Date: 10/02/12 10:44 am Title: Chapter 9
sweet chapter :)
cant wait for moooore :)
Author's Response: So happy you're enjoying. :)
Date: 10/02/12 05:05 am Title: Chapter 2
hahaha, right, Talann and Berlin :) i loved their scene at the beginning.... "Keep your mind on the assignment!"
then inside when he and feather were arguing, so funny, i don't see the mission lasting long with them clashing like that but i'll come back and see how it goes.
Author's Response: I guess boys will be boys no matter what! lol The mission might just last longer than you think. Glad you keep returning and reading. Thank you for the review. :)
Date: 10/01/12 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
before i start reviewing i just wanna say that i didn't read this when you first posted because the character death warning put me off, (i'm a bit weird about that) but i've decided to give it a chance now, having liked it initially until i saw the warning anyway.
Okay, now i can start... This seems a little like Alice in Wonderland to me at the moment, or at least in the sense that your two main characters just fell down a hole.
speaking of the two girls, i like them, they're so funny...especially when talking about the neighbours two gorgeous sons, hehe! I love that the eldest girl wants to break into their home and raid Bill's closet (can't say i blame her, he's got some awesome clothes :) not that i agree with breaking in just to stare at them.)
i found it so funny that they were standing outside arguing over which of them could have Bill and deciding that the one he turned down could take Tom. Poor Tom, i felt so sorry for him, i don't think he'd appreciate being anyone's second choice, especially not when their first choice was his brother HAHA! Talk about a kick in the teeth.
i'm guessing that they save the day and this is all a dream of some kind, then again if it is then i'm supprised Bill isn't head fairy or something like that given how taken with him they both are.
i'll be back to read the rest and leave more reviews. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you took a chance on this story. I don't normally write fantasy but this was fun.rnrnI guess it probably does seem a little like Alice. It was hard to come up with a good starting concept that allowed them to be sucked into the Underworld. I know it's far-fetched but the whole story is far-fetched! lolrnrnI'm glad you like my characterization of the girls. I wrote this as the 'prize' in a contest I ran on another site. I took the top two stories and wrote this for the girl's who wrote them. I love making my female characters as strong and independent as I can. rnrnDon't feel too sorry for Tom. He can hold his own. You'll just have to be patient. :)rnrnMaybe it's a dream and maybe it isn't. Guess you'll just have to read on to find out. I couldn't in all fairness make Bill the head fairy that would be too cliche I think. lolrnrnThank you so much for reading and for the amazing review. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much. :)
Date: 09/30/12 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
loved the story very much from the beginning and cant wait for moooore :)
please uppdat soooon :)
cant wait :):*
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it. Thank you so much for your review. It is much appreciated. :)
Date: 09/29/12 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG why didn't I see this before??? And It already has 5 chapters? I have just read chapter one and now I'm inlove*.*.(lol Quenn Titiana was Adam Lambert?XD)
I have just read chapter one and now I'm inlove*.* I like your writing style and the story seems interesting... Now Im gonna read the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I\'m so very glad you enjoyed the first chapter. Hope the rest will keep you equally interested. :)