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Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/21/12 06:49 pm Title: one of two

You started this fic with the same heartbreaking angst and sadness than you ended the forst part. It made me a bit worry that will I break my heart once again wit this, but then...
Such comforting shift in the mood and heaetwarming promise of something good, the truth, twins together. I'm so happy that you took that direction. :)
You have such a talent with carefully build up complicated emotions between the characters and express very precise feelings accurately, it's so enjoyable to read and catch every little shift in the mood.
The next chapter will be so lovely. I just know so. :)

Author's Response: Yes, I had to start where it all began. :) But they got there together, after enduring a difficult year founded on a misunderstanding! Silly Tom, what did you expect, if you gave Bill something founded on an untruth. I'm really glad you enjoyed this, thank you so much!

Reviewer: Nessie-san Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/12 12:07 am Title: one of two

You... I don't even... this fic is ALREADY amazing, and there's going to be the part two and... ajdfka;sdfakj!!! A. I can't wait for part two. B. Part one was so amazing, and sweet, and cute, and there were times I wanted to cry from sweetness, and from sadness, and from happiness, and... *sigh* It was just extremely, extremely good, and I really can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response: Yes, and part two is up! :D Sorry to make you wait so long, I was waaaaaay too busy this month. It makes me very pleased there was so much emotion swinging you back and forth! Thanks for your lovely review.

Reviewer: zeph317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 06:46 pm Title: one of two

Oh, poor boys! I'm so excited that they're getting another chance! I'm always left so sad when I read Turn Your Frown Upside Down, so I'm really happy that you're revisiting these guys.

I love the atmosphere you're creating here and all the dialogue. The cherry comment was hilarious! Way to be cheeky, Bill. ;D This is just a beautiful story all around. Can't wait to see the rest!

Author's Response: Poor boys for sure! But they grabbed that second chance and Tom has realized the error of his ways, silly man. ;) It's a shame it took him so long.

Bill just had to be cheeky like that. You know him, all sass! Thank you so much, love, glad you enjoyed it! ♥

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 03:11 pm Title: one of two

So sad that the twins have wasted a whole year while Tom tried to do the right thing. Happy that they're going to be together now. Love the sexual tension building between them. As always, your writing is amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: They really did! Sometimes they have to learn the hard way, though. Especially Tom. ;) Thanks so much and I'm very happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Muffins Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 01:51 pm Title: one of two

More! This was so cute and sweet. Hopefully it doesn't get fucked up somehow. Anywhoo. Good story so far. Next chappie soon?

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you thought so! No fucking up in this story, I promise. :) Sorry it took so long, but yes, next chapter is up!

Reviewer: ladyfarcly Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 09:07 am Title: one of two

sexy times to come Yay!!!!!
really enjoying the show .

Author's Response: Yes they are and they DID. ;) Thank you!

Reviewer: Liz_66 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 08:51 am Title: one of two

Gosh, this is so beautifully written. It always gets me when a fic is written in such a believable way. It's so easy to imagine this scenario between them. And the emotions are all the more heartbreaking because of that.

Can't wait for the next chapter, and their happy ending :)

Also, congratulations on having Signal to Noise published!

Author's Response: Thank you on all counts! It's my favorite kind of scenario, twins in love, I just can't help myself. And yes, it does make things a bit heartbreaking, but who is not a fool in love?

Thanks so much - hope you enjoy it! I'm really happy about Signal to Noise, it was amazing to get it published. :D

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 08:32 am Title: one of two

this sounds like a good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, I hope it met your expectations! :D

Reviewer: Chii-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 06:47 am Title: one of two

OMG! Yay for this story! Turn your frown was left on such a sad note, it gave me feels in my stomach every time I read it. And now there's a sequel. Yaaay!

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you're pleased! I never did intend to write a sequel, but for Kish, I had to give in. :) Thank you!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 03:58 am Title: one of two

I am soooo excited to read this! I'm gonna copy paste and read it on the beach I probably will forget to come back and review so I'm leaving a comment now! Always excited to see a new fic from you, no matter where in the world I am! Haha

The responsible think to do would be to wait a bit to buy your book, cause this trip is gonna left me totally broke. What I will probably do tho is buy it as soon as I'm back... So what if I have no money to connect my cellphone, priorities! Lol

Author's Response: I'm really happy you're excited about this, thank you so much! Ohh, I hope you did read it on the beach, how awesome. I've seen you traveling all around and I'm so glad for you, making such a great trip. What an amazing experience!

♥ Better to wait a bit and be responsible, I totally agree. ;) But the heart wants what it wants, right? Just like these lovely boys.

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/12 01:17 am Title: one of two

I went back and gave a quick re-read of TYFUD before reading this again and I was heartbroken all over again. I'm so happy about this sequel to mend my aching heart...I mean Bill's aching heart. I'm so happy he's going to finally get to have that relationship with Tom he's always wanted. I'm happy Tom has finally come to his senses and isn't willing to force them both to deny, or live without what they've wanted practically their whole lives. It's not about the sex, it's about completing each other,and being everything for one another and I love that! Thanks so much for the mention, and I can't wait to read part 2.

Author's Response: I'm happy to have something waiting to un-break your heart! Thank you, lovely. They will forever have something to hide, but it's definitely what they both want, and you are so right - it's about love and completing each other. I'm really happy you enjoyed this, thank you so much!

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