Date: 09/25/12 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 24
I felt so sorry for her getting attacked by the stalker but at least she's got a nice knight in shining armour to swoop in and take her away from all the stress, I've noticed he has a habit of doing that :)
i hope there isn't a horrible ending between the three although it does seem very unlikely since this has been such a calm story for the most part. Only one way to find out though, i'll come back and check it out
Author's Response: I know, I hated writing about her attack. It was hard because I try to write stories that are as true to life as I can but because I originally posted this to a PG-13 website, I had to go easy. I never know where my muse is going to take me and this story dragged me into places I've never been. Sorry, sometimes I ramble.rnrnTomorrow will be the final chapter so I hope it won't disappoint. Thank you so much for reading and especially for being my number one reviewer. I truly appreciate it. :)
Date: 09/25/12 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 23
And of course when you say nothing can go wrong it normally does haha no, i'm kidding, why ruin the nice ending :) Oh and i just wanted to share how much i loved Bill this chapter, so funny "Show me the ring and then get out and don't you ever wake me up again!" awww, he's just not a morning person is he? lol it was so sweet.
Date: 09/25/12 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 22
I wasn't expecting that at all they're getting married HAHA! This is such a nice story and i actually find myself glad things are finally working out for them after all they've been through.
This was such a nice chapter, it made me laugh quite a few times. - Tom's better than therapy, I kissed you because you're wonderful,,, but my favourite " Good news, derek hung himself!" LOL!
Anyway i've just noticed i'm behind on your story so i'm off to catch up, Thanks for cheering me up :)
Author's Response: I am so glad that I could cheer you up. If I made you laugh then I have succeeded in what I set out to do. rnrnThis is actually one of my favourite stories that I've written. Thank you for reading and for reviewing. You cheer me up every time you do. :)
Date: 09/22/12 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 21
thats not the end is it? i hope not it was a bit of a strange place to end
Author's Response: Nope, not the end. Four chapters to go! And yes, it would have been a strange place to end the story. :)
Date: 09/22/12 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 19
Love it, loved the story their mum told to make her feel better. I loved that she called them "My two peas in a pod" (or two pods in a pea! XD) so sweet, this was such a nice chapter, seems like everythings turning out just right :)
Author's Response: Let's hope it stays that way. I am so happy that you love the story. I thought she might have a little trouble with her English so... :)
Date: 09/22/12 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 18
Awww look at him just drop everything to be with her despite the fact they were playing a world tour, True she's been through an extremely traumatic ordeal but at the same time, the way that he'd just put his life on hold to be with her is so sweet its almost romantic.
Wait a minute... Romantic? and Tom? never thought i'd say that, those words don't mix lol Awww he loves her :)
Author's Response: I know! I never thought I'd see the day that Tom would be romantic either. I wonder if he is in real life now that he's settled down and isn't being such a man whore. I like writing Tom as a romantic sap because I don't think he's actually like that. Thank you for reading and reviewing. It means a lot. :)
Date: 09/22/12 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 17
I knew there was something weird about that guy although she didn't actua
lly cheat like i thought she would. I wonder how she'll get out of this, I mean I'd love for Tom to come charging in to the rescue but sadly he's off somewhere playing a tour *Sigh* oh well that idea was much too mushy to be realistic anyway, guess i'll just go and read. :)
Author's Response: It would be lovely if Tom could be her knight in shining armour but alas, I don't think that will happen. I hope you aren't going to hate me when you read the next chapter. :(
Date: 09/22/12 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 15
I was almost worried then, i thought maybe she'd go for a drink with that guy, i had visions of her going behind Tom's back and leaving him devastated, poor boy, he'd only just decided to calm down and be the sweet kind and caring boyfriend he secret;y is HAHA Oh great now i'm jumping to conclusions, the guy just made sure she was ok and left
Author's Response: Hopefully she'd never cheat on Tom. Maybe she was just enjoying the attention because she hadn't really had it before she met Tom. Guess you'll just have to read more to find out. :)
Date: 09/22/12 08:25 am Title: Chapter 14
NO!! Tom just promised to behave *Sob* what has this woman done to him?!! :(
No i'm kidding, its really sweet but i'm wondering, if Tom decides to calm down and be with the girl... who's gonna take over with all the cheeky comments HAAAAAAA
Author's Response: Maybe she'll take over for him! :) Naw, Tom will always be there with his cheeky comments I bet. :)
Date: 09/22/12 08:05 am Title: Chapter 13
okay its offical, when even bouncy little Bill is telling you to calm down, you've had too much to drink lol i loved that it was so funny she was going round asking everyone to dance with her and then when Tom finally got her a little more sober she asked him to stay home and have sex with her instead of going on tour lol
Author's Response: True, true. You know you're very inebriated when Bill wants you to calm down. It was such much fun to write Beka being drunk. :)
Date: 09/22/12 06:39 am Title: Chapter 9
can i just say i love Bill here,it was so funny how he was bouncing around going, "i'll take you shopping i'll do your hair, i'll find you clothes!" i love it he's just so sweet and the way he made her into a mini Bill had me laughing out loud. so wishing i could go hang out with him right now lol it sounds fun.
Author's Response: You can say anything you like. :) I love to write Bill like that. I always wonder if he's anything like that in real life. I want him to take me shopping. :)
Date: 09/22/12 12:37 am Title: Chapter 6
I love their relationship, the sarcasm is just so funny and I love Tom now that he knows who he is, his little comments are awesome lol
I can't belive she's had Tokio Hotel stuff in her house all the time and she didn't recognise... oh wait the CD's were burned and wouldn't have had covers, ok forget i said that :)
Author's Response: When I wrote this, I could hardly wait until Tom got his memory back so I could start writing the sarcastic Tom. :) I'm glad you remembered that everything she had of TH's was burned. I almost forgot that when I was writing it! :)
Date: 09/22/12 12:17 am Title: Chapter 5
And at last i think he's got it :)
Author's Response: Yup, he's a little slow on the uptake but eventually he catches on. :)
Date: 09/21/12 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
I don't remember if this is alternate universe or not but i've decided that Tom either had an accident of some sort, which either involved a fall or walking into the sea. Then again i guess he could either have been fighting with Bill and fallen or been pushed from somewhere by someone who was jealous of their success, i mean they wouldn't be the same without Tom.
I love that there's someone caring for him though, its all so nice
Author's Response: I never thought of having Tom fighting with Bill and falling or being pushed. I like that idea and may use it in future! :) It's true that TH definitely wouldn't be the same without Tom. I really appreciate you reading and reviewing. Danke. :)
Date: 09/21/12 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Like it, i was looking for more memory-loss stories here a day or so ago, i've read most of them so you wrote this just at the right time, i love how you've written it too, so detailed, i could litterally see Tom washing up on the beach there.
I love it so far, i'll definately read the rest and review as i go.
Author's Response: I'm so glad I could oblige you with a new memory-loss story. We must have been on the same wave length! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I hope it doesn't disappoint. :)
Date: 09/21/12 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 19
I love the way you write Bill's enthusiasm for life; I can almost see him bouncing into a room and hugging everyone in sight. I'm happy that Tom loves Beka so much and vows to go after the men who raped her. I'm sure it will take time, but with the love of her new family hopefully she'll make a full recovery.
Author's Response: Thanks Helen. I had such a good time writing this story and am really glad you are enjoying it. :)
Date: 09/21/12 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 18
This was such a harrowing chapter. The rape was brutal. So sad that Rebekah blames herself. I'm so glad Simone is there for her.
Author's Response: It was a hard chapter to write let me tell you. Thanks for reading and reviewing Helen. It means a lot to me. :)