Date: 01/27/13 12:35 pm Title: Poppi's Boys
i will quote, "ohh i like were this is headin...........", il get on that email ryt away, lemme just finish this argument im having
Author's Response: Okay, Missy P....read your wish for the one shot! You'll get it as soon as I've got a bit of time!
Date: 01/27/13 11:46 am Title: What Bill Wants
Loved Bill's flirting with Marshall, and how he eventually works out that more is less and being too obvious isn't working. Tony sure is taking a risk by allowing the liason to go ahead - if Gianni finds out that he knew about it there'll be hell to pay. And Marshall is kind of trapped now, isn't he? Bill wants him and now Tony knows about it Marshall won't be able to get out of the relationship until Bill decides he's finished with him or he'll incur the wrath of Tony. Of course, the biggie in this chapter is poor little Andrej. What a huge secret to keep all by himself. Poor, poor boy. This is when the family really comes into its own, sweeping in and sorting everything out. And Simona is such an mother hen, taking him under her wing. Its lovely that Bill is more concerned about Tom's happiness than feeling jealous over the whole love thing. I have a feeling Andrej's father is going to be a right bastard and I'm wondering just how Bill will pull it off getting Tom to keep the 'sad blond boy'. I'm sure he'll use his special talents in some way, and then Andrej will get to move in with the Trumperos and Simona can spoil him rotten...and Tom will always have his angel there. At least that's what I'm hoping for. I'll have to wait and see I guess. But will Bill be quite as pleased if Tom starts spending all his time with Andrej instead of him? But then he'll have Marshall to play with. Oooo, so many possibilities. Great stuff, as usual. Hugs, Helen x
Author's Response: Hi Helen :) I'm kind of hoping this goes in the same direction you're hoping it does. I started the next chapter, and I'm never exactly sure what's going to happen (Andrej's dead mom was kind of a surprise for me! Lol...) More Marsh/bill on the horizon, so I'm sure he'll be nicely distracted. I'm feeling bad for Andrej right now. He'll definitely need some Tom time. And some Mamma time, I think....Looks like his own mother had a few issues! As for Poppi finding out about Marshall....he might not be too unhappy about it, really - he'd probably like the boys to have distractions outside of each other so he knows they aren't getting too intertwined. The parents have been so accepting of the twins playing around with each other, but it's mostly because they've both had healthy outlets and haven't gotten enmeshed. If they thought the boys were TOO close, there would be some problems! Thanks as always for your review, I always look so forward to them!
Date: 01/26/13 06:35 pm Title: Poppi's Boys
Wow! So! This is my second review today! I'm sorry!!!! I hope you don't mind! xD I hardly we review anything, ONE story before I believe... Anyway! I realised that authors could give feedback and was like woohoo! And then I read through a few other reviews too and realised its OKAY to say what you think about withou insulting you (you sound like a lovely darling, sweetie! I hope room painting went well! xD) do here I go?
So, I was just a little concerned you would take my babbling as me pushing on my views to you, but pleaseeeeee don't see it that way! This is still my most favourite fic out there, no question!
I must say, this is my first fic where there had been another strong relationship with one of the characters and I see now that that's probably one to stay. I really like how you've portrayed Andrej because it means I actually LIKE him instead on hating him for pulling the twins apart.
However, I don't! But what I would LOVE to see would be a little angsty realisation where both twins see that they're in love and then they both know but won't tell each other?
I also kinda hope Tomi grows into the dominant man bill needs c;
These are only my daydreams so don't feel like I'm prodding you for anything, please! C:
I think that's all I had to say about characters...hmm.
I also love that you are obviously well versed an researched in what you write about! I can't tell you how mad it gets me when people write about things they know nothing of, it ruins it for me. And even better when I can actually LEARN something from it!
I'm so grateful to you for updating so regularly - only six days, right? - and this fic will no doubt be featured some time soon - is there a way for me to nominate you for that?! xD
This is fantastic, a good amount of kinda...hmmm, suspense? Concerning our little twins but then some good relief, too.
I hope bill realises that his brother is much more fulfilling than his elderly men c; heheh
What would be adorable would be the twins having sex for the first time and then realising their feelings *u* oh gosh please ignore me.
Any spelling mistakes I'm sorry! I'm on my phone I was so eager to review this again! (Second time today) I'm so sorry if I annoy or offend you, that truly wasn't my propose! Keep up the great work, this is fabulous!
