Date: 02/23/26 05:16 pm Title: This Fire
I find myself crying knowing that you left the series, but hey, quite a few years have passed. I just want to tell you (yes, you read this once) that it was a wonderful story and I would have loved to read how the twins would have continued to develop until finally the realization of their feelings 🤍
Date: 07/26/18 06:58 am Title: This Fire
Noooooo I’ve come to the end. So so sad. More kits plz!
Date: 07/26/18 06:30 am Title: The Local Circuit
Just want you to know you still have readers! I’m about to come to the end of what’s written for the kits and super sad about it! Such a creative story, I wanna know where they go!! I suppose it’s too much to hope that 6 years later you’re still working on this lol. Best wishes anyway, thanks for the entertainment!
Date: 02/22/17 06:39 pm Title: This Fire
can you please please update this story with new chapters??
Author's Response: I am very sorry, but it's an abandoned story now. :( It's not what I wanted, but I had to admit the likelihood of finishing it was very low.
Date: 05/27/15 09:29 am Title: This Fire
Wow! Just read this series in 4 days, just couldn't stop. It was amazing and I am very sorry to see it abandoned. Such fantastic writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very sorry to have added the warning, I very much wanted to finish it. :(
Date: 04/07/15 04:05 pm Title: The Local Circuit
I just noticed that in warnings is " Abandoned Story". Is it true, this story won't be continued? I really hope I understand this warning completly wrong.
Author's Response: I added the "Abandoned Story" because I can't promise I'll ever finish it, unfortunately. I deeply regret leaving an unfinished story behind me, but my life is too hectic for writing at this time, and I think most of the (small) audience for this story is also gone. :( Thank you for your support!
Date: 05/19/14 04:58 am Title: This Fire
I love this story and I miss next chapters :(
Author's Response: I know, me too. I'm sorry. :(
Date: 04/14/13 05:14 pm Title: The Local Circuit
x3 I love this series!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Really glad to hear it. :)
Date: 01/19/13 07:13 pm Title: This Fire
Maybe its becuae I read this chapter on my phonne, over the course of two days, but I'm a little confuzzilated about what's happened... why was Tom so desperate for it today? Why wasn't Bill? Why are they both being so unreasonable about having it at school?
So...can you explain youko anatomy? Do they have an extra place back there, or do their anus' double?
Author's Response: It's kind of a continued theme from the last chapter...Tom's drive has been awakened with a vengeance! Bill's not quite there yet, and he's focused on the prospect of being separated from Tom which would totally kill his hard-on, lol.
Nope, not an extra place, they have, er, glands under their tails. Sorry if I wasn't clear about that!
Date: 01/18/13 11:39 pm Title: This Fire
this was a really good chapter!!
i cant wait fr the next chapter!!
Date: 01/18/13 07:15 pm Title: This Fire
this was a really good chapter!!
i cant wait fr the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter will be posted soon. :)
Date: 01/18/13 11:38 am Title: Returns
Since I've never been a very heavily read or well liked author here I haven't been surprised that interest in me is dwindling - but when I saw your most recent chapter with only three responses I was absolutely gobsmacked. You're the most talented author currently posting for THF. I'm not blowing smoke, it's simply true. There used to be a fairly decent group of good people but they've mostly wandered off. Well, at least people are still reading - that's something anyway! I have no idea why the trend to speak up afterward would diminish though. Sheesh. *shakes head*
Author's Response: They have mostly wandered off, you're right. ;) It's okay, though; I finish what I start and I want to see these boys through to the end of the story that I plotted for them. I guess it's my fault for making that storyline so long, and getting distracted by other writing projects as well!
Thanks for sticking with me, I really appreciate it, I do. :)
Date: 01/18/13 09:46 am Title: This Fire
Ah... painful, painful adolescence. Watching this pair go through it through your eyes is magical and horrifying at the same time. I have an inkling of what Tom is planning and boy howdy, is it going to be rough sailing if it's going where I think it is. It's interesting how they're maturing faster in different aspects, yet both headed in the same direction in the end. There's so much that I know about their real history that I cannot wait to see in this alternate reality, and yet for the first time the story is making me a little nervous (in the best possible way of course). I don't know where everyone's gone around THF, but I'm glad you're here and hope the low attendance around the site in general isn't discouraging you - I can't wait to continue the journey!
