe?
Date: 11/07/12 10:11 am Title: Chapter 4
It's really cute!! :)
Date: 11/06/12 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
this is soooooo cute ^^
Date: 11/06/12 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
Gaahh! How did I miss an update?!?!...*huffs*
Anywhosit. These were two wonderful chapters. I felt bad for the moose, but atleast he gave us a reason for Tom to have to stay with Bill for a while. *happy nod*
I always feel like longer chapters are better, but yours seem to really have all of the detail they really require, so short for you kind of works...
I'm looking forward to the next update! Keep up the great work!
Date: 11/06/12 11:14 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow, it seams that they are really close with each other even if they don't know themselves for so long. And maybe even without common language they're good as they are ;)
Date: 11/06/12 06:51 am Title: Chapter 4
Nahh its alright if its not super long, quality over quantity as they say ;)