Date: 12/11/13 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
hey hey hey , i really really like the first five chapters, i mean the story could easily fall into the all " i was heart broken then i built a wall to protect myself, and i hate my ex but somehow i still love him" thing but i don't know somehow you managed to give ur caracters something really atractive, and create a little mystery; i mean i love even it's a little cliché. Anyway will post the next chapters or no ? thanks and sorry for my english im french
Author's Response: Thank u! I'm happy ur liking this. I plan on posting another chapter but not sure when it will be. Hope u will still be waiting.
Date: 12/10/13 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
Please update soon. I love this story!
Author's Response: Thank u! Will update as soon as I can.
Date: 11/18/13 04:26 am Title: Chapter 5
They are so cute and yet so frustrating. Very much enjoying this story, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Awe thank u! I'm happy ur enjoying this.
Date: 11/18/13 04:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, interesting little twist there at the very end.
Date: 11/13/13 12:49 am Title: Chapter 5
I got so excited when I saw that you had updated this :) can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank u! I'll have more up as soon as I can.
Date: 11/12/13 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
I want more :(
Author's Response: I'll be working on that for u. Thank u!
Date: 11/12/13 10:56 am Title: Chapter 5
I guess their date didn't went well as it was planed but maybe next time it will ;)
Author's Response: Maybe so, we shall see :) Thank u!
Date: 11/12/13 01:49 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow do.keep writing this is great
Author's Response: I don't have any intentions of abandoning this. Hopefully my next update won't take so long. Thank u bunches for reading/reviewing.
Date: 11/11/13 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh man I'm so happy this was updated! Really looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank u so much!
Date: 11/11/13 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm feeling like a junky who got their fix. You have no idea how excited I was to see your update! Anywayz, I feel kind of bad for Tom. I kinda wish Bill would just get over it because they were so young when it all happened but I can't blame him for thinking Tom is an asshole. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I'm hoping u weren't too disappointed after waiting so long. There wasn't anything too interesting in this chapter. I felt like I owed my readers at least something. I agree that Bill should definately get over it. And he will. I just didn't want him to just all of a sudden become someone he's not. I think in reality it would take some time to gain Tom's trust again. And even tho on the inside he's lost the battle of completely hating Tom, he's still trying to be hard on the outside. I'll really try not to leave u hanging for such a long time again :)
Date: 04/24/13 02:47 am Title: Chapter 4
Awww, little Tommy broke little Billy's heart :'( I really want them to kiss, but I don't want it to be all better yet...maybe get caught up in a moment, but then back to reality...something. I just want kissing xD
Author's Response: The kiss could definitely be arranged :) As for Bill, he's being a bit to hard headed to do any forgiving anytime soon. Thanx so much for reading and leaving ur thoughts.
Date: 04/20/13 01:13 am Title: Chapter 4
Damn Tom and his past and his being devious in getting his way! I honestly like how Bill isn't just falling all over Tom but is remembering the hurt and now resisting as much as he can. Good chapter, can't wait for next update.
Author's Response: Thank u! I'm happy ur liking this :)
Date: 04/19/13 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
I FRICKEN LOVE RUBY!!! Awww, poor Bill no wonder he sort of hates Tom, but hopefully they can move past it? Was the girl from the flash back the same girl who was trying to talk to Tom in the lunch room when he was staring at Bill. Anyway, loved it, can't wait until you update again:)
Author's Response: I love Ruby too. She's such a cool, laid back granny lol. The girl in the shop is jus some nameless little hoochie from middle school. It didn't even occur to me to make her character one of the present. As for Bill, well, he's just too stubborn to move on and get over what's been done to him...for now anyways. Anywho, i'm happy that ur still into this :) Thank u!!
Date: 04/12/13 04:58 am Title: Chapter 3
This chapter was really good, I like how Tom's friends realise what's going on between them, just as Bill's friends realise too. I also like how Bill said he would think about admitting his feelings to himself, even if that was supposed to be a sarcastic comment to his friend. I think Tom's fab, though. This is well written and I can't wait for more of this, it's amazing! xxxxx
Author's Response: Thank u bunches :)
Date: 04/12/13 12:37 am Title: Chapter 3
Omg, I want to slap them both silly! You need a knife for the tension. Interesting is the right word alright...looking forward to reading more banter between these two and to see what happens next chapter! Thanks for the update :)
Author's Response: Lol, thank u!
Date: 04/11/13 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love/hate cliffhangers!!! Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: I hate reading them but I sure do love writing them :)
Date: 04/10/13 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ohh, I really like it!
I can't wait for the next chapter and see where their "relationship" is heading... Well ok, I do have some ideas ;-) Haha, hoping for more really soon x
Author's Response: Awesome! Thank u!
Date: 04/09/13 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like it! Please update soon! :)
Author's Response: I will definitely try and update very soon :) Thank u!
Date: 04/09/13 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG! I am soooooo in luv with this story already.... Up date quickly please.... I miss it already....:)
Author's Response: Thank u!! Hopefully u will continue to love it as it goes on :)
Date: 04/09/13 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG!!!! Totaly love this!!!!! Sooooo good!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm happy that u are xD