Finallyyyyyyy! Are you trying to kill us readers, you know we're spoiled and like our frequent updates. (j/k, sort of :), I hope all is good with you.) Well, well, well, there's more to Andrej than just a pretty face and a motor mouth. He can actually be useful to them and teach them a thing or two. I love Bill, love love love him in this story, I mean he just can't help himself. He doesn't like Andrej, but he is blinded by the diamonds, lol. Andrej basically out-Bill'ed Bill! So smart, that Andrej, he knew exactly how to play him. Also, I love that Bill hates anyone having one- up on him, so he HAS to ask Andrej how he stole those earrings even if it tears him up inside. Love it! I also love how Bill is rationing that ass to Tom, he gives him just enough of his lessons, but not everything he's done or learned. And the constant referencing of Dave as "the pervert" by both Bill and Tom had me literally laughing out loud. Oh, and I can't forget to mention the dream. Andreas is seriously Mr. McCreepy. The way you described that dream literally gave me the heebie jeebies. He's one to watch. I love how Bill getting fucked by a man old enough to be his father is okay with him, but getting a forceful(and we know he likes it rough) b.j. by a kid his own age alerts his "spidey senses" that something is off, it's so ironic. I believe Bill's ability to discern in these types of situations will prove to be a useful tool now and in the future. As always, thank you for the amazing chapter and I can't wait for what's to come. :) (Wow, just realized how much I used the word "love" in this review, but it's the truth so no apologies here) What a great way to start my weekend!

Author's Response: And what a great way to start my work week! Thank you for another one of your amazing reviews! I love (my turn!) that you really get this Bill! Seems like Pervy Dave really bothered some people and they worried about Little Billy (which is a wonderful compliment, actually, that the readers are feeling so strongly about it!), but Little Billy is quick to learn and knows what he wants and doesn't want - no delicate victim here! It absolutely thrilled me to read this review - I'm ready to clap and giggle and go "I know, I know! YOU know!!! Yayyyy!" Andrej is turning out to be a surprise to me as well (like a couple chapters back, when he opened his mouth and just....never shut it. Wasn't expecting that! And now he's a brilliant jewel thief - who knew!). And he's a wise devil, too - roping Bill in like a professional cowboy! As for Bill "rationing that ass" - I'm wondering how long he's going to wait, I'm getting impatient! Not like Tom, who seems to have all the patience in the world for his Andrej (doesn't hurt that he has an outlet at home though!). I will do my very best not to let the time get away from me again and get another chapter out on Friday. Thanks again for your great review, minibar!

Another great chapter. I would be lying if I said that Bill's first real sex wasn't better than good and super hot at the same time BUT when it was all over and done with I started thinking and I couldn't shake off a rather sad feeling from it. It wasn't sex itself that irked me so rather then David's way of addressing Bill in hidden places of his awful, awful mind when mentally processing their act - "the boy", "the brat", "the little asshole" (or something like that, I can't remember exactly)- that's a way to lose virginity (sarcasm in place). I mean I am a woman and Bill is a hormonal young boy who doesn't probably think of these things too much so our opinions on the subject can't be matched but god damn it... still... he is just an objectified piece of young ass to David and don't try to tell me that David meant it in a cute kind of way when he silently uttered all those pejoratives. I liked the sex but aftertaste of it was terrible. That leads me to our previous "discussion" about Bill's nature and why he is the way he is ("just because", lol)and your detailed answer to all of my questions. Thank you for that. I can't say that I would agree with all the things you have tried to explain and justify but that's totally ok. People view things from all various angles and process events/ happenings in life in different ways too. I still believe firmly that this kind of "relationship" Bill is having with David can't be optimal and "healthy" for him in a long run no matter how eager, confident and self-aware he might be but who am I to judge when I see real twc as a "normal thing" and hottest thing under sun, lol.
You misunderstood when you said I don't need to be afraid that this story would turn into a gloomy, doomy sack of sadness. I am actually quite fond of very complex, complicated, angsty stories and the best of best on this site... all sad, bittersweet and agsty in nature. But upbeat is ok too:-)

