Date: 02/21/13 12:59 am Title: Effect.
yeey, they're back together :) hopefully Bill would drag to to the hospital and they wont be worry so much about his wound. and that Bill kinda comforted him with his presence....damn, Tom said he loves Bill :) that's so awww.....
Date: 02/21/13 12:12 am Title: Effect.
So perfect. Had me in tears. Gosh I love them. :')
Date: 02/18/13 05:22 pm Title: Stalemate.
Oh! Well, that was cruel, but I guess it was expected to David. Too bad Tom happened to be literally in a wrong place at the wrong time. I hope he'll be alright though. He shouldn't have been there in a first place.
Date: 02/18/13 02:42 am Title: Prince.
I'm loving this story! Just finished chapter 10, not looking forward to catching up because then I'll be itching for every update like a junkie. I try not to start unfinished stories, but it looked like you update often and already had 20 chapters in, so I am chancing it. Love this Tom - you do his point of view so well. He's witty, and cocky as hell, and very self-observant. You've created one hell of a strong character. Bill's still a mystery, and that's a good balance to Tom's brusque, in-your-face personality. The story is fast-paced and a hell of a lot of fun. I'd be interested to know what characters filled the spots in your original version....
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this in-depth review <3 Stay tuned, the story is almost over!
Date: 02/14/13 08:20 pm Title: Stalemate.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH TOM ;---; dear good lord aklddak im dying too!!
i need that next chapter!!!!!!!!
Lots of Kleenex cause of tears of happiness or sadness?
dying more alasdaksjdl :'D!!!!!!
Tom not wanting to die cause of Bill just beautiful, perfect and heartbreaking ;u;
afkjajkd can't wait for the next one omg!!!!!!
Date: 02/14/13 05:41 pm Title: Stalemate.
omggggggg please upload the next chepter asap
Date: 02/14/13 05:21 pm Title: Stalemate.
yeah we're still with you. waaaaaas? kleenex? oh nie...
so sad for tom. and who are these guys ?
Date: 02/14/13 09:31 am Title: Stalemate.
Oh my god, please don't kill Tom D:
Date: 02/14/13 12:20 am Title: Stalemate.
O wow! I have my tissues, ready for the next chappie :)
Date: 02/13/13 11:11 pm Title: Stalemate.
oh, wow...good that they didn't do nothing more bad to him but even that it's not good. and even tho i can't wait to read about Bill's reaction
Date: 02/13/13 06:58 am Title: Clincher.
Now I'm really really scared. What are they (who ever "they" might be) going to do to Tom?
What's gonna happen with Bill? Maybe he has a chance of saving Tom (who cares for David anyway^^)
Date: 02/10/13 03:02 pm Title: Clincher.
Not very... hmm.. mature way to deal this from either of the guys. I'm not sure to which I'm more frustrated at. Of course it had to end like this since they couldn't deal with it like adults... or at least breath a bit.
And things are getting serious now, aren't they? Interesting... :)
Date: 02/09/13 06:51 pm Title: Clincher.
o. O
oh nein!!! i'm scared now.
Date: 02/09/13 02:55 pm Title: Clincher.
Nono, he can't go back to his old ways, he just can't!! Fuck!
Date: 02/08/13 07:10 pm Title: Clincher.
Wow talk about being in the wrong place at the wrong time :(
Date: 02/08/13 08:08 am Title: Clincher.
Great chapter!
Date: 02/08/13 05:27 am Title: Clincher.
Ugh god fucking damnit, Thomas. Ugh I'm so disappointed in him and holy fuck don't let anything happen with him! D:
Date: 02/07/13 11:05 pm Title: Clincher.
:(( this was dismal..emotional. Almost cried. Beautifully written!