Author's Response: Pinkpringles, you are just too cute! Don't worry about offending me! I'm thrilled to tears that you're enjoying this story so much that you're taking the time to write to me about it! You sound a little like me when I first found this site a couple years ago - I lurked for a while. Then I didn't know that authors (some, anyway) responded to reviews, or that you could look up an author's history and other stories by them. It took a while, and I still don't delve into everything that can be done on this site and the links. As for featuring, I don't know if they're doing that right now - I put in for a couple of stories myself (Caramel by Beerebutterfly and I think one by shitpisscatfuck, his stories are so hilarious!) and they haven't been featured. But it's on the right side right below banner shop if you want to request for a story (mine or anyone else's - we're ALL here looking for good ones!). Okay on to the rest of your lovely review: I understand what you're hoping for in this story - you want Bill and Tom's relationship to develop into a deeply romantic one, where they are seriously in love with one another. I understand, I too love the romance! I think, though, that these twincesty twins are a little different. They connect differently than most twincest stories. They love each other, they love doing sexual things together, and they may always need that connection. But they also need their individuality and their own partners. How it all might unfold, I'm not sure. I have a feeling this story, already long as it is, will be going on and on for a while, so anything might happen! I do have plans for other stories, and one is a twincest romance and one is a not-related twincest romance, so if this one has you longing for that, I apologize, but there's more in the future! I'm so glad to know that you're liking Andrej, though - I don't like unlikeable characters myself, and in this story, they all need to fold in seamlessly, so I hope it works! Now that you're finding the fun in getting more involved in the reviews and feedback, I hope to hear more! I love hearing readers' opinions and thoughts, it really makes writing so much more fun. Thank you for all your wonderful words!
Date: 01/26/13 03:15 pm Title: What Bill Wants
damn I missed 100! cruel girl, if I'd finished reading in the night I could have made it. hahaa. well, um, that second half was wayyyyy darker than I expected, but the first half was definitely sexual. Bill and Emi-I mean, Marshall. Yum.
Author's Response: Another positive vote for the Slim Shady! Yay! Not everyone is liking the guy, and I can understand that. There will be more of him coming up though, and I'm sure you'll be liking it! Sorry you missed the 100 but I'm thinking I should do a 2nd one-shot anyway, since Missy P didn't really "review!" So if you've got something you want to see, let me know :)
Date: 01/26/13 11:40 am Title: What Bill Wants
I've been looking forward to this for days! I must say I've warned to our little angel a lot, I do usually like anyone getting in between our babies but he's so sweet and I'm sure he won't be a bother c; or I hope. I've wanted a fic like this for some time, it's absolutely perfect! I love all the extra thought that's gone into writing it and an obvious personal interest shows through, as well. I hope for a happy ending for all of them, I really do! *cough*twincest*cough*
Author's Response: Subtle hint, pinkpringles? Oh, you'll get your twincest. I don't think they'll willingly give that up, for anyone. Thank you for letting me know that you're getting more used to Andrej - I don't want anyone to be so itchy over a character that it makes them stop reading. And I'm so, so happy to hear that you're enjoying this so much! (if you're looking for a certain type of story, you can always talk to me about it - I've got a couple of plans and I'm willing to think of more!) Thank you again for your review!
Date: 01/26/13 09:50 am Title: What Bill Wants
Marshall + Bill = love. Though, the fact that Marshall feels trapped now is hilarious. I'm sorry that Tom had to view awful, disgusting, slimy, gross lady parts. Andrej is much nicer than that, even if he did hide his dead mom in a pile of blankets for months
Author's Response: You likey MarshBill? Really? That makes me happy, and I will make sure their time together is super fun just for you. Bill chasing Marshall down back alleys, cornering him, ripping off his clothes....yippee! And you're very astute to notice that Andrej is much nicer than dank womanly areas. Even if he kept one!
Date: 01/26/13 04:36 am Title: What Bill Wants
Pls pls pls say that's me.................... Ohh I like were this is headin........... Da suspense is killin me
I'm #100 ryt................... So I get a one shot???????????
Author's Response: Ding ding ding ding ding ding ding!!!! We have a winner! Missy P, put in your request via email and congratulations! Although......where's the review???!!!!!
