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Reviewer: TuesdayReyn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/07/13 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww... Cute. Something in me goes all mushy gushy when I read the names "Tomi" and "Billa"

Author's Response: I know I love those nicknames so much. I use them whenever I talk about the twins to my friends. I use them in most of my stories. I just live how cute they are. Call me obsessed.

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/12 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 15

After thoughts - as a suggestion :)

Author's Response: I really like your suggestion. :) I can read minds and I know you're thinking I'm just saying that. I honestly like your suggestion. It's really good and I like the reference to the fact that the first one was about forgotten memories so the second could be about the thoughts occurring after this all happened.It's really creative and nice. P.S. Me and Billa have something in common: Mind-Reading and being psychic. :p

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/12 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 15

After thoughts

Author's Response: me likey :)

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/12 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 14

OMG I didn't expect that at all :(

Author's Response: no one did that why i put as a twist

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/12 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 12

I hope everything turns out awesome... maybe this is a positive step...

Author's Response: We all hope for the best

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/12 08:05 am Title: Chapter 11

i hope they can help him...there's a lot going on in that head of his...



Author's Response: Don't we know it

Author's Response: Don't we know it

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/12 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 10

he needs professional help...this isn't good for him...



Author's Response: we all wish for the bestrn

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/12 11:41 am Title: Chapter 9

he's gotta tell him...this isn't good for bill...



Author's Response: he knows it isn't good but he just feels that telling him would hurt him.

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/12 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 8

have faith tomi...i'm sure he'll eventually tell you...i know i'd sure as hell like to know...



Author's Response: only time will tell

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/12 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 7

wow...i know where he's coming from...it drives you crazy to think that you're not good enough...i hope he gets help before it's too late...



Author's Response: Don't worry I won't kill Bill. I'm not that crude.

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/12 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 6

This has got to suck for him... and of course people are going to say hurtful things... they'll just have to deal with it... but trying to kill yourself is not the answer...

Author's Response: Emotionally whacked people tend to do things that you and would never do

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/12 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 5

He's been through a lot..
I hope it gets better... at least he has tom now to help him through it all...

Author's Response: thats what twins are for

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/12 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 6

The person who asked those questions and told Bill all that crap really deserves a good stomping >.<
And Bill is quite dramatic >.> I get where he is at this point but such drastic measures :(

Author's Response: But my fans luv drama and drama means more reads

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/12 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 6

wow, that was horrible. why no one stopped those questions? well, good that Tom is like Bill's shadow so really nothing serious can happen....yet...

Author's Response: people can be cruel to those they don't know or unaware of so yes we are lucky that tom is Bill's shadow otherwise he could of seriously hurt himself and then we couldn't give him our digital hugs. :D

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/12 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 5

Bill really needs a hug. I'm liking this. Can't wait to see the rest.

Author's Response: your review gives Bill one digital hug :x

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/12 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 4

i'm a little confused...what's with Anis? if they picked bill up in california, how does he know him? that part just doesn't make sense to me...



Author's Response: It'll be explained.

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/12 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 3

it's highly possible that he gave it to himself...if anything traumatic happens it's a big possibility...i hope he figures everything out and understands that tom's there for him...



Author's Response: wow you are a true reviewer i tried this story on YouTube and all i got was "poor bill" and "poor tom" and all this useless crap that i could not stand but here i actually get reviews that leave me speechless and worth responding too

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/12 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

Its amazing how things can just come flooding back... interested...

Author's Response: thanks and it's all for a plot twist

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/12 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

That's horrible not knowing where your family is... and Bill doesn't remember them...i hope it all gets better... my only question is how old are they now? How many years have gone by since he was kidnapped? Is a good start through...

Author's Response: they are 16 bill was kidnapped when he and tom were 4

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