Your Bill is a big drama queen and he is quite adorable like that:-) Every time he get pissed at Tom/ Andrej and behaves like a bitch I have deepest sympathy with him. I really do. Bringing Andrej to their room to fool around - gosh, what has been Tom thinking; that room should be a sacred land and he should know that, lol. It's quite funny how they play their pissy game when they are angry at each other - both passionate about it but still amateur-like - like all children would be. Tom has definitely stronger self control and won't budge when offended. Bill on the other hand is always too quick to show horns, claws and sharp teeth but then he is always the one who crawls back. I remember when I was a kid and got punished for something I did or argued with my parents and brother(no physical punishment), it always hurt so bloody much but I was such a proud little unyielding shit - I never apologized, never beg for forgiveness, never crawled back, never, haha. Bills' way is definitely more healthy than mine was back then:-)

I was reading others' comments and your answers to them which I am glad for because I have learnt a lot about your plans with this story and I might be reaching for those breaks much earlier than I originally thought (being sad). It looks like this won't be a twc story after all, right? Tom not caring so much about a fact that Bill lost his virginity to David, twins sharing their bodies but not romantic feelings, Bushido's announced entree in a couple of chapters - all that doesn't point at Bill/Tom story does it. I have to ask, sorry. I would still love to see a twc Bill/Tom story coming from your pen one day. I meant it when I said your writing was brilliant but I am not such a connoisseur of stories that are primarily Billshido and this story is heading into this direction.... so, oh well.....

Great chapter, I would love to see Bill flash his new tattoo to everyone willing to see:-) Poor Georg. Have some mercy on the bloke:-) I wonder though how on earth will Bill explain his new tatt to his parents and who will he mention as his company at the tattoo parlor. Hm.

Happy writing and happy pre-Christmas shopping.

Author's Response: Hi GnB! Thanks so much for another awesome review, I love it! Let's get to Pervy Dave first! Yes, he's a complete asshole (not trying to "cute" it up. Showing Dave for who he is, and he'd definitely be able to objectify boys, as a pederast, the same way more normal guys objectify women - not healthy or nice but they do it). I don't think, though, that even at 13, Bill would give a damn. He's sort of immune to the man emotionally because little Billy (okay, he's almost 14. Maybe that's better, lol) is there to find out about grown-man-dick! And he thinks, yum yum! So even if he knew Dave thought of him as a little brat, Bill would shrug and ask if they could get naked. So the potential emotional ramifications are really non-existent. Bill just wants to learn all about sex, and Dave knows a lot. And is willing to teach it in a non-threatening way (Dave considers himself a seducer rather than a molester. Ah, the lies we tell ourselves!) A healthy relationship in the long run? Definitely not! A fun stepping stone for Bill? He'd say yes. Bill and Tom - their relationship is so fun to write in this one! You're right that Bill is a drama queen! Their connection is, first and foremost, as brothers, twins. That's how they see one another. So, they fight like siblings, hang out like siblings, mess around like siblings. But they're so very young right now. Things WILL get more complex and emotional between them, but right now they're simply at a pretty healthy place. Bringing in romantic feelings would make it too complicated for such babies. They need freedom to explore, yet still have one another as touchstones. Hardore twincest? We'll see what develops! Bushido? Yes....he's enroute. Oh, and as for a twc B/T...I'm considering one. It's actually harder for me to conceptualize them truly being romantic partners AND brothers (rather than just teasing around with them, but having them, ultimately, with other partners), I'm not sure why. I also have a non-related B/T story on the backburner. But for you, I will focus on the twc one next! .......I'm so glad you take the time to write, GnB - you truly do give me a lot to think about (like last review. I thought, "oh, shit....that whole karma thing, yeah, I gotta do that somewhere...) W.I.P's can end up meandering off the originally planned trail!

ooooooo-...... great cap.... you must be proud of yourself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =)

Author's Response: Well, I am now! Thanks, ninel!