Author's Response: Oh yes, the hormones have struck...with a vengeance! We'll see how it goes for these precious kits. I have so much yet to unfold with their story, I wish I had more time to keep up with it! Glad it's keeping you in suspense, though. Thanks so much for your review! ♥
Date: 01/17/13 11:37 pm Title: This Fire
How in the world did I miss these kits?! I'm so sorry! I'm all caught up now and WOW! They're really growing up!
I love how determined they are, and so in love with their music and each other. You've really captured their determination to make music and succeed, and of course, the twins' devotion to each other. But, now, I'm worried about Tom and what he's going to do. They're meant to be together, but he sounds confused and oh, little kits, let me hug you. I love all the details, like how Tom thinks Bill's black ears look their father's and how Tom still wears his silly, baggy pants. They're growing up, but they are still them. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I don't know, but they missed you! They ARE growing up, for sure. Ahahahaha. Still waiting for people to freak out about some of the, ahem, physical changes.
They have an absolute drive to get to the top! But oh yes, loads of confusion, these silly boys. Hard times ahead. Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/16/13 08:49 pm Title: This Fire
As much as I'll miss the long chapters, I think the short ones pack just as much of an impact :D I loved this - both that you show the twins growing up in terms that Simone understands - physically and mentally - but also that they're maturing in other ways. I feel a bit sorry for Tom being the one hit by that kind of revlation when Bill is just snoring away but it fits. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I need to remember to stick to my outline, and not embellish so much. The twins are definitely experiencing growing pains, I would say. And yeah...Tom will do anything to protect his twin! Glad you're enjoying it, and thanks so much for the review. :D
Date: 01/16/13 06:00 am Title: This Fire
Amazing chapter. Kind of sad and funny at the same time, especially when they were in school and Tom kept wanting to jump Bill and kept getting rejected. Tom's need to protect Bill even from himself is so sweet.In a way though he's also protecting himself from the depths of his desire, because he knows he'll do absolutely anything to have Bill which gives Bill so much power over his twin. Does shorter chapters - though this wasn't exactly short - mean faster updates? I hope so. Love this story so much. Hugs, Helen x
Author's Response: Tom is getting desperate, too desperate! His sex drive has gone into overdrive or something. ;) But his drive to protect Bill is even stronger! Haha, the chapter was short compared to some of my recent ones. I do want to get into a groove of regular updates. Thanks, Helen!
Date: 01/09/13 11:44 pm Title: Returns
*befuddled look* what the?-...how the? *frowny face* why the hell haven't I read this series before now?!?! It is AMAZING! I am so sorry I haven't been here from the beginning. It has been a real treat seeing the kits grow. I gotta say Simone was really ticking me off for a bit and, as much as I agreed with him, Gordon wasn't much better. But they seem better now.
Ok...now...why was I thinking Jorg was a blonde too? I was very shocked by Toms admission to Bill about him looking like Papa with his ears dark.
Fantastic work so far. There's too much amazingness to even summarize how glorious it is. Hopefully now I've caught up ill be able to give you something more detailed and helpful next chapter.
Keep up the fantasmagorical procedings.I can't wait to see more
Author's Response: Probably waiting for me to finish it first. ;D It HAS taken me nearly four years to get to this point, after all. Glad you're reading now, though, and very pleased that you are enjoying! Oh, Simone and Gordon have definitely been struggling with how to raise a pair of youko kits, for sure.
Jorg was black-haired! So, yeah, it came as a surprise to Tom to see the ears dark, too.
Thanks very much! Ah, glorious will keep me happy. ;) I appreciate it, and I'll try to get that next chapter out soon!
Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy what's to come. :)
Date: 12/27/12 11:32 pm Title: Returns
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've got to get that posted, huh. ;)
Date: 12/10/12 10:18 pm Title: Returns
Where the heck is everyone? Well, I'm here and going nowhere fast. It's finals week and a new chapter is exactly the distraction I needed, thank you! Tom's behavior is deeply worrying me, although in the most delicious possible way.
Author's Response: I don't know! What I do know for sure is that the reviews have been dwindling steadily ever year but the reads have stayed pretty consistent, haha. People just don't want to tell me what they think anymore. Tom's behavior is definitely worth scrutiny...things are going in a different direction... Glad to distract you so pleasantly!
Date: 12/06/12 04:08 am Title: Returns
wait wait, you're not going to put us through them separating for year 13 are you??? D:
Author's Response: Hmm, it all depends on the twins at this point! ;D