Date: 12/22/14 03:55 pm Title: Destruction
GEORG, YOU BASTARD!!!!!! MOTHERFUCKIN' PIECE OF SHIT BASTARD!!!!! CHEATING LYING DISGRACE OF A PERSON!!!!! Poor Tom! I could literally feel his pain. This story tore me up inside and that's how I know it's a work of art. I usually don't read Torg or anything besides twincest but I'm glad I gave this a chance.
Date: 10/15/12 11:43 pm Title: Destruction
I think you did a good job expressing Tom's reactions and changing emotions during his realization and confrontation. Really portrayed how infidelity is devastating and it isn't and 'I'm sorry' situation.
Date: 10/15/12 11:22 am Title: Destruction
Ooh this was good! So very sad and heartbreaking, but very well written! I am interested to know how things ended up. Have you thought about possibly making a sequel to this or even continuing it along? It's really, really good!
Anyways, great job! I enjoy your writing very much!
Date: 10/14/12 12:19 pm Title: Destruction
georg, you bastard! *shakes fist* and there is NO reason for him to make such a dick move...other than the fact that he's a dick. *hugs tom*
Date: 10/14/12 10:16 am Title: Destruction
Its a good story , worthy of a sequel
Date: 10/14/12 05:29 am Title: Destruction
Well ... i want to kill Georg right now. Hm.