Date: 11/12/13 08:39 pm Title: Big, Big Changes
HOLY CHRIST
Author's Response: I KNOWWWWW
Date: 11/12/13 11:33 am Title: Big, Big Changes
After reading this chapter, I totally dreamed from BIll's POV that he was upset and worried about how all of this was going to play out; that Tom wouldn't have time anymore for him between Andrej and his own bb twins, that they'd planned to have houses close to each other but nothing was for sale near the Trumpero house right then; that he'd be having welcome-home sex with Tom and Bushido would walk in. Poor Bill was worried about everything! And it was such a vivid dream! See, your story has affected me that strongly. I'm looking forward to seeing Mamma's reaction, haha, I think she's going to hit the roof. The only thing I really wonder is why Brooke didn't call or text back right away when she found out she was pregnant; I would think she'd be asking for more money right away.
Author's Response: O_o You had a precognitive dream about a made up story that someone else is writing. How excellent is THAT!!! But wow, you must have felt so bad for your dream Bill (my fictional Bill) when you woke up. I'm thrilled to know this little tale has threaded itself into your psyche so well! (especially since I've got a few of yours tucked into hidden pockets of my own). I too am looking forward to seeing Mamma's reaction - hitting the roof? She's going to go through it like a rocket! As for Brook, I think she just wasn't quite sure what to do - she had a lot to think about. Giving her babies to a couple of gay teenage dads? Hmmm....yeah, I'd probably debate that myself. Oh - btw, as I was sitting at home trying to convalesce my dumb arms, I found fiction press and a story that had me thinking of you! I had one link to a story by the same author at the end of this last chapter, but this is a different story. It's a fantasy, and for some reason (probably because of your Two Against the World series - see how they're just camped out in my brain?) I thought you might like it. If you'd like, here's the link: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3091384/1/Blood-Red You seem to be a super busy gal, but if you get a chance (it's very smutty, just to let you know). Also - I keep seeing you mention "sprinting" in Twitter. I keep wanting to ask you what it is......might be interested? Even with lame arms (why oh why did I insist on trying to open that damned salsa jar...). Thanks as always for taking the time to review, I owe you a couple for By Design.... Thought Review!
Date: 11/10/13 09:20 pm Title: Big, Big Changes
I wondered when Brook would make another appearance. Tom and Andrej are in for it now!
Author's Response: Bwaaah ha ha ha ha....
Date: 11/10/13 04:40 pm Title: Big, Big Changes
Ok, so I feel like you wrote this chapter just for me! So much YAY! Thank you. I laughed really hard at Brook and Bill too.
Oh, and Georg and Raf, nice choice there (so much pretty).
Author's Response: Of course it's for you! Lol...I'm happy you enjoyed it so much. The Brook/Bill scene was a lot of fun to write. And Raf/Geo...well, everyone deserves a little lovin'
Date: 11/10/13 04:31 pm Title: Big, Big Changes
Wow! Just...wow! Like I said in my last review you bring everything together seamlessly. Wish I had your talent; my writing always seems so disjointed. I love the more demanding Andrej. I can see why others didn't care for him before because he was a bit of a push over. You've managed to retain some of his innocence and naivety with him being a bit embarrassed about reading that 'filthy' book and asking (demanding) those things of Tom, but also made him more assertive...and Tom loving it. Oh, I hope Raph and Georg get together. Both of them have kind of been rejected by a Trumpero twin, so it would be lovely if they find solace in each other. But...oh, Brook turning up like that. I didn't know what you were going to do about her, whether the fact she hadn't been in touch meant nothing had come of the insemination. But the tie-in with the past lives scene on the video in the last chapter...did you have this in mind when you wrote that scene at the party? Because it's pure genius with Bill recognising his past children. And Poppi already certain of their parentage because of Bill's rection. Bill will so want to be involved in their lives. Are we going to have happy families now, with Tom, Bill, Andrej and Bu and the kids? Will Brook want involvement in their lives? I'm wondering why she hasn't been in touch before now. Did she have second thoughts about parting with the babies? Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope your arms are holding up and you're not suffering too much with all this writing you're doing. Love and hugs, Helen x