Date: 01/26/13 02:23 am Title: What Bill Wants
Wow, I knew there was going to be some great mystery with the Andrej situation, but I thought it was going to be more about him being kind of a latchkey kid who was always alone while his mother was off jet-setting somewhere and leaving him to take care of himself, and then another part of me thought that maybe Andrej didn't even really live in that building since Tom had never been up to his place-just always meeting him in the lobby, but I didn't expect such a morbid reality. I'm still not sure how I feel about that, but I'm sure you're setting us up for Andrej's new position in the Trumpero family so to speak or maybe not. Now on to Mr. Marshall Mathers, ugh, I've been really trying to digest him being in this story, as one of Bill's love interests no less, over the last couple of chapters. It's been like trying to swallow a spoonful of cinnamon- it's just not happening for me. Em(Marshall) is in no way shape or form sexy or anything else (to me), so it's really difficult for me to read the interaction between him and Bill, although you are writing it well as always. I just want this Em thing to be quick and over with so we can move on to other sexier guys like hmmm...can we say rhymes with????.....Bushido! (Oh yeah, I'm "subtle" like that, lol)I just can't express how much I can never get enough of Bill in this story, he is just so….well he's everything. I can't wait until the boys move up in age a bit so I can see how they mature and handle situations. I can't wait for the next chapter. (Disclaimer: I fully reserve the right to retract certain parts of this review after reading the next chapter) ;)
Author's Response: Happy to surprise you with the Andrej's dead mom thing! Someone said they thought maybe his dad worked for the feds, which would have been fun, too. I'm so sorry you're not liking the Marshal Mathers character! But I'll give you a spoiler, though....he is not going to be the main love interest for little Billy. He's just a plaything for now. And you've read my other stories, so I'm pretty sure you know who is waiting in the wings! I too am wishing I could rush the time line, but too much is going on! So, we'll enjoy the ride! And yes, you reserve the right to take back anything you want after reading any following chapters!
Date: 01/26/13 12:07 am Title: What Bill Wants
oohhh so sad what happen to Andrej. =(
i wish that him can quedarse with them.... and very funny about Marshall and Bill jajjaajajjaaj
Author's Response: Hola, Ninel! Espero que el pueda permanecer demaciado! Did google translate do me good there? Glad you're having fun with Marshall and Bill! I'm thinking it's going to get even better!
Date: 01/25/13 11:37 pm Title: What Bill Wants
aww, poor Andrej and poor Tom.....AND poor Bill who got punched in the face by the guy he likes XD
Author's Response: Lol.... poor EVERYONE!!
Date: 01/23/13 12:58 pm Title: Pow!
Yes!!!!!! Omg xD I'm reallly looking forward to Bill's um...efforts toward aquiring a new playmate. I was feeling pretty sorry for him that Tom still had one but he'd list his. Yes, please. Oh, and it'll be interesting if they show up at Andrej's place, too
Author's Response: Oh, Bill is going full-force after Marshall. I'm thinking Marshall doesn't know what he's in for.....
Date: 01/22/13 03:23 pm Title: Pow!
I will try to be brief this time:
1/ Opening was awesome and showering boys almost getting caught by their cousin was funny. They are playing with fire though. And Bill is def more into Tom that Tom into Bill. When Bill realizes Tom declared his love to Andrej, he will be crushed. Crushed Bill >>> I would like:-) (my sick mind plotting already) . Crushed Bill should sexual labour strike and stop pampering Tom with free sexual treats:-) Btw, Bill growing his hair I DO, DO, DO like. It's about the time:-) I need that breath taking, mysterious, dark orchid instead of a cute, silly manga hedge dog, lol:-)
2/ "Virginal milk maid" referral left me in stitches. That dog Em was checking Tom's girl too? Haha, that moment was priceless. But your description of Tom "angel" ( sorry I know only one angel and that one certainly ain't blond:-) was pretty accurate:-) I could see Milka commercial rolling right in front of my eyes ... Alpine pastures, cows painted purple and pink, bells under their necks, pretty Andrej dressed in folklore costume:-)
Andrej reluctance to bring Tom into his house is mizu's plan to make Andrej more likable, right? Abusive household? Nasty parents? Nah, can't be. He doesn't perspire that vibe to me. But, what if his dad is working for feds, hah? What then?
3/ What do you mean "... thirty minutes after the fight...." ? No details? No violence? How could you skip that part? I am disappointed:-DDD But seriously, I wouldn't mind a little of Slim Shady action. Em is clever, right, and he knows that Bill is out of reach for him. What is stirring in that pot of yours, mizu? I can't wait. Btw, "carelessly dangerous" sounds so much better that "virginal milk made", lol:-) Also, could you please give my regards to little darling Bill and tell him he should learn how to behave like a "catch" instead of like a "slut"? Gosh, I can't wait for him to grow up some more.
