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Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/12 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 7

i think i'm gonna love geo and gus in this one. so now what's so special about tom being able to read bill's spells, hmmmm?

Author's Response: Geo and Gus only have a small appearance in this one, but yeah, over-protective brothers, Big Time. ;) And I'll answer your question, I promise! *huggles you* (PS- I updated, hope ya like it!)

Reviewer: THE Queen of Bad Puns Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/12 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hurry and update! Can't wait to see where this is going!

Author's Response: LOL! I updated...was that quick enough??

Reviewer: THE Queen of Bad Puns Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/12 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hurry and update! Can't wait to see where this is going!

Author's Response: PS- I appreciate you leaving some love!

Reviewer: Gretty Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/12 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh, this was awesome! "Silly bat!" That's hilarious :) Poor Tom, I'm glad he's fine now. And wow, he really called Bill "that beautiful man." I like that! I can imagine the smile Bill was wearing when he told Tom that water will be fine. I think that it was kind of a cheeky, sexy and dazzling grin. Georg and Gustav seemed quite worried haha. I wonder if bill's mom knows what to do (or the reason of Bill being there - and lost.) And, yeah! Tom was sorry for behaving in such a nasty way. It was a little funny how he acted that grumpy. :) I feel bad for him because he dropped that bottle on his foot, though. Perhaps he wanted to get that "beautiful man" drunk? :D But fortunately, Bill made his pain go away.

This story is so catchy, I can't wait to read more. I'm happy that the updates are going to come more frequently from now on because I'm not very patient :D Also, I've never read a fic which was WIP before. It feels great to do it! I'm eagerly looking forward to reading more.

PS: I'm glad you like me and my reviews and don't worry, there's nothing wrong with that (when I find the person alright, I get attached very quickly!) And I like you as well :) Hugs!
I'm sure it will be astonishing to read a chapter of this on the Halloween night! (even though there's no Halloween in my country, I still celebrate with a few friends because I love it too much.)

Author's Response: *huggles* I am so glad that you like it! I've worked very hard on it, and the story is complete, but still under revision, so that's what's been taking so long! Ugghhh, I hate revising! Anywho, I did update again tonight, and I hope that perhaps some of your questions will be answered. And it honestly makes me sad that your country doesn't have Halloween! It's the magical day made for fat kids like me- FREE CANDY!! LOL, jk, but I do have to participate in all things Halloween. I'm a single mom, so I have to take the kiddo out for trick or treating, and I work in the beauty industry, so right about this time of year, the business THRIVES on Halloween goodies, so I do have to dress up for work. And did I mention CANDY was involved?!? lol *huggles you*

Reviewer: ingold Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/12 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 6

This is so cute. I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I just updated, and I do hope you enjoy the next chapter! *huggles you*

Reviewer: BillsFreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/12 11:40 am Title: Chapter 6

to respond to your question in the response, I loved this chapter too - though nothing much happened - but I could clearly picture Bill walking around uhh-ing and aww-ing at all Toms decorations, very cute mental picture ;) and I was wonsering how the G's were gonna fit into all this and I can totally picture them as Bills annoying/protective older brothers :)



Author's Response: Yay! I am glad that you loved it! I've worked super hard on this! Moving on, I've just posted another chapter... ;) Enjoy!

Reviewer: CrimsonClaudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/12 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1

I know they arnt real lol dosnt make me want them any less :-P

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/12 07:47 am Title: Chapter 6

this was a nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hopefully I didn't keep you waiting too long. The next chapter is up! ;)

Reviewer: Tokio4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/12 07:45 am Title: Chapter 6

haha xD frogs *giggle* gotta love tom's subconscious xD



Author's Response: LOL, you can blame the banner maker, Lizard for the frogs. She wanted frogs, she got 'em. :D Anywho, I just posted, and I do hope you enjoy the next one! *huggles you*

Reviewer: Irene Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/12 05:24 am Title: Chapter 6

poor poor Tom ha ha! he doesn't even have the relief of a drink, too bad. but maybe it's better if they have just water, who knows if a drunk bill would not make him hiccup frogs. what makes me laugh hard is that Bill doesn't hurry to scare Tom with his powers and looks just as puzzled in this new world as Tom is towards him.