Omg... Bill. Sounds like a slut now..... I'm not so sure if u like it ): but well, I'm exited to hear about the reactions of his family!

Author's Response: Slutty little Bill! Well, he's discovering sex at an early age. I don't think messing around with several is slutty, per se. He's young, certainly not the relationship type at this point, and very curious about experimenting with differnt people. So, it's just how he needs to be! We'll see what happens next! Thanks TP ;)

I thought of a few ideas for a tattoo Bill could get if he DID decide to get some stupid Chinese characters: "我的牛仔裤太小了" or maybe "每天我跟我的哥哥打飞机" (hopefully those show up the way they're supposed to once I post this. In other news, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR DEDICATED BILL'S LOSS OF VIRGINITY CHAPTER TO ME. I. Can't. Breathe. So Bill lost his virginity, hm?? And yet he goes into a fit of jealousy just because Tom flirts with Andrej... That seems a bit unfair. I like it. I just wonder how Tom will react... if Bill even tells him. And I like that Perry kid ;) And I like the subtle hints that Poppi's aware of the twins' relationship. OMG I'm just so excited about this story and it's torturous that I have to wait a week. I'm gonna cry. Only two more weeks until I'll be back home and I can read an update from the comfort of my own bedroom :D

Author's Response: Okay, what does that translate to? And the chapter was for you, someone who knows the healing power of humor. Yes, Bill has a double standard! But he's also jealous of Andrej because of his looks, not just because of Tom. Glad you liked the little scene with Perry! Bill's really finding out what he likes, and ain't shy about getting it! OMG I'm so thrilled that you're so excited about this, it makes me even more excited! Oh, and yeah, Poppi kinda has an idea of what little teenagers do. SOME people actually have healthy concepts of human sexuality. Too bad it's not that many. Anyway, next chapt in a few days and I'm sorry you have to leave China! (I'm projecting...you're probably a little ready to come home :P

That was wickedly great. I can't even start expressing my delight over how great that was. I enjoy those sick and wicked Bill/David rendezvous way more than I should be allowed to I am afraid. Like seriously. I wonder though how come Bill became this way - this kinky, this twisted, wanting that badly to be dominated. C'mon it can't be just that plain and easy that he simply fancy older, experienced men. Title of your story intrigues me to no end you know. Karma can be bitch sometimes and karmic connections very painful and cruel ones - a tough lesson to learn, deemed behavior to overcome, beloved people to rethink in our mind and heart, predispositioned inclinations to let go of. We may learn or we may remain stuck in what we have known for many, many lives and repeat same shit over and over again. Some people believe one can overcome his karma but it ain't easy. I am itching to know if you are planning to develop this karmic theme any deeper or if it was just those couple of random memories of Bill's and that's it, done with:-) Bill's memories of his previous lives with Tom and of having to part from him, having to leave him behind were painful but also intriguing. Does he need to learn how to cut this vicious repetitive circle? And what would need to happen to get him into such a point in his life that he once again would be led astray and feel forced to have no other option but leave Tom again. For what? (sorry for my half-psychotic ramble:-)
It has been such a fun ride so far but you know what? Now matter how smooth, entertaining and fun this story has been I have a feeling it could get pretty dark and complicated eventually. Every time when I think about your Bill and Tom (but mostly Bill) in this story I get a prickly feeling under my skin, some kind of discomfort and doomy fear almost if you will. It has been all so damn easy for the boys, so smooth, so full of family love and support, so full of sexual eagerness and joy, kinda straight forward and uncomplicated. Is this heaven meant to last? And Bill? He is so gilt-free, so shameless in his approach to this new stuff with David, so protected, invincible almost BUT we are talking a 13-year-old boy here, right? He may learn "all tricks of the trade" in bed with David but I expect him to pay for it later, some kind of crash to come . Idk, the feeling I get out of it is elusively foreboding of something nasty and dark. His body and psyche can't be in sync when it comes to THIS kind of adult stuff. I think he may get scared by it all? But in what way? And what role will Tom play in all this?
But hey I am just probably wrong. As always. Reading way more into the stuff than I should have, my analytical mind going haywire:-)
Andrej and Tom are kinda cute but how long can a crush like this last? And how will Bill react if it gets more serious? Does Tom like Andrej just because he looks like he does, eg like a girl? And what about Bill in your story? Do you let him grow black long hair as he once had in RL, turning him into a dark mysterious stunning exotic flower. He hasn't reached his full potential yet, right? I picture him at this point as he once looked when he had his "manga" hair style. He looked to me like a cute, pretty, sweet little chicken. Later on though .....oh boy, a totally different story, haha. Will he bloom to that? Oh gosh, I am so nosy.
As for David... he has been pretty stupid and reckless if you ask me. Bill might not tell a living soul (but Tom haha) but if Trumpero's clan got a sniff of what he has been doing to their little pretty boy... oh man. I would probably fear for my life if I was Dave. But David is one horny, twisted fuck so he can't even bring himself to care. Probably.
I think I am done for today:-) Thank you for a fabulous chapter.

