Date: 10/23/12 08:13 pm Title: The song of the Mermaid
You did a wonderful job writing in english! I never would've guessed you weren't a native speaker, or that you didn't have a beta. This was a wonderful little story, I just wish it was a little longer and more detaile. Keep up the lovely work! I look forward to seeing more from you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful words, you gave me a lot of energy and enthusiasm to continue doing my fics in this language. I really apreciate your words.
Date: 10/17/12 01:31 am Title: The song of the Mermaid
A beta reader is necessary, for sure. I'll even volunteer to fix the many grammar mistakes for you, because I think this is a really cool fic. It's a cool idea, and I even think you could develope it further. Even if you dont want to make it longer, this story is interesting and unique, and I had fun reading it. Poor Bill and Tom. Evil mermaid. That's crazy! Haha. Great idea. :)
Author's Response: I'm really gñlad that you offer your help. Can I contact with you by email. Because, I totally want to continue doing this in English. I write in Spanish, but it's not the same to do it in another language. I really need help with this. And thank you for reading it completely.rn
Date: 10/07/12 06:17 am Title: The song of the Mermaid
Interesting... The ending was pretty creepy and changed the nature of this whole fic, but it fitted. I think you captured well that story telling feeling in this (in a role of Tom's doctor). The result is sad, but so is the story of mermaids and sirens.
I hope you'll get yourself a beta, becauyse I know from personal experience how hard it is. I think you did well with this, though, so don't worry. :)
Author's Response: This is the first tragic fic that I wrote. My Spanish ones are more romantic and soft, but I wanted something new. I really appreciate your review. Thank you for your support, I'm really trying to get a beta, but I don't know how. But, thank you for telling me that you could understand the main plot of the fic.
Date: 10/03/12 11:44 pm Title: The song of the Mermaid
MizukiChan??? De slasheaven??? Amo todos tus fics en especial la serie de magical creatures pero no tengo cuenta y por eso no comento y con el iPod se me complica dejar review pero esta historia es hermosa y termina tan triste, la vuelta al mito de las sirenas me encanta y es original :) ... Seguí escribiendo en los dos idiomas q lo haces muy bien... Podrías traducir un par de tus fics que son buenísimos .... Besotes
Author's Response: OMG me conociste, wow eso es increible, el mundo es un pañuelo. Eres mi primer review en ingles jejeje y lo curioso es que esta en español jejeje. En fin, me encantaria traducir algunos de mis fics, pero siento que mi ingles no es tan bueno para ello. Es mas simple jejeje pero te agradezco muchisimo tus palabras. Besotes y abrazotes