Author's Response: Ha, there's that word again! Seamless! Maybe it's the same for both of us - our own writing seems so messy, but to readers the story is smooth (like yours - you always manage to dive right in, bringing it to life at the exact spot where you left off and I hope you gift us with another chapter soooon!). Okay...Andrej - yes, I think he's hit a growing up point during his stay in Buenos Aires, that time when we change from our awkward, dorky teenager to the teenager-about-to-become-an-adult phase of life. Not that he was so much of a pushover before (he stood up to Bill a couple times), but he's really just a very, very soft boy. I'm glad his naïve/innocent/growing up mixture came across! I'm kind of hoping Raf/Geo hit it off, too. It's kind of weird having the G's in the story, but so peripherally, so I'm hoping it doesn't seem like I'm forcing them in. Gotta have school friends, right? Yes, Brook came back, ta da! As for having Bill's past life thing in mind...Not exactly. I mean, sort of. He was starting to have dreams about "them" several chapters back, but I kind of did that for two reasons - one, to tie in the whole concept of the story of Karmic Lessons (which I have to keep reminding myself to do! lol...), and two, to force myself to stay with the baby/Brook plot, because I wasn't sure I wanted to go there. I can be very bad at making up my mind, so rather than waffle, I force myself to pick something. But, it all seems to be working to tie everything in, I just hope the "drowned baby," and the past life stuff doesn't all seem a bit much. As for what's next, I'm sure Bill and Andrej won't have a perfectly smooth time in the future. They're sort of frenemies. And we've still got Mamma's reaction to contend with. I can just picture her beating Tom about the head and shoulders with her purse. Wish I could just write non-stop! MY ARMS SUCK!! Okay, anyway...that link on the last chapter to a story on fiction press (which I just found - I've been looking for good slash sites for EVER. It's a bit hard to navigate to find slash fic, but I've found some excellent writers in the last couple weeks!) just wanted to let you know that the link story is really, really good and the writer has a few other long fics on the site, and the other two long ones are really, really pervy. If you wanted to check them out, I'm all about spreading the word! Talk to you soon, hope the weirdbrain clears up soon! Kisses, M
Date: 11/10/13 04:07 pm Title: Reunions, Re-memories
Sorry I've been MIA this past week or so. I read and kept meaning to review and then time slipped away and well, you don't want to hear again about the weird place my head's been so...short review because I also want to comment on the new chapter. Thankee for the dedication. Loved Tom being completely smitten by Andrej all over again. So absolutely sweet. Oh, Bu was cruel letting Bill think he wouldn't be there for his birthday, and he got goodbye sex. The link up with Tom and Mama was lovely and that past lives memory so sad. You just have this way of making of making everything work together so seamlessly. Great chapter. See, I can do short. Now for the next one.
Author's Response: you did short! Suits the chapter though, since it was only 13 pages. Sorry to hear your brain is still playing in weirdland. I hate when that happens. Okay, I am glad to know you got to this chapter, because I figured the Tom/Andrej reunion would bring a smile to your face. And thanks for the "seamless" comment - I really feel like it's all disjointed and I scrabble to get it all put together in a hurry and then worry it's just all sloppy and has no depth. Especially when I'm having to write piecemeal like this. Anyway, on to the next!
Date: 11/10/13 03:07 pm Title: Big, Big Changes
NOOOOOO!
Author's Response: Yyyep.
