Maril, your stories are always so beautiful. But one thing I would advice you to is that you write more between Tom and the OFC where they talk together and experience some things, like show how Tom tried to get this girl back and how she at first wouldn't just accept his apology because she'd really felt hurt but she eventually realized he was worth the second chance and then show how their relationship goes on... and like, some nice details in between. This story is so sweet, but it all happens so fast... in my opinion Chris just took him back and I don't think he deserved that. He had to really prove himself in my opinion. At least have them talk some more before she just responds "I love you too" - I know this is a one shot and it's very short, I'd love if it was much longer and there was a lot more talking between one another... and you wrote about how Tom reacted once he saw her for the first time again... stuff like that really makes a worlds difference - to me at least. But still; very cute story!

Author's Response: Thanks Em. I hope my writing has come a bit further since I wrote this story three years ago. At that time I was pumping out one shots for people on THO and probably didn't take the care I should have. I will take your advice to heart and hopefully my writing will improve. :)