Author's Response: Perhaps a drunk Bill would make him hiccup frogs..lol. And yes, Bill IS puzzled about Tom's world and vice-versa. But, I do hope you are enjoying this- I just updated, and I hope you like the newest chapter!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/12 01:23 am Title: Chapter 6

xD this Bill is super adorable!!! Tom needs to start being cooler. i would have thought he'd be excited, since he likes Halloween and all...ungrateful :P haha

Author's Response: Hahhaaha! You make a very valid point! *huggles you* Thanks for leaving me some love, and JSYK, I just updated. Enjoy!

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/12 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 6

*cackles* geo and gus are witches too! *falls on floor*

Author's Response: Big Brother witches at that! Anywho, I just updated, please enjoy the next chapter. Also! I wanted to thank you for showin' some love! *huggles you*

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/12 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 6

Lolzz frogs. Gross. But very telling of Tom's thoughts.

I'm gonna be honest here and straight up tell you, it irks the heck ot of me when people makes the Gs siblings to one of the twins. Occasionally one will work, but I've yet to see a story where both Gs were brothers to Bill or Tom that I thought it worked well. Friends? Great. Cousins? Sure. But its not so bad that I'll stop reading or anything.

I do love the squinty protective Gs though. And then the 'were telling moom' 'no you aren't I'll tell her your secrets' was hilarious, if a little explosive.

Poor Tom *pets head* lil guy's in shock. Fantastic work. I am anxious to see more. Particularly that convo with Mom.

Author's Response: I am so sorry that you don't like the G's as Bill or Tom's brother(s). If it helps, that will be explained in Chapter 8. Also, just posted chapter 7, I hope you enjoy! ;) *huggles you*

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/12 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 6

poor tomi...and protective brothers...at least they're not killing each other...



Author's Response: True! *huggles you* PS- newest chapter is up and ready to go! Enjoy!

Reviewer: CrimsonClaudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/12 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 6

-falls over in a giggle fit- thats awsome XD

Author's Response: *huggles you* I am glad that you liked it! PS- I updated ;)

Reviewer: BillsFreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/12 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 5

This is so cute and funny - I love the characters, I think this will be interesting :D



Author's Response: Well, I am glad that you like it! *huggles you* I updated, so hope you like that one, too!

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/12 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 5

This is the most adorable Halloween fic ever :). Bill is beyond adorable and Tom is just... Tom haha. Can't wait for next chapter. Even the spiders are cute and I normally hate spiders :D

Author's Response: I hate spiders, too. :( Anyways, I am glad that you liked it! *huggles you* PS. Next chapter is up!

Reviewer: LilKatie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/12 04:50 am Title: Chapter 5

I've just read it whole at once and it's really great! :)

Author's Response: Well, I am glad that you liked it! *huggles you* Thanks for leavin me some love, and ps- I posted the next chapter! ;) ENJOY!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/12 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 5

Awww, as much as I hate bugs and spiders, the Chitters sound kinda sweet and cute. *nod*

I loved the magical lawn make over. Magically carved pumpkins...that would've been so convenient when I was younger, no cleaning them out, no worry about shakey hands breaking a delicate part...and I loooved that Bill picked the lumpy bumpy one to carve. My mom always liked those, especially ones with 'warts', she says it gives them character.

Well, I hope Tom's finally got stuff through his head, and the freak outs will calm down a bit. he did say he believes Bill now, at least. So its a start.

I'm very curious about where Bill/his magic decided the right place for the pictures was. Keep up the fantastic work! I can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Your mother is correct on her theory! ;) And I hate spiders with a passion! If you follow me on Twitter- you will see me tweet every once in awhile about epic battles against them...lol. And so, I updated, and I'm not quite sure that the spot for the pictures is in Chapter 6, but I do mention it in like 7, I believe. But! Thank you again for all your support! *huggles you*

Reviewer: Gretty Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/12 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 5

I loved those Chitters! They seem very pretty and harmless :) When does the NC17 part come haha? I'm eagerly looking forward to reading it. Hugs!

Author's Response: I proooomise, NC-17 will happen! ;) *huggles you* PS- chapter 6 is up!

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