Date: 11/10/13 02:05 pm Title: Big, Big Changes
The only way I was able to keep from going through the roof with anger at this whole baby situation was because I had already had prepared myself for the story playing out this way. I hope Tom is the biological father, I mean it would only make sense that he is based on Bill’s connection with the kids and knowing that they were their children in a past life. It would mean that even though Tom and Andrej were supposed to be the parents; Bill is the “real” mother. That would be so sweet. I wonder how Bill’s auto-pilot “maternal instincts” are going to mesh with Andrej when they return home and once the initial family shock of them having kids subsides. I wonder if it will really be Tom, Andrej, and the kids as a family or if Bill will have a hard time seeing that because he knows they are his or maybe he will be able to handle them as family better BECAUSE he knows they are his. I really can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks for being a trooper and continuing to write. :)
Author's Response: You had it all figured out! I kept wondering if I should change my plans, but I was wavering enough on this particular plot as it was, that's why I pinned myself down with Bill's dreams. No more waffling, the twins are here now! As for paternity, well... twins obviously run in the Trumpero family line, at least now they do. I'm sure all will NOT be smooth sailing as the new kids are incorporated into the family. Bill and Andrej tolerate sharing, but that's about it. Tolerate. I wonder how well this is all going to go....
Date: 11/10/13 12:40 pm Title: Poppi's Boys
You tease.........
I love you for that
Author's Response: Wuv you too, fuzzy wuzzy kins
Date: 11/10/13 11:54 am Title: Big, Big Changes
Ohh the baby mama!!!!!!!!
Aahhh their twins..... So cute
Finally, it took u long enough
Author's Response: Baby mama...lol.... And what do you mean, it took long enough! I had to make the story last through nine months of gestation!
Date: 11/10/13 07:40 am Title: Big, Big Changes
Oh dear....this is going to be interesting.
Is Bill EVER normal? What's normal anyways?
Author's Response: I think it's going to be kind of interesting myself! As for Bill being normal...um...never. And normal would be NOT remembering past lives.
Date: 11/10/13 04:16 am Title: Big, Big Changes
WOW, Tom has kids, and Bill know them from another life!! Just WOW, I love this story.
How long will this story be? Like will it continue until Bill and Tom are dead?
Author's Response: How long will it be? Well...if it continues til they're dead, they'd have to die kind of young, so I don't think we'll be doing that. I'm thinking there will be a few more chapters. And I'm thinking a sequel may be in order....
Date: 11/10/13 03:59 am Title: Big, Big Changes
Damnnn I thought she wouuldnt be coming back -_-!!!
Author's Response: I know, I've been wondering about that myself....
Date: 11/10/13 02:32 am Title: Big, Big Changes
YOU CANT LEAVE ME. I need this story, mkay?? I can cope with whatever you decide to do to us woth the plot (omg!!!!) but I can't handle this 'windong down' nonsense. There are...SO many THINGS still!!! They've got 13 years of life left till I'm satisfied. Unless youre goingtokillthemiffomgknockonwoodIdidnotjustthinkthatintoexistanceignoremedon'tdoit. Please. Don't leave meee. Babies and relationships and growing up and learning how to cut a steak and taking over the business still has tonhappen, right?
Author's Response: I KNOW!!! I've been working on it for over a year, I'm kind of invested, too, honest! I might do a sequel, starting when the boys are a little older and start really taking over the business, so stay tuned (so no one can be killed, right? See, you have nothing to worry about!). I just have other stories to write - I promised shitpisscatfuck a Power Bottom Bu! And I've got a list of ideas waiting! But you've got me thinking that this one really might need a sequel....
Date: 11/10/13 01:57 am Title: Big, Big Changes
Aparecieron los babies! Jajaja soon cute!
Author's Response: Los bambinos, es una fiesta! Si bueno!
Date: 11/10/13 01:17 am Title: Big, Big Changes
I'm so happy that andrej returns home, and up the news that he and Tom have their twins. he will be so happy, his dream come true and have babies Bill touched me so much, I'm sure going to love these babies.
beautiful chapter
awww poor Poppi XDDDD
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad to hear you liked it! Thank you!
Date: 11/10/13 01:14 am Title: Big, Big Changes
awww poor Poppi XDDDD
Author's Response: Eh, what's a couple more grandkids....
Date: 11/10/13 12:55 am Title: Big, Big Changes
Waoh great intense
Date: 11/10/13 12:43 am Title: Big, Big Changes
Cool story!
Author's Response: Thank you!