4/ Andy never ceases to surprise me. My heart is bleeding for the poor kid, yearning for a tiny bit of attention and love. Dog Angy is definitely a black horse in my books. When that shithead of his farther hit him, I wanted to cry. And he was so devastated when he learned he couldn't be ONE of them. Poor kid:-/
5/ Hey, you have to stop using HIM when you try to accentuate a masculine pronoun:-) I always jerk like crazy, thinking "what the f**k" , when you do:-) HIM is my favorite band and when you use those big capitals like that my free association gos hay wire:-)
6/ Thank you for regular updates, for your dedication and eagerness wanting to communicate with us, poor addicts:-) Very much appreciated indeed.
7/ Apropos soy from your last chapter discussion - you should google Sally Fallon and Western Price in general. Modern soy produce ( milk, cream, ice cream, yogurt, "meat") is NASTY. Soy sauce, miso, tempeh, tofu and all other fermented "old" foods should be generally ok. Notice that a lot of otherwise skinny vegetarian guys who eat a lot of soy stuff tend to have "male boobs".
THANKS for a great chapter!!!
Author's Response: I finally have time to respond! Sorry, after the burst water pipe and the wall and ceiling repair, I spent the last 2 days painting, and painting...and painting.... Although your lovely review has kept a smile on my face the whole time! (okay, I lied. I was NOT smiling while painting 1200 square feet of ceiling). Anyway, on to the review!rnrn1) Bill going on a sex strike? Why would he torture himself? (so tempted to write that as HIMself, haaa hahahaa!) Oh, btw I youtubed HIM since I wasn't familiar with the band. He's pretty, and now I'm going to have to find out what kind of slash fanfic there is on them...um...HIM. And this is for you: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kEH7cphEODkrnrnBill's hair is getting longer now. I'm soooo ready for them to be sixteen!!! But so much happens in these early teen years, so I've got to take it a step at a time. I have to be patient, unfortunately! But at least that means the story will go on and on for a while! rnrn2) Andrej in a Milka commercial - no better model could be found! Hair in pigtails, little blue dress, Dutch clogs....No wonder Em's tongue is lolling onto the floor like a cartoon wolf! As for garnering your sympathy for the boy....we'll have to see after the next chapter if this happens! Mizu has plans.... (rubs hands together and gives a sinister cackle)rnrn3) So you'd actually like a little violence where Em is concerned? Hmmm...I'll keep that in mind for a little treat for all your wonderful reviews.... As for Bill and his sexual attitude - he LIKES being slutty! Being a catch means getting serious about someone, and he'd just rather play with some dicks for a while (lol...total double entendre...I'm being silly). At this point, he wants to pick a cute guy and have some nice, slightly rough sex with him, then go about his day of hanging out with Tom, shoplifting, putting on makeup, playing sex games with his brother. Find another cute guy.... rnrnBesides, we know that in Mizu's stories, there's only ONE person Bill gets serious about...rnrn4) I'm so thrilled you like Andy! He'll be back, and I'll definitely keep you in mind so that I remember to feature him a little more ;)rnrn5) I'll try to stop using HIM! Shouldn't be hard, now that HIM will bring up images of that pretty singer.rnrn6) Thank you so much for mentioning the frequent updates - I'm a reader, too, and I know how disappointing it can be to enjoy a story and then wait, and wait, and wait for new chapters! I love writing these, and reviews definitely help motivate me, but even without them, I feel that if I'm going to start, I'm not going to tease! I know you're out there reading and waiting!rnrn7) Googled Sally Fallon....whoah......If I ate soy on a regular basis, I'd definitely stop. But even as a vegetarian, I only eat soy sausage once in a while. That's some good info to know! Damn!rnrnAnd thank YOU for another one of your reviews that not only made my day, but my entire week!
Date: 01/22/13 03:13 pm Title: Poppi's Boys
No I ment da purvs, toms not creepy, just hot
Author's Response: Yes, Missy P... I know. ;)
Date: 01/22/13 02:43 am Title: Pow!
Why is bill into creepy people ?........ Its weird........ When do they have sex? Ohhh ya, hay! I'm back. I nearly didn't make it but I'm here....... Loving the story, I think its my favorite not so sextual storry, ohh can't wait till the weekend 4 da next chapter, I wanna see wat happens wit bill n da boxer
Author's Response: Missy P! There you are! Glad to know you're still alive. And Tom is NOT creepy!!!!
Date: 01/21/13 10:46 am Title: Pow!
