Date: 04/23/25 02:11 am Title: Chapter 1
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 05/01/23 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 10/27/12 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
"You shouldn't smell like someone I am fucking" is quite a brilliant line. I have always liked twins' dialogues in your stories, so sharp and fun, sexy too. Tom's talk makes me hot:-)
Date: 10/27/12 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Twins masturbating while thinking of each other is hot. Period.
I always love the way you buyild up the atmosphere and I guess Bill is right: there isn't one who wouldn't think of how he tastes.
Waiting for that time they'll take now... ;)
Date: 10/23/12 05:01 am Title: Chapter 1
I always love a narcissistic Bill.
Author's Response: Then you should read "Cupid's Chokehold" by Leichenwasser. I know...the author's name is disgusting, but the story is top-notch.
Date: 10/22/12 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
YAAAAY!!!! i can't wait for the secong and third part of the series!!!! by far the VERY BEST Tom/Bill first time story EVER!!!
Author's Response: Ugh, really? I actually went back and edited it online last night and found a mistake in the html that left the entire last third in italics. Not to mention, the writing was AWFUL! This is actually a really good trilogy, but I promise to edit the rest of it before posting. I mean, eww. Just sayin'. Thank you though, for the vote of best First Time, ever. That makes me giggle.
Date: 10/22/12 05:09 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a nice story!