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Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/13 02:07 am Title: Chapter 20

Go get him Tom! Then give Andrej what he deserves!!!

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/13 08:47 am Title: Chapter 20

oooo....i hope Tom would do anything to bring Bill back and be happy with him and their's daughter after that

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/13 08:38 am Title: Chapter 20

Another chapter please *i'll make puppy dog eyes*

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/13 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 20

Oh Tom better bring Bill back ASAP!!!

Reviewer: Jingolette Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/13 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Pls. Would you mind to show us Andrej how does he looks like in your story? I'm curious coz u just only show, Bill, Tom, Anwha and Motana. :D

Reviewer: Jingolette Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/13 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Pls. Would you mind to show us Andrej how does he looks like in your story? I'm curious coz u just only show, Bill, Tom, Anwha and Motana. :D

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/13 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 18

omg. i thought that after Bill's visit everything would be good but when Andrej came in, everything just went wrong. so wrong. damn, i hope Tom would do something about it and decided with who he wants to be

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/13 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 17

Just a quick correction...The correct word to use is PAST...as in "his hair went PAST his hips" as written in the last chapter, and "whipping PAST the branches" as written in this chapter. It's a fantastic story and I love it...just had to bring that correction to your attention.

Reviewer: Ready_Set_Go Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/13 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 17

Not much of a fan of the whole Tom and Andrej thing, hopefully Tom will see sense and Andrej will back off.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/13 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 17

Gosh I thought Bill or the baby was going to die. I want Tom to know about the baby and see what will happen or is allowed to happen. Not sure how I feel about Andrej...

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/13 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 17

i wonder when Tom will meet his daughter and what would happen between him Bill and Andrej

Reviewer: Gii Way Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/13 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 17

yeeeeaaahhhhh!
Tomi's daddyy!!!! He HAS to fell something defferent and abbandon Andrej (I like him but not with Tom) Tom was made to Bill and vise-versa!!
SOOO cute that his big brother confronted the people and went to help Bill @.@
more please!

Reviewer: tokiohotelreader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/13 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 17

I hate tom

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/13 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 16

Grrr Andrej is so self confident.

And the villgers are so weird. They are ostracizing Bill but yet they aren't. Can't imagine being separated from my lover while I'm pregnant really sad.

Reviewer: tokiohotelreader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/13 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 15

where's chapter 15??

Author's Response:

It's just improperly numbered. I'll fix it now.

Reviewer: Bkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/13 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 16

Bill and Tom need to be back together... :)

Reviewer: Ewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/13 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

I just noticed this story, can't wait for it to be finished, so I can read it! Excuse me my question, but do you know Lakota language?

Author's Response: no. that's why i sort od created my own. its a mix of 3 versions of Lakota.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 15

this is kinda sad but hopefully they will find the way to be together again or even meet each other after the time to being apart...and of course i'm waiting for ur new stories :)

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 15

I wish I could say I understand, but I don't. This is a terrible place to just up & leave off for a while. I hope you try to finish it soon or else this will feel like a huge disappointment. :(

Author's Response: i know i feel bad but it took me ddaaaayyysss to write that little chapter. i dont want to crank out crap chapters. i'll come back better than ever!rn

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/13 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 14

Ok Bill now you have no choice, fly with Tom!!!
Good chapter as always :D

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