First an apology, I've only just realised I didn;t review the last chapter. The thing is, with this story there's so much to take in I always need to go away and think about what I've read and maybe read it all again before I review and I just didnt get back to it. Sorry. But here I am now and...Oh, Bill, despite how upset he was, seems he didn't really learn from Dave's beating after all. He's out there again flirting with older men and just asking for his family to have to get involved and give someone else a lesson. Of course, he probably thinks he'll be a lot more careful this time around and no one will know, but that's not how it works when there are so many eyes and ears watching and listening out for him now. After all he and Tom very nearly got caught by Frankie when they 'showered' together. Bill and Marshall - will the trainer go there when he knows the family he's dealing with and he's already had second thoughts about Andrej? Surely messing with one of the twins is even worse than messing with Tom's boyfriend. Oh, I loved - adored - Toms and Andrej's shower sex. I love how Andrej is still so bashful about being naked with Tom and how desperate Tom is for Andrej to reciprocate the BJ. And how sweet when he actually calls him Angel out loud and the 'I love you's. I wonder how Bill will react when he discovers that Tom's said 'I love you' to someone else. So funny the way both Bill and Andrej are reacting to Tom's new muscles. Oh, and what is the mystery over Andrej's home situation? Hope you're working hard on the next chapter. Okay, who am I to nag when I've only managed a couple of pages of mine. I should have made my New Year's resolution must-write-everyday. Anyway, think that's all for now. Hope all is well with you and yours. Love, Helen x
Author's Response: Hi Helen! I love how your mind works - I'm thinking it's the kind that really likes to think about things. Read something, and let it simmer, analyzing, stewing, connecting, wondering. Write something, and let it simmer, analyzing, stewing, connecting, wondering... I wish mine was a bit more like that. My brain zips and zigs and zags and jumps - it never wants to lie still. So I miss a lot! I re-read my stories and see huge plot holes because I don't take my time. I make mistakes on paperwork and at work because my mind is leap-frogging from one thing to another and skips over the details. I really would love a calmer mind that stayed in place longer! Anyway, I'm thrilled you read and wrote - I think all the things you're wondering about will be answered in the next chapter! I'm terribly excited for it (ignore any plot holes!! lol...). So you've only got a couple pages on yours?? >:\ You know you left us all with some seriously anxiety provoking images of what's going to happen to Bill!! And I know you're not done yet! you are such the sadist. Okay, I'm going to get to work on the next chapter. Although I really should be prepping the house to paint. Ain't gonna do it!!
Date: 01/21/13 10:43 am Title: Changes here and there
Naah, there is not reason to be ashamed! All fangirls are fucked up anyway :P XD I loved it..
Author's Response: Okay, whew! I'll just accept it and stop taking my meds! Thank you!
Date: 01/20/13 05:59 pm Title: Pow!
Nearly laughed my ass of at the image of Tom slipping just the tip of his dick into Andrej's slack jaw and still getting off. Bill's barely got any competition, in my opinion, but Tom seems smitten. Can't wait to see what's planned for Marshall and Bill ;) And don't think I didn't notice you being sneaky and updating on a Saturday in hopes of making me forget about my Sunday obligations ;)
Author's Response: >:\ Darn it. Marshall is lurking in the near future.... he's turning out to be quite fun!
Date: 01/20/13 12:53 pm Title: Pow!
Oh my lord this is my favourite fic out there. And now my hearts calmed down seeing as Tomi and bill are closer again c; I guess I'm not used to them sharing heh heh. Anyway! This is fabulous, fantastic and I look forward to you updating!!!!!! (Thanks for doing that so frequently by the way) keep up the long chapters, bill/Tom lovey dovey awesomeness c;
Author's Response: pinkpringles! That's too cute! Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know you're out there and that this is your FAVOURITE! (see, I even added that extra vouwel in appreciautioun! lol)....And thank you for mentioning the frequent updating. Believe me I know how frustrating it can be when authors don't, and you're all into a story and they just disappear. I spent a long time only reading finished stories, til I ran out! More B/T and the rest coming up !
Date: 01/20/13 01:01 am Title: Pow!
Bill es un coqueto no lo puede evitar!!! =) me encanta!!!!!!!! me encanta todo de este fic :D
Author's Response: No, Bill can't help it, and wouldn't even if he could! Okay, let me try this: estoy feliz de que estan disfrutando de la historia! Muchas gracias!
Date: 01/19/13 11:41 am Title: Pow!
I'm assuming the Bill/OMC is Bill/Marshall? Also, I totally loved this chapter. :) I think this whole story is really well written. Is there going to be any Billshido in this story?
Author's Response: Hello there, LittleMissSunshine! Bill/OMC is Bill and Dave, Bill and Marshall, Bill and whoever. He's out for a good time. I'm thrilled to know you're enjoying it! As for Bushido, if you've read my other stories, you have your answer. If you haven't...stay tuned!