You are very kind to take my dislikes into consideration but you shouldn't do so. Just wright what you feel like, honey. I may not like KayOne but some other people surely do, so it's always 50/50 guess, right?

Author's Response: I am clapping with glee at this review, GnB! Oh, how I love a person who enjoys thinking and analyzing and discussing! So much to chew over....And that was why, in my reply to your last review, I said I'd love to hear anything you liked/didn't like or wanted to see, because it helps me pop out of my own thoughts and see my stories and characters from a different point of view (I'm not always very good at seeing others' pov's because I'm super opinionated. But I try, I try!).......Okay, GnB, on to your wonderfully long and thought-provoking review.... 1.) Karma. I'm glad you brought this up! Bill's ties to past lives are not done with, first of all - the feelings and slight sensations of memories will pop up here and there, but strong memories like those he had as a child have evaporated. I wanted to keep that aspect somewhat realistic, and the in books I've read on children who supposedly recall past lives that is always a similar thread - they forget, usually by the age of six or seven. And so that's what has happened to Bill. Now as for karma, the boys are being brought up in a criminal life style, and certainly with the way Bill's sister has taught him to think, he's going to realize deeper implications about what he's doing. But what really sets us free from karma? Never doing anything bad to anyone, ever? Or ...maybe not feeling so guilty about it, and seeing human existence as a thing full of pain, both given and taken? So the idea of karma will be floating around...2.) I'll tie this in to #1 - your worry that the story will take a dark turn. Surely you've noticed that I like upbeat stories with just enough pain to keep it realistic without making it gloomy and sad? This one will be no different. I know it might seem their lives have been set in a perfect, happy bubble (albeit in the center of a crime family), but it's giving them the emotional base to be able to handle rougher stuff that may come their way. They've been surrounded by love and sanity (so very rare for most families, unfortunately), and by such a large family group, that it would take a lot to bring them down. They may be being groomed for running a mafia organization, and that in itself is a pretty dark aspect, but the strength of the family is the first and most important part of that. So...this story is not going down some heroin addicted, major character death trail, have no fear! 3.) Okay, Bill's sexual nature. Yes, he's a bit foreward and precocious. And he seems to know what he likes. Here are some reasons behind that: a.) He is extremely confident and outgoing. So he's not going to be a shy little wallflower when it comes to getting what he wants once he gets an idea in his head (the idea of Dave - Tom mentioning the man looking like he wanted to put his hand down Bill's pants. It was the tiny match that lit the fire. Sometimes, that's all it takes, especially in a mind/body ready to learn all about sex). b.) When he put on makeup, his family supported him. His Italian, macho, paternalistic-based family. When he outright told everyone he was gay, his family once again fully supported him. Therefore, he never felt bad about himself in any way. His sexual identity was never something he was made to feel ashamed about. In fact, he feels a bit proud of himself for it. c.) He'd already started kissing Tom and rubbing all over him. So he felt comfortable touching another person's body in a sexual way. d.) Wow, was he ever curious to touch a grown man's! Because... e.) Some children, without being molested or accidentally seeing daddy's on-line porn, or being introduced to sexual activity in any way before they were ready for it, are, at a fairly early age, ready for it. He's not eight, he's 13, and he's raring to go. Because I like to talk about sex, I've known several people who've admitted the ideas that turned them on starting at a very, very early age (my partner knew at six that she liked pain fantasies. A gay friend of mine was interested in sex starting at five. By eleven, I knew what I liked - and the Dave/Bill scene should be a clue to that ;) So, that's simply how Bill is - playing around with Tom, and maybe having seen, when he was smaller, someone on tv being tied up - it doesn't take much! Bill has several pieces of a puzzle that end up equalling = A high, confident sex drive; A desire for an assortment of lovers; And being submissive.................................Okay, whew! That was fun! I hope that explained everything so that it's understandable and believable.......Next topic! ......................Andrej and Tom, I can't help it! Andrej is so adorable! But we'll have to see what happens, he may have some surprises for us. And yes, Tom likes that he's a sweet pretty boy/girl. But Tom is very young, and has a lot to explore yet (including his twin!). As for Bill's hair - yeah, I actually had to look up an early interview to get that right. Since I don't do RL TH stuff (not terribly interested), I'm not terribly familiar with them as real people. However, YES, the cute little chicken will be growing into a beautiful teenager with the long black hair! ......David, well... He's actually been very fun! And with the way he treated Bill, considering how the boy was enjoying it, I don't think Bill suffered any damage. Might have happened a year or three early, for most kids, but Bill is precocious! He was perfectly happy with what Dave did. He's not falling in love, needing reassurance, or attention. It was just...fun. There will be some meetings with Dave in the future, we'll see what happens! ....okay GnB, once again, thank you for such a fun and in-depth review, I loved reading it, loved thinking about it, and loved answering it! I hope you keep letting me know your thoughts as this story progresses!

