Date: 12/16/12 02:19 pm Title: Of less than two minutes
Oh gosh I am loving this... my sick mind is enjoying your story's development very, very much! Well crafted drama and unexpected complications in love nest are never, never wrong. And you know your game, playing it (writing it) like a pro:-)
I could see this coming, actually - I mean reappearence of Laura the tramp. Wouldn't have been so much fun, hadn't you teased us a little, would it?:-)
I was a little surprised though how off-ish Tom was after the visit to Bill's parents. I love how totally unpredictable everythig in this story of yours is, but still, it has that ever present aura of realness and naturalism to it. Loving it!
And, and...gerbils' part is priceless! Can't stop snickering every time you mention them. Geo's gerbils>>> Tom's Tom gerbil>>> total love:-DDD
More, please!
Date: 12/16/12 02:06 pm Title: Of meeting the parents
I would love to see Bill dressed up like that, he must have been a killer, and Tom too btw:-)
Super chapter, super!
Date: 12/16/12 05:54 am Title: Of less than two minutes
Noooooo, it's supposed to be Bill and Tom :((((( No Laura. :(
Date: 12/16/12 02:03 am Title: Of less than two minutes
well. seems we'll all be a bit sick now :/ Bill's off whoring around and Tom's being stupid. Damn. Hope you feel better soon, though, so you can write more and fix it? :)
Date: 12/16/12 01:28 am Title: Of less than two minutes
I get Bill being pissed, but they weren't actually in a relationship.
At least Tom recognizes he doesn't like Bill being with another guy. He just has to figure out how to explain things to Bill and get Bill to listen. Tom seeing more of Laura will not be helpful for that. smh
Date: 12/15/12 09:56 pm Title: Of less than two minutes
Bad Tom, bad!! You're supposed to love Bill!!
Date: 12/15/12 05:49 pm Title: Of less than two minutes
oh, wow....that was unexpected hehe
i thought everything would be good between Bill and To and there was a call from Tom's fiance. wow...i hope Tom will clear up this situation between him and Bill....and his fiance.
Date: 12/15/12 03:20 pm Title: Of less than two minutes
WHAAAAAAT NOOOOOOOO
Date: 12/15/12 12:59 pm Title: Of less than two minutes
omfg, LOVE the chapter!! xx
Date: 12/15/12 12:35 pm Title: Of less than two minutes
I can't believe you D: It was all so promising and now this. I need next chapter now, and then the next one and the next one.... Poor Tom.
I am curious what will happen now. Bill didn't let finish Tom the truth and now is Bill sleeping around obviously.... He will regret it soon, I am sure, hope he will find out somehow that Tom was single.
I am sorry you are sick, hope you will feel better soon. /sends you a virtual chicken soup/
Thank you for this chapter :)
Date: 12/15/12 12:02 pm Title: Of less than two minutes
Hope you get better soon! I'm loving the path you're taking with this story and can't wait for more! :)
Date: 12/12/12 03:33 pm Title: Of meeting the parents
haha, how cute. they are still at a bit of an odd point in their relationship, but I agree that Tom's a keeper. ;)
Date: 12/11/12 03:43 pm Title: Of ends and new beginnings
meeting the parents! well, I certainly didn't expect that. wow. love the surprises :).
do we get to know what brought that on at some point?
looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 12/10/12 01:35 am Title: Of meeting the parents
This is getting very interesting, looking forward to more!
Date: 12/09/12 08:36 pm Title: Of meeting the parents
wow...that was super :) Tom definitely had a nervous time during that dinner and till some to go :) and maybe it wouldn't be that bad if instead a lie they would be really boyfriends
Author's Response: ^^ glad you liked it
Date: 12/09/12 06:05 pm Title: Of meeting the parents
WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG? You worried me. I can't even blame transportation this time.
On the other hand, this chapter was a real plot twist. Meeting his parents was one thing, and Bill's father is another.
...Seems like a genuine asshole.
Anyways, don't scare me like that again, I love this fic too much to bare. Also, keep up the good work, Lovie. I can't wait for the next chapter x3
Author's Response: Real life got in the way :/rnrnbut... THANK YOU <3<3
Date: 12/09/12 11:53 am Title: Of meeting the parents
Awesome chapter. I just wish it was longer, because I begin to read an suddenly over. :(
I didn't expect that Tom will meet Bill's family so soon. It was kind of funny, I wonder what story told Bill his mum about their "relationship". Something boring probably. So Bill is in the closet about make up and there things? And has a car and doesn't use it, interesting...
Thank you for update, next one soon please :)
Author's Response: I know, but I had to cut it somewhere...rnrnNot using your car much is rather common amongst young people in Berlin. Plus, Bill dragging Tom out there by train would have given Tom way too much possibilities to leg it XD
Date: 12/09/12 10:55 am Title: Of meeting the parents
Aaaaaaaw adorable!! Love the chapter!! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks you :))))
Date: 12/09/12 10:50 am Title: Of meeting the parents
I almost died laughing during this whole chapter. I'm sure Georg was laughing at the situation as well. I'm loving Bill's character more and more with each chapter. I love how he completely makes up for Tom's lack of knowing what to do in this entire situation that has become his life. I really hope you post again soon. I was so happy when I saw you got featured :D And I'm hoping Bill keeps good on his promise to suck Tom off immediately afterwards ;)
Author's Response: Believe me, this one was fun to write, too ^^rnrnThanks, and yes, IŽll try to keep Bill focused on that task ;)
Date: 12/09/12 09:35 am Title: Of meeting the parents
"YouŽre a man" I have a feeling RL Bill has heard that at least once XD So funny.
Author's Response: This. Or: "YouŽre a man?!"