OOOO MMMMY FCKIN GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!

it was fckin hot .......xD!! lololol
but BILL what have you let him done OMGGGGGGG this little Bill is crazy hahaha OMG TuT
im just a little sad cause Im used to read Bill and Tom first times kdjalkfjaf

but anyway TuT i love your fic i can bear it!!

I want to think Bill is this old soul trap in this time.. in little Billi's body hahaha so it helps me not to freak out about him with bastard Dave xD

The room trouble was so heart breaking OMG sdklfjskdT-------T
and they both crying T^T all the fckin feelings.

i want Dave to meet Andrej...they fall in love and run away and no one gets to know about them ever!!!!!!!!!!!!
ahhahaha okno xD

i really love your story I'm dying for more!!!!

thank you so much for share!!

Author's Response: Hello, Nessa VK :) Thanks for the very emotional review! I know a lot of people like Bill's first time to be with Tom, but this Bill is not that sweet or romantic-hearted. He and Tom might have THEIR first time, though, and no matter how many other guys Bill might have been with, being with Tom would still be extra special. I don't think this "old soul" Bill is anything but satisfied by his encounter with Dirty Dave ;) as for Dave/Andrej...interesting idea! Thank you so much for reviewing!

I realy love this story <3 its great and cute :D waiting for more. n.n

Billy is prettier!! dumb Tommy! dumb Tommy! x3

I love how long your chapters are, this story is really different and really interesting. Cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Hi there GloomCookie. I love knowing that the long chapters are appreciated, I always like when other authors pack a lot in, too. Nobody can beat Saltywench's Mirror Images though (good lord I love that story!). Thanks so much for letting me know you're reading and that you find this one interesting (best praise ever!). Next chapter on